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Real name: Maria

Member Since: December 16 2008

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I am not a writer like so many talented others, but am an avid reader.


I love this site and count myself lucky to be blessed by the work of so many talented authors!




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Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76810
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 16: Apologies a little to late

Poor Dani...I hope she can work things out with Chad... men can be a little thick sometimes, and Chad should really have told Dani when it happened, but hopefully they can get past this.

Welcome back; looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

They will eventually get past it... Thanks for reading and I'm glad to be back... missed you guys!

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Date: June 26 2011

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

So, DeLeon is a deputy now, huh...interesting...

He needs to wise up and stop pushing Kendra away...I so want them to end up together.  So glad Prince is begining to realize that they are never going to be together and that home is where the heart is...

Hope Pa is okay, the stubborn old goose...why do I get the feeling that he was just waiting for Kendra to come back to stop resisting treatment?  Hmmm...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2012

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Yay!  So happy for these two!  They've been through so much and I'm glad they are finally getting their happy ending, even Prince!

So glad things are looking up for you and that you've gotten your groove back:)  Welcome back!

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Date: August 25 2014

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214437
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love these two; you can tell that they have strong feelings for each other and seem to complement each other.

I understand how hard things could be for them, but hopefully they can be together despite that.

I sense that Ryan's dad will be one of the main hinderances to their relationship, since he's actually in a position of authority over him, maybe Charlene's grandma too, but for different reasons. 

Great job with this story; look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I am really enjoying reading this story.  The chemistry between these two is palpable and I can't wait to see what happens next.  Neither Ryan nor Charlene can seem to help themselves when it comes to how they feel about each other.

It's amazing how far we've come with race relations, but it just takes one small incident to bring it all back to us.  Hopefully this budding realtionship will survive in such a small town setting.

I'm really looking forward to the next update!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your nice review.  Yes, it's true we've come far, but we still have way to go.  Nothing is done over night.  I glad you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you'll get chance to review my newest chapter (now posted).

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I can totally understand where Charlene is coming from with her hesitation in wanting to get into a relationship with Ryan, but a lot of good things come through sacrifice and pain, so hopefully she gives him a chance.

I know a lot of people will be against their relationship...I can already tell that Ryan's dad will be a problem, and of course Danny.  Charlene's grandmother may also be against the relationship, just because she doesn't want Charlene to get hurt.

The chemistry between these two is amazing though, and hopefully they'll be brave enough to venture into a relationship and we just have to hope they survive the fallout.

Great chapter; can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Glad you're back; loved the update!

I love the fact that Ryan and Charlene are in love and connect so well; hate it that they have to hide but hopefully Charlene will agree to let their relationshipship be made public.

Hopefully the altercation with Christie does not pull them apart, and that Charlene comes clean with Ryan about her meet-up with Christie and her threats.

It'll be interesting to see what Charlene's grandmother's reaction is to her realtionship with Ryan, and Ryan's family also...we already know Ryan's dad is a hypocrite, so I doubt he'll ba able to object too much!

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Date: March 24 2013

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Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 23: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Wow; that was intense and really hot at the same time! 

Great job; story is really starting to heat up!

Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get around to it; no pressure...sincerely.

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Date: June 09 2011

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TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78804
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Maybe Not

So glad you updated, and that Simon finally got to tell Moliere how he felt and Amber how he didn't feel in one fell swoop:) 

I wonder what secret Cooper is keeping from Simon; can't wait to find out what it is, though I have some ideas what it could be.

Poor Moliere just needs to wrap her mind around the fact that Simon wants her just for her, and he's not just going to be there because of the baby.

Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2011

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You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80213
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I Want You

Wow; loved the update...these two are so hot together!

Justin needs to dump Stacey already and move on...if all your friends and family can't stand someone, there's probably a really good reason. I guess what they say is true...love is blind.

 



Author's Response:

Well Thank you Amiefuzzy... I just love that name my best friends name is Amie. :)

I agree with you about Justin he is blind and needs to open up his eyes will just have to see what happens though. ;) But I'm glad your liking it. Justing and Jalena are hot together.  Thanks sos much for reviewing...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Consequences Of Bad Choice

OMG...I really can't wait for Justin to wake up and smell the coffee.  Obviously he is not in love with Stacey...what is it going to take to get him to realise this!  Stacy is such a manipulative ho; I can't believe Justin can't see through her...

