Penname: Penelope [Contact]

Real name: Eddice

Member Since: February 20 2013

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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 135779
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 1: One

Loving this story!  Hopefully he will get over and understand why Taylor did what she did.  At least she now knows that he was prepared to take her/him anyway he could.  Please give Taylor a break and don't let her suffer too much.    

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: May 01 2013

Title: Chapter 1: One

Wish the story between these two didn't have to end, but I loved the HEA.  Thank you for the update and I really enjoyed reading your work.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38777
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: Honesty is the Best Policy...Except when it isn't!

loving this!

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Date: January 15 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80373
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 THat Part 1

He couldn't even remember our girl's name and even put off in going to assure her of his love for her.  He could have told the past fwb to hold tight and he would be back.  

I think she should go forward with her goals.  If it is meant to be then they will meet again and hopefully both will be more mature mentally.

She said some harsh things not meant for his ears, but maybe he needed to hear them.

Young love...sigh. 



Author's Response:

I know right young love ugh sigh!!! 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: December 26 2016

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 THat Part 1

Hope he gets to drunk to do anything and passes out.



Author's Response:

Lol!!! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Date: December 26 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25096
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Maya needs to say five words to him: I'm sorry, please forgive me.



Author's Response:

She will soon :). Thanks for reading!

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Date: March 24 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104174
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

Lovely--thank you.

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Date: January 08 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

welcome back and great update!  I hated that there  wasn't more.  

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Date: November 05 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 101232
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Getting to Know You

started this story last night and finished it the first thing this morning.  This was a very good story that held my interest--hope there is more onthe family.  I would especially like to know how Charlie is going to react when the my girl refuses to give up her job.  Hopefully, he will remember to compromise.  I liked that the characters were real people with real jobs. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: May 23 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75423
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The PTA Members(Characters)

I just happen to see this update and decided to read your story.  It is just awesome!  I can understand Esther's slow progress because she has been severly traumatized.  She is the sensitive one in the bunch and with no parents to protect her left her vulnerable to other predators.  

Now with AJ, other than memorizing tags/cars he is truly slow for a FBI agent.  He should've read that background report ages ago: when he found out she cuts, after confronting the PI, knowing a car was following her.  I tried to chalk it up to him being busy, but reading that report wouldn't have taken 30 mins and he could have faked it when/if she had confided in him.

AJ walking out has crushed an already broken Esther.  I guess now she will be at the opening with William after all.  If she is pregnant with AJ baby...maybe she will snap out of it when Williams assaults her again and fight back.

  I was so into your story I kept looking for 'next' :-).

 

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2015

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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65876
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Welcome back!  So good, I found myself holding my breath.  They didn't use any protection the last time.  Glad to see Zee pushing back, but Matt is a bit crazy.  Thanks for the update.

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Date: January 21 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Damn!   ...and he bites the dust and doesn't even know it.  He needs to stop being an azz, though.

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Date: November 07 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Z knows they wil have to go on the tour with him--wonder who the crazy woman is?  Maybe his mom in disguise, trying in her own wacky way to get them by together.

Z needs to let MIguel go and face the fact that she is afraid that the tour will leave her defenseless in her emotions for Matt.  Matt will get a chance to really show her how he feels--he will be with his family.  Wonder where they will sleep on the bus?  

Thank you for the great update and thanks for getting rid of Liz.

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Date: November 02 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Is Matt having sex with Lizbeth while A is living with them?  If so, then all bets are off!  I wouldn't even want him back, because he is seriously disrespecting her and Chase.  He is being pretty mean to her and I am glad you gave hersomeone that is interested in her.  I wish Matt would tell her Chase will have two mothesr and then she can tell him well she may have two daddies, too--my guess is that Matt would tear soem sh*t up :-).  I love your story.

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Date: February 20 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I think mama dearest is going to try and put Z down--why can't Liz mom make a surprise appearance?  Hopefully, Chase will use her child's intuition and not like her.  

