Penname: Natori aka R [Contact]

Real name: R.

Member Since: July 23 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am an avid reader of both non-fiction and fiction books.  I also love reading online fiction stories.  I like surfing the web to research topics of interest and frequenting my favorite websites. 


 



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Summary:

 

A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

After being hired as the executive assistant to one of the youngest most influential and sexy corporate raiders of the 21st century Kenya Price comes face to face with her destiny.

 

Kenya is a mild mannered 22 year old thick sista with a beautiful soul and a caring spirit. Though her ultimate goal is to go back to university and earn a Degree in Childhood Education to become an Elementary school teacher, she takes the job working at the Roswell Corporation so she can save and finish off her schooling. Her motto is "Love can heal all wounds."

 

Grant Abraham Roswell III is a man that prides himself on a being a level headed, hardworking, no nonsense go getter. At the age of 24 he is a MIT graduate with more money than he could spend in a lifetime, he parties with rock stars, sleeps with models and feels that life cant get any better than that.His moto in life is "Who needs happiness when you have Money and Power?"

 

When Kenya enters his life and shows him there is more to life. Will he trust in Love or Will he let society take love away from him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 20252
Read Count: 76192
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: April 29 2013


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was hot but very sensual loving.  Why was he shocked that they went there?  Perhaps, he wanted to propose before making love to her?  I kind of thought he would do it at the restaurant.  Good chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wonderful update. I decided to read from the beginning to refresh my memory.  I know what is going to happen next and I can't wait to read it so hopefully it won't take too long for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

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Date: April 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 290]
Summary:

 

A Special Thank You to MINX for the AMAZING banner.

Alicia meets Nick and they begin a Journey full of love, forgiveness and Passion. From two different worlds their love bridges the culture gap and emotional walls come crashing down. This is a Story of faith and love in its purest forms.

Alicia is in her third year of nursing school, at 23 she is more than ready to take on the real world after moving to New York far away from her overprotective family where she is learning to depend more on herself and taking big steps to her independance.

Nick is a first generation Chinese-American living in New York, at 25 he is done pleasing everyone but himself, he was to be a doctor like his father and for most of his life he spent his days and nights studying and working at that goal... In the last year before his graduation from medical school Nick decides to take a break and
somehow how ended up buying a club with his bestfriend Sean. one year later Nick is conflicted though he loves his life the one he made for himself he misses his family and he even misses medical school. After his little detour from the path his father wanted him to take his family relationships are strained at best. Alicia teaches him the meaning of forgiveness and shows him that its time to let go of the past to embrace the future. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 15038
Read Count: 39306
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aw, I loved this chapter. They are a sweet couple.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 124730
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow...this is kind of amazing. Incredible love scenes. I love all the Nichetti men but some I love more than others. Right now, I'm loving Christopher.  And I'm really liking Luciano....he and Avani are so cute.   I started reading this on the site a long time ago but decided to start over and catch up on this site. I am not disappointed. This was not a difficult chapter to read but it's still sad what happen...and I can kind of tell where it might be going next. Good work.

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Date: July 10 2012

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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38777
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Ten- Kiss Me

Cute *couple.*  Funny...I had just saw this story the other night and realized that it hadn't been updated in a while.  I'm still interested in the story so let the updates continue.



Author's Response:

Yeah real life sort of took over! Not an excuse I know but it's all I got. I'm glad you're still interested. Thanks for the reply.

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Date: January 01 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Eleven Part One- Tailspin

Oh wow...didn't expect that ending.  So Gina gave the boy a little taste, lol.  I can't wait until the next chapter.

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Date: January 31 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

At the Chicago Day Times, columnist Maxine Baker goes through the same routine everyday and wants a change. She really wasn't expecting murder. New shoes or a cute guy sure, but not murder....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Mystery
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11989
Read Count: 47481
Published: June 02 2010
Updated: September 19 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't know how I missed this story; though short I really enjoyed it. Every now and then I like to read a little mystery and suspense.  And damn, Adam Rodriguez is so FINE!  I love rare gems where the black heroine is paired with a hot sexy latin(o) man.  

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Date: February 03 2013

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[Reviews - 60]
Summary:

 

A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.

Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.

When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4484
Read Count: 20247
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good start...looks like it has not been updated in a while. I'd like to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh I love this story already. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

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Date: April 05 2013

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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

 

Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 12024
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ahh!!! The chapter ended much too soon...he's coming into her room...I want to know what is going to happen next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89345
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nick is an asshole. Honestly, I don't see this being "happily ever after."

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 11 2012

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 14

Well, this chapter made me like Ellie and Nick again. Nick, how could he be such an asshole one moment and the next a sweetheart?  Yeah, you're vulnerable Nick, I see you, lol.   I think the love scene was nice.  However, the time to worry about his sexual history and condom usage should have happened before you know....but honestly since this was a fictional love scene it probably would have messed the up the flow (depending on how it was written).

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Date: March 13 2012

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aw, Ellie.  Love her strength/resilience.  Funny how the birth control (before) and now Plan B didn't work.  I really think her friend Delia is wrong.   She should NOT be calling Nick and telling him. If Ellie wants him to know she WILL tell him. It's quite obvious that Nick doesn't want kids out of wedlock...he said as much even when they were having "goodbye sex."  Ellie is protecting her heart and her baby and given how Nick has reacted in the past I don't really blame her.  However, raising a baby alone is HARD.  I just think that Delia could have just called Nick and told him that he should call/check up on Ellie instead of just outright telling him.  If he calls, let Ellie decide whether to tell him or not...if he just shows up out of the blue well the cat is out the bag. Just saying.  I don't like meddling friends...good intentions or not.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2012

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I don't know how I missed this update. I am a bit shocked at the turn of events in this chapter. I didn't expect Nick to marry Juliette; he doesn't even love her. The way he yelled at Elle was just...mean...but typical Nick I guess. I liked those two together but sometimes I feel that he doesn't deserve her.  Then again he married Juliette so...

