Penname: bhvana [Contact]

Real name: Femi

Member Since: January 31 2013

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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130134
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

Yay! You're back!!!I honestly prefer the quality of your updates over the immediacy they're posted. Needless to say I was extremely emotionally invested in this chapter. Keep up the good work!!!

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Date: May 01 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38696
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Eleven Part One- Tailspin

Rut roh

Reviewer: bhvana Signed
Date: May 12 2013

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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:


 


Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 17299
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013


Title: Chapter 8: They'll See...

Ah! You're back!!

 

I can't wait for the final update!



Author's Response:

Yes I am, lol! 

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18959
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 5: In the Woods

Yes, this is a nice take on student/teacher relationships.

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Date: November 26 2013

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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287962
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

I didn't find Val annoying at all. In acutuality I find her refreshing, I get tired of reading about women who have some sort of insecurity that they use a crutch or for conflict. Yet it all comes across as superficial. But with your writing it's actually fleshed out versus you just telling your reader Val hates her body, we get a peek inside of her mindset. I can see it, I understand it, and it resonates with me.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for understanding my intentions with her character.  I know most will be impatient with her and rightfully so. You understand what I was trying to convey with her. I just hope it doesnt put people off from reading further to understand her journey, but I can understand the readers that may get fed up with her

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Date: December 29 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

That has to be one of thee sexiest scenes ever.

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Date: October 04 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Bravo Sasha!!!

 

 

Reviewer: bhvana Signed
Date: December 18 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

That was an explosive chapter. My goodness...

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Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Sasha 2.0 I love it!!

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Date: February 01 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

..... Well Damn

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2013

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[Reviews - 146]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20050
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Fireworks. Part II

I literally thought my mind was playing tricks on me but, you're back!! As is Maksim....and the drama. Which I live for. Lol.

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Circles.

I love the fact that your characters aren't cookie cutter in the least bit. Yet they aren't hackneyed caricatures either. You actually pull of this strange concept of humanizing your characters instead of having them act out as droids. Lol.

 

Can't wait to see where part two goes.



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you feel that way about how I write my characters. I always fear that I'm either making them too dry and boring with no substance. Nice to know that I'm not; makes me feel good, lol. 

Thank you for reading!

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Date: June 08 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Fireworks. Part I

Bleh. Monica's insecurity is almost cause for pity. Keyword: Almost :) lol. Love the update & the name change. I've been waiting on baited breath for an update and the build up in this chapter did not disappoint.



Author's Response:

LOL @ almost. Happy this chapter didn't disappoint. Thanks for reading bhvana. And the name change was much needed. :)

Reviewer: bhvana Signed
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

It all started when they met in college, and she discovered his secret.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6344
Read Count: 5155
Published: July 04 2013
Updated: July 06 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really enjoyed these first two chapters. Acacia is already worming her way into my heart. Nobody seems to understand the dynamics of being an introvert but introverts. 

Anyway. 2 chapters? In a 24 hour period? Keep it up and we'll be used to you spoiling us! Ahahaha.

Can't wait for more.

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Date: July 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14245
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Lol. Did he really just bulldoze Candy out of the way -__-

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Date: January 05 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55754
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Cast of Characters

Woop Woop! Blue hair, chocolate skin, and wands for fingers? Rory is a woman after my own heart.



Author's Response:

Eep! My first review :D Thanks for stopping by. Rory is rather interesting... for sure!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think my heart just jumped out of my chest at that gesture.



Author's Response:

Thanks Bhvana!!!

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Date: October 03 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ughhh. I caught something in my eye..... lol. This was such a beautifully poignant story. Thank you for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Lol.  YW.  Thank you Bhvana!

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Date: October 18 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Eshan seems so intense and brooding .....  can we have second helpings of him pretty pleeeeease. Lol.

 

P.S. The nonverbal communication between them is pure erotica.



Author's Response:

You have not seen the last of Eshan.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Bhvana!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2013

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[Reviews - 267]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50801
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Setup

Poor Alfred :(

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Love is kind, yet brutal. Warm, but so cold. Joyful, yet sad



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 18403
Read Count: 4301
Published: September 24 2013
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Whoa. That was intense...Camille seems extremely level headed and from this chapter alone I gather she's a bleeding heart. I'm rooting for her



Author's Response:

Camille will probably always be a bleeding heart. Thank you! :) 

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Date: September 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

While Riley waits for devastating news of one sort, she receives word of another.  Will she refuse to accept either, or surrender to the inconvenient miracle?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4378
Read Count: 1496
Published: October 07 2013
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That ending was everything. This was probably the most emotionally charged one-shot I've read and it's definitely going into my favorites.



Author's Response:

Thanks Bhvana!  So glad you liked it.  And thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 77545
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Dreams

I am twirling right now, so that was the gov't bombing them and experimenting on z's? Omg and she really left Michael?!?

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Date: November 16 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Karen's 11

Boomchickawowow!

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Date: November 27 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Michael

This story is so action packed yet it flows so well. I'msoooo excited to see where this goes.

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2013

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