Penname: CaramelGal [Contact]

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Member Since: March 06 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

A college graduate with too much time on my hands. So, I put them to a keyboard & let the words flow out.


 


"Now keep in mind that I'm a artist and I'm sensitive about my shit."-Erykah Badu 


 


 




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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286534
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

Henry once again put it down lol! I love the chemistry between him & Val. I didn't think she was annoying.  Actually, I think you perfectly captured the vulnerability of your character. Like all your other chapters I loved this one. I'm hoping we see a little more of Val's cocky side in other chapters too lol. I'm looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

YES this is the chapter I've been waiting for! Not only is Henry Valerie's dream man but he loves her for her & he clearly PUTS IT DOWN. He's a keeper!gifs

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2013

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22

I thought the background on Valerie and George's relationship was necessary. In other chapters, you only hinted at it. So it's good to get the full scope. I'm more concerned in seeing where Val and Henry go from here. And I'm glad to see she's controlling her eating disorder urges (which is a HUGE step). Great update and I'll be waiting patiently for the next one.

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Date: December 20 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6909
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I've been reading this story for a while, & I love it! I was not expecting Judith to be so desperate. I appreciate Skylar not giving a damn this chapter. Seriously, I was totally here for that. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed
Date: June 14 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 5: She Can't Love You

Wow! I didn't know Aurora didn't know about Katherine. Alma told Ethan right but it was still too late, he's gonna get caught red handed. I'm can't wait to see how Aurora & Ethan will respond to one another next chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

I experienced him on paper long before I witnessed him on film. In my mind, he was so much more than a villain to be conquered and killed. He deserved his own story, love and maybe a family. I decided to give it to him. My friend said, "He would make a great character for a story" I couldn't agree more. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10330
Read Count: 9385
Published: November 13 2013
Updated: September 23 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Emoladla is a fighter & I love that! She refuses to be some man's play toy & I respect that. Although I'm curious as to how long this will last because Goza seems like he's ready to devour her. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :]

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Rule One:  Keep your regular life and your Domme life separate.

Rule Two:  Keep your relationship with your sub professional.  It is a business transaction.

Rule Two:  Never fall in love with a sub.

 

Talia Lawrence is a photographer by day and private dominatrix when she is not behind the camera.  All is balanced in her life until one of her subs moves clear across the country, leaving her with an empty spot in her schedule and on her spanking bench.  When a chance meeting turns out not to be so random, she has to ask herself if the new sub who offers himself presents too much of a risk to all three of her rules. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Challenges: Bottom Bitches
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 13578
Read Count: 6553
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: December 11 2014


Title: Chapter 7: The Second Session

This story is absolutely addictive! And so hot it made me want to clutch my pearls. I can’t wait for more.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Mirror, Mirror

This Jamison thing is going too damn far and they don't need a therapist to see that. That woman (who I'm guessing is Anthony's mother) was about to make me snatch her wig talking to Nat crazy. I'm on the fence about her going to this party. I want her to see Anthony, but I know the tidal wave of emotions it'll cause her amidst being in a fake engagement. I see you're going to keep slaying me with these plot twists. As usual, at the end of every chapter, I'm already in need of more.



Author's Response:

Lol.  We snatchin' wigs today CaramelGal?  Too funny.

Rita is Anthony's mentor.  She got him set up in his accounting career in Galveston, and has become a momma-bear.  Anthony's real mother's name is Mercede and she lives in Philly.  She'll eventually make another appearance. 

Therapy is probably not a good idea, and the same might be said for the party.  We'll see if Nat finds herself attending either. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Sexual Healing

This story was EVERYTHING!!



Author's Response:

Thanks CaramelGal!!!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 14 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - I Will But I Won't

So happy she told him the truth. And I'm even happier he's so understanding. That line about him being bad in bed had me looking at Jamison a little different *wags eyebrows suggestively*. And Barbara’s finna get these hands if she doesn’t learn how to stay in her own lane. This was short and sweet. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Lol.  He slipped that right on in, didn't he--pun intended.  ; )  Barbara is ridiculous.  She needs them hands put on her.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Regrets and Goodbyes

"Last things we'd said?" Omg please don't leave me hanging like that! I'm so afraid yet invested in what could happen next. I hope you'll update soon.

Author's Response:

The full scope of that statement will become clearer next chapter.  I hope to post it sometime tomorrow or Saturday.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Victim of Deja Vu

This chapter's got me in shambles! Why did she tell him to leave when she didn't mean it? I don't care how long it takes, I want these two to talk it out, be real and make up. Just fix it Jesus. Once again, you've got me all in my feelings for these two. Bravo!



Author's Response:

Lol @ "fix it Jesus."  Natalia did want Anthony to go, sort of.  Based on his lies, she believed he saw no future for them and that he'd be better off without her.  A sit-down is way overdue but not likely to happen in the near future considering Anthony's gone and Natalia is despondent.  But we'll see.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!