I found the last bit interesting.  So NOW he's happy?  Ugh. I still say the friend was wrong for alerting him and he didn't have to tell Nina. I think Elle should have told him in her own time.  Sucks now though that he's already married to someone else.

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Date: June 13 2012

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think Nick made a hasty decision marrying Juliette. He didn't love her so why did he settle?  Juliette is a fool for marrying him...the way he cheats on her.  *Shakes head* at Nick's family.  They sure are treating the mother of Nick's child coldly. Nina is such a sweetheart and Gio is cool.

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Date: August 01 2012

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Their relationship is like a roller coaster.  I don't know why they keep going back and forth..either you're in it for the long haul or not.  He should have never married Juliette and Juliette should have said no...that made no sense to me since he obviously didn't love her and cheated every chance he got while Juliette hung on for dear life wishing he would feel the same way about her that he felt for Ellie.  I can't believe Ellie was comforting her like that.  She seems to take mistreatment of his family with stride.  Couldn't be me.  With that said, I hope everything works out but I don't want Ellie to back down on that whole mob/drug lord thing with Nick's family.  He should know that she is not about that and will not have her son around it.  If they end up together, I would like to see just how that will work out.  

There are a few inconsistencies with the story here and there but overall it's a story that I've stuck with and read over a few times until the next update.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 270]
Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 132564
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Update on The Preacher's Son!

Great news!  I just recently read this story earlier this summer and now it's being published!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your support!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2013

Title: The Preacher's Son

Aw, I finally got around to reading this one as I had bypassed it in the past. I spent all night/early morning/next afternoon reading it until I finished.   The story had so many different layers.  Despite, some transition issues with spacing for new dialogue of other characters, this was a nice, easy read.  I'm glad that everything ended on a happy note for the main characters and their boss/new friend. However, it seems that there is some unfinished business with the other arc/angle to the story (Max's healing/possibly Matthew being an integral part of her healing) so I hope that you will post the sequel if you haven't already.



Author's Response:

I was pleasantly surprised to  read your review.  This is one of my very first stories.  I haven't taken it down yet because I plan on redoing the entire thing, but I'm glad you enjoyed my writing in its infancy.

Also there is a sequel to this story.  Enjoy!

 

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Date: July 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

They had one rule. They keep it out of the office.

 

....Watch it get broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7092
Read Count: 7484
Published: August 09 2011
Updated: March 18 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Birthday Boy

You know I REALLY love these two...

I think River was feeling some kind of way about keeping it *out of the office* but is now getting used to it...he doesn't seem as "happy" now that she seems to want to go *public.* Hmm...or is it something else? I love that he loves her though...and I have to admit that I kind of like their secretiveness in their office...it's kind of fun reading it. Maybe she won't put the plaque up so soon after all...

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Date: December 27 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Last Chapter

This was a cute story. Thanks for sharing.

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Date: March 18 2012

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[Reviews - 670]
Summary:

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140351
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I KNEW they were going to go to Golden Corral even before I read it. LOL.  Her family is a mess....I think Mrs. Wilmington was hurt in some kind of way...she seems to be old school...my instinct is telling me that if not her then someone very close to her was hurt by a white man and it had an effect on her life. I guess I will learn soon as the story goes on.



Author's Response:

Where else were they going to go?  LOL.  Golden Corral is like the big thing among poor people.  All you can eat at one price!  My husband grew up in the projects and I have seen all of the things mentioned in my story. LOL.  Mrs. Wilmngton has some issues and I'm considering elaborating on it in future chapters.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 Learning You All Over Again

You are good...I bypassed this story many times and was like "meh.." @ the summary/character pics but finally decided to give it a chance and was not disappointed.  Love the main characters and their passionate freakiness but I also love the lessons.  Chapter 6 was so heartbreaking (holding a grudge/resentment is never good...neither is guilt)  but chapter 7 was so freaking delightful.   Want to say this: I need Daniel to have more trust in his woman that he's "always loved."

 

 

 



Author's Response:

 

Daniel does have a lot of issues to work out.  Even though he knows that she hasn't cheated before, he still can't believe that of all the men that she's been involved with, that she wants just HIM. He feels that he may not be measuring up to the other men she's had in the past and he's afraid to talk to her about his insecurities. Thanks for the review.

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Date: September 04 2011

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

That bra thing was embarrassing!  I can't believe Joseph insisted she take her shirt off!  I will say that GOOD bras can be EXPENSIVE. Lol.  I love Joseph so much. He really is a good man.  I can't wait to see their relationship progress...even further.

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Date: December 01 2011

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 Ignorance and Abstinance

This chapter saddened and angered me...it angers me to no end that TRIFLING guys like Darrell exist.  



Author's Response:

Don't worry.  Darrell is gonna get his!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2011

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21 Road to Recovery

Parts of this chapter was heartbreaking!  I actually shed a a tear or two...I'm catching up and I must say that I am really enjoying the way you are telling this story.  

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.