Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
"No, I get it. That's fine. Chase will be there to whisper sweet nothings in your ear and I'll be there to fuck them all away when they turn you on. Everybody knows their place now.".........
That one line sums up the entire concept of twitsed emotions in this story. I LOVE IT!!!! I know Chase is young and all, but his boyish charm mixed with his filthy mouth is extremeeeeely sexy. Jack's manly, dominant character is sexy as well, but I feel like since Chase is young, he may just be more passionate and sensual in his acts, while Jack is more forceful and hard. The caveman thing was a turn on though, haha. My heart goes out to Chase, his feelings must be shreaded to scraps now. I hope Lia finds a way to still have a deep connection with him, and in the event they dont end up together, be able to help Chase get closure with his feelings so he can move forward in his life, and still be close.
Lila is in a tough spot, people may not realize that. Having a deep realtionship with someone for an exteded amout of time doesnt just evaporate in the blink of an eye. She is not trying to lead Jack and Chase on. She is not purposefuly playing with emotions, but she does love them both (if supposedly not the same way. Personally, I think she does have feelings for Chase, even if they are slight). So how is she suppose to apease them both, without hurting either's feelings, andddd guide them into brotherly love? Like I said, a TOUGH spot
Now, Voices, I would just like to comend you on your exsquisite writing. You are truly gifted, please continue this story. Kodoes to the smexy scenes and the strong, electric diologue. Smoothe transitions and proper grammar really can make or break a story, and you have done an excelant job. Thank you for sharing your talent with all us readers out there. Im a HUGE fan :D
i may have spelled some stuff wrong...so...my bad...but, Happy Writing!!
Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed
Date: March 18 2012