Jalena needs to give him some space so he can come to his senses and choose her like he knows he wants to...I don't know why he is so determined to punish himself.  Hopefully Justin'll catch Stacy cheating on him or something and have no choice but to end things (laughs evily)...I can only hope)

Love the story; more please...you're making me channel my inner Oliver Twist:)



Author's Response:

You said it! I love this review its filled with so much passion break it down for me girl break it down go ahead bring out your inner Oliver Twist I love it!... :) Justin needs to fix this and he will... 

Thank you for reviewing and rating me... update up tonight!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2011

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Let HIm Go

Justin is really frustrating me...he needs to go ahead and dump the hoe-bag already!  I wish Jalena had spelt out to him exactly what Stacy was planning, since he's too dense to read between the lines...MEN!

I love the chemistry between Jalena & Justin...they are smoking hot together.  How embarrasing for them to be caught by their mothers like that...I can only imagine how mortified they were!

Looking forward to Stacy's demise...the witch must be stopped...lol...



Author's Response:

Yes I know he is frustraiting the hell out of me too and Im the writing about him..lol 

Im so happy you see there chemistry I was hoping to make that known. :) I think writting the 'caught by the parents scene so fun! Thanks for your review and rating I really appreciate it. xoxoxox meme

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Date: February 07 2012

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Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 167644
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 16: Jyuu go (15)

Loved the update; I really enjoy reading about these characters.

Sara has raised a wonderful child in Shoulda; he is kind thoughtful and loving...he is so much of his mother with bits of his father thrown in for good measure...

I think Yuki and Sara belong together; can't wait until they are a family as they should be...I know Yuki still has a lot of making-up to do, but he's well on his way; his love and care for Sara is so heart-warming...love how he saw to all her needs; even those she hadn't considered yet.  Can't wait until the divorce is final; I do like Karou; hope she doesn't end up with Kamir, as he is a selfish snake...

The confrontation of the grannies was priceless:)  So glad they are getting along better now!  Love the talk Yuki got to have with his mother; that was so long overdue...

Love this story and hope you update again soon.

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Date: March 27 2012

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For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 29156
Published: July 27 2011
Updated: April 08 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1.

Great start; can't wait to see what Dove gets into in the big city...sounds like this trip is going to be quite the eye-opener.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2011

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14

Wow; Shon is such an unfeeling imbecile...I know I should be mad at Dawn because she's breaking her wedding vows and all that, but I actually feel sorry for her instead, and want her to find her own happiness and stop living to please others.

Hopefully this is not the end for Dawn and Xavier because apart from the smoking hot physical connection, they seem to connect on a deeper emotional level also...

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Date: March 04 2012

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 140135
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

I really love this story, as I do all your stories, Brenda...you are a truly talented writer.

I feel for Amaris, and I know a new baby is a lot to take in (especially since it's not hers) and it's put a strain on her relationship with Justin, but I'm glad she's coping better now and hopefully they can get back on track with their relationship.  I keep hoping that they find the baby really isn't Justin's, but I guess that's just a vain hope...

Joseph and Seleah are so cute together...you know I started off really disliking Seleah, but I've come to understand her so much better, and even though I don't agree with a lot of her past behaviour, I understand now why she was that way.  I really admire Joseph for the way he's stepped up to not only be the man Seleah needs, but also the father her boys so badly need.  It'll take time and effort, but I'm sure they'll come around.

Great story; so realistic and really hits home that you really can't judge a book by its cover...nicely done!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2011

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Summary:

 

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80845
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I love this story, and the fact that the characters are so real and could be people we run into everyday.  It's funny how you could never picture some people as couples, but they just work...

Lei and Micah have been through so much together and I love that they are still going strong through ups and downs, and have remained true to each other.

Love the prom date; thought it was so funny how jealous Micah was when he saw Lei coing back in with Jerome, but all the while he had been dancing with Jessica, and even though he was not having a good time, he had to fake it.  Glad Lei broke it down to him and that she has developed enough confidence in herself and in their relationship to not let that bother her, since she knows he will be leaving with her...she's come a really long way.

Look forward to the next update; very entertaining story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I love keeping it real.  LOL  I'm halfway through the next chapter so it'll be coming up soon.  