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Date: January 05 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Parent Trap

I doubt that even your author's chapter notes could've prepared me for this. I never saw this coming. I swear you keep me on my toes each chapter. Your writing always makes me an emotional wreck and it only keeps me wanting more. Amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks CaramelGal!  So glad you enjoyed it.  More emotional mayhem on deck. : )

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Date: January 10 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Lamb of Sacrifice

Now about this party...Rich seems like a snake in the grass, so I guess the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree. But then again, in the nosey ass siblings sense, maybe him and Barbara would be perfect for each other. Anyways, Nat and Anthony were very composed around each other, but I'm sure it was only because of the setting. If they had been alone...Lord only knows how that exchange would've went down. The fact that he's living down the street makes me sure they'll run into each other soon enough.

Jamison smelled this coming from a mile away. That therapy session was a needed reality check for him. He kept trying to patch up things when they were really shattered beyond repair. Even though he's delusional, I still feel for him. But I'm just glad Nat was honest. Great update, JJ.



Author's Response:

Rich and Barb would have a hard time getting along seeing as how Rich is protective of Ant and Barb hates him.  But stranger things have happened.  And you're right--if Ant and Nat had met privately, things would have likely gone very differently.  Whether proximity leds to their paths crossing remains to be seen.

I feel bad for Jamison too.  He was damaged, but a good guy.  Had he and Nat met at a different time, they may have had a real chance.  Maybe.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

Rich took that shit too far. So when Ant put him in that chokehold I was like...

That shit was well deserved.

Now I'm gonna need Ant to come at Sabrina forreal. Baby girl is giving Stepford Wife tease without request. And she seems sweet too. But knowing you, you'll slay me and change my perception of her by the next update---which I love. Wonderful chapter as usual JJ.



Author's Response:

Lol at the clip!  Sabrina just might be what she appears...then again, maybe not.  More on her next chapter.  Thanks CaramelGal!!!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

This was amazing. Talk about Jesus coming through and fixing it. Even if Jesus was Rich acting sloppy drunk, I love it! I'm good and ready to see how this goes over with Sabrina and both their families. Marvelous work as usual, JJ.



Author's Response:

I'm singing, "Can't He do it, won't He it!"  Lol!  Thanks for the fabu review, CaramelGal!  So glad you liked the update.  Sabrina's and the Talerico's reaction to Anthony and Natalia's reunion is coming up soon.  Stay tuned. 

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Date: February 05 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Four's a Tough Crowd

Nat with this damn house...Imma need her to do like that annoying ass Disney song & let it go. Not to mention that Thomas situation probably only made her want to keep it more. And I was surprised to see how she handled his resistance. Especially since I feel like he’s on board for Nat & Ant’s relationship. I’m all for characters beefing, but I enjoyed that you concocted & squashed it all in one chapter. I love that these two love each other enough to not let shit affect them. These two belong together. Can’t wait to see how they handle this upcoming doctor’s visit & future hating ass family members. Thanks for the great chapter JJ.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Yeah, Thomas had Nat stressed over what the relationship was costing Anthony and, therefore, a little gun shy about moving forward.  But she quickly got over that and let Thomas know what's what.  He's willing to accept Anthony's decision to be with her, but probably won't be rallying around him in a support of it.  Oh well.  Neither Anthony or Natalia seemed concerned with it, at least for now.  They shouldn't be, because they've got bigger fish to fry...  Thanks for reading and reviewing, CaramelGal!

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Nat with the damn dramatics in the beginning of this chapter had me hella shook. I was expecting the worst. But when she told him she was pregnant I was like...

Hopefully, in eight weeks we'll hear good news. You kept me on my toes the whole chapter, JJ. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Lol!  I love that clip.  Thanks CaramelGal!  So glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2015

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story just keeps getting better. I was o glad to see you updated it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh. NO! I'm not here for Eshan's mother or his brother. They are so adamant in ending their relationship. I hope I wasn't the only one missing Ms. Pearl's southern dipped wise yet lovingly harsh banter. Eshan better explain himself for getting cozy with his former wife-to-be---because I need answers.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34239
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I needed that closure. Great chapter & I can't wait for the epilogue.



Author's Response:

Thanks Caramelgal! :D

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Great chapter, much like all the others. How does Griffin always say the right things? Ugh that man...so swoon worthy. I'm really curious as to just how much that play is going to affect his career as well as he and Roxie's relationship. Looking forward to future updates.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Hearing how all this is affecting Roxie is definitely tugging at my heart strings. It's like she's trying to prove her worthiness through gaining a risky possible eating disorder. I surely hope Griff is able to make her see the light, real quick. Great update.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Lord, I wasnt ready for this. Hoping they get it together, like real fast. Great updates.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Tonight's updates got me like...



Author's Response:

Yasssssss! *claps* I love this too hard! Haha

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.