Hopefully, Z will enjoy her date--can't wait for Matt to see her in her freak dress/heels.  I agree it is time for Matt to do something.  Liz is cheating if Matt is not giving her any.  He is going to lose Z again; if he catches Liz and then goes to Z--she will rightfully feel like a true rebound.

 

Loving this story--Thank you!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: March 10 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see Matt was on his A game--for a moment I thought he was slow.  Also glad to see he got rid of Liz before he goes after Z.  Z should keep dating that 'other' guy.   Matt should take them on this tour with him--separate bedrooms, of course.  Chase is upset and this would be the perfect opportunity to spend time with his daughter and win Z over.  Thank you for the update--well done!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: May 14 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Matt better take them on that tour with him 1) will get Chase away from the madness 2) he get to win Z back and apologize for being a d*ckhead.

Miguel know what time it is and it is not for him.  He seems like a nice guy, but hey everybody can't win.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: May 15 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Matt needs to get away with A. and his daughter...for their safety (wink, wink), of course.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

thanks for the update!  Z needs to come clean and tell Mig by, take leave from the job to go on tour, apologize for leaving our guy in the cold and keeping him in the dark about his child...hell she needs to grow up and quit being so mean to him.   Now our guy needs to calm down and perhaps pull back from Z for a while, even if they do go on the tour with him--just concentrate on being a good dad.



Author's Response:

The dad part has been easy its the baby mama drama that has Matt messed up. Miguel is awesome I actually think Im going write his story eventually.

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Date: September 10 2013

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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66388
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

ooohhh...somebody's in trouble!  Aiden basically cheated on her, in her opinion, although he was just being trifling.  A. will need to come clean with Lily about his feeling in order to get one foot out the doghouse andno he doesn't need to get her a dog.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

One purple eye and one brown eye, the eyes that marked her as not just as a 'demon' but as a halfbreed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 9855
Read Count: 4848
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: August 05 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Four

Hopefully, Eng will feel something other than affection for our girl.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 106]
Summary:

They each needed something only the other could fill. Little did they know that something would be their greatest downfall.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 21087
Read Count: 27730
Published: December 10 2012
Updated: October 26 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine

Just read this yesterday and was hooked.  Alec needs some serious counseling and it will be interesting to see if he stands by her now that she is pregnant.  He doubts his ability to love or rather is scared to love.  Glad she told him about the baby and didn't keep pushing him away. 

She may have to be strong for both of them in the near future.  When will the lucky couple meet the in-laws?

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: October 27 2013

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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49992
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Glad you are back and thanks for the update--it was great!  He may have to marry C. to save her from Dice.  Good to see she is finally angry at D and accepts the part she played in the situation she was in. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad to be back! Xavier is the reason why Dice haven't found Camille yet.

 

I felt that even though Camille isn't as headstrong, she is willing to learn and grow.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: June 04 2013

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Update was good and glad Tasha is there for Camille.  Camille needs to take time to get some counsleing and get herself together--may want to take some self defense courses, too, because Dice and Greg will be back, meaner than ever.  Iknow X is afraid of being hurt, but maybe Nick can tell him the cheater was removed from his life so that Camille could be there.  Hopefully, Z won't take too long to get back with a stronger Camille.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed
Date: March 19 2013

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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

 

Mallory Ruskin lost her sight in an unfortunate accident five years ago. Can she push aside the fear of the assumed and the unknown to trust the one man who had her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28493
Read Count: 19618
Published: January 29 2013
Updated: May 19 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Broken

I hope Mallory comes out and says, 'What's that god awful stench?' Please make her stronger this time around.  I hope both Rorya nd Mal are willing to fight for their love. 



Author's Response:

LOL! Mallory  is a different creature now - she still loves Rory but won't be taken for a fool. We all have to go through to get through ;)

It's safe to say that Rory and Mallory are going to come to terms really quickly.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2013

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