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

So glad that Sabrina and Teddy made up...make-up nookie can be so amazing:) 

Lei and Micah are such an adorable couple; I really hope Micah doesn't have to go through a whole lot to take care of the spot on his nose!  I know Lei will stick with him through it all; it's always good to be able to count on a loved one to be there for you through a tough situation.

Ronald Reily really needs help and fast!!!  He is a real nut case!  Hopefully he doesn't get to hurt Lei or anyone she cares about with his crazy self!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Ronald Riley does need some help.    More to come soon!

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Date: October 29 2011

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114533
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 26: Don't Let Me Be The Last To Know

Thanks for the update!  I was all ready to come smack Tyler up the head fro being an ass, but he did a complete 180 on me...

I hate it that Kayla got pregnant at this stage, becuase now Tyler's mother is really going to think she is trying to trap him with a baby...

Can't wait until they are together again; such an adorable couple...

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65030
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really loving the interplay between the characters!  I really feel for Chase and all he's been through, but he is definitely too attached to Lila.

Jack is so hot and even though it'll hurt Chase quite a bit, I'd love to see he and Lila together.

Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 28 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39376
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying this story, as I do all your stories, Brenda.

Steven's late father was such a hypocrite, and obviously a really selfish and self-centered person.  I can't believe he had the nerve to justify cheating on his wife and make his son keep his secret all these years.  Secrets do however have a way of getting out, so we'll see...

I can understand Selma's reluctance to be a mother again at 45, but she knows how much this means to Maxie, and, though unplanned it's their miracle, so hopefully she'll fully come around and embrace it.

Selma's boys took the news better than I thought they would; I just hope they can now move on and become a family and embrace the new addition that will be along in a few months.

Wonder how Maxie's family will react to the news of the baby...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Stephen Sr. was very selfish.  The boys (especially Matt) was worried about losing their mother to Maxie.  Now that they know that Maxie wants to be a family, they can handle it a lot better.

Selma is a little worried about the pregnancy, but Maxie is going to be right there to help her through it.

As for the family...I'm going to have some fun with that one!

More to come soon!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just got caught up reading, and I must say, you have another winner here!

Love how Kelly has taken charge of Russ; hopefully this will dispose of his awful sullen disposition and he will finally leave Selma & Maxie alone...poor jealous fool:)

Can't wait to see what Selma has in store for Maxie!

Loved the updates!



Author's Response:

LOL I think Russell will be a little more sweeter after this.  Selma and Maxie are coming up real soon.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66306
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012


Title: Chapter 10: Constraints

Poor Dana...she''s in a really tough spot, but she did get herself into it...it''ll be interesting to see if Andrew steps up and finally does the right thing.  It seems he is just as invested in Dana as she is in him, so I''m not sure what''s holding him back...he really doesn''t seem to care for Ingrid at all.

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Looking forward to the next update whenever you get back; have fun with the family!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2011

Title: Victim of the Fall

Loved the update, as usual....

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The chemistry between these two is so hot!

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I can''t wait to see where you take these characters; of course I''m hoping that Dana and Andrew will end up together, but I''m just a sucker for a happy ending:)

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Looking forward to the next update! 



Author''s Response:

Hey thank you amie hun, I''m about halfway through the story at the moment so that''s all I''ll say for now ;) I am glad you are enjoying it, I enjoy reading your responses. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Soul Clenched

I just started reading this story and am enjoying it immensly. 

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Andrew really needs to make up his mind what he wants to do and stick with it; he is so wishy washy about things and when he starts to feel guilty about his actions, projects that to Dana instead of owning up to his short-comings.  He really needs to just grow up or grow some balls, or something:)

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Please do continue with this story...I know it''s not everyone''s cup of tea, but variety in story-telling is what makes us unique.  Since this is a work of fiction, folks just need to get off their high horse and either read and enjoy or don''t read.

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Just remember; opinions are like asses...everyone has one, so just do what makes you happy.

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Looking forward to the next update!



Author''s Response:

Thank you so much amiefuzzy, you are so right! I will keep updating, hopefully this weekend. Thank you so much!



Author''s Response:

Thank you so much amiefuzzy, you are so right! I will keep updating, hopefully this weekend. Thank you so much!

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Wow, Andrew is not well liked.  He does need to end the farce of an engagement to INgrid.  I so don''t her at all!!!  Thanks for the new cha[pter it was awesome!!



Author''s Response:

Thank you pm!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed
Date: May 27 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.