Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215321
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 29

The pic of Savannah is so adorable! 💖

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Date: January 09 2015
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Choosey Lover by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 298]
Summary:

 

Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69608
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015

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Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

LOL! 😄  She was wrong for that.  That was too funny. 



Author's Response:

Dean shouldn’t have suggested it. HE WASN’T READY!!! Lol thanks for reviewing Musicluva.

CG

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Date: January 13 2015
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Sounds like they need to decide if they will dwell on the past or if it will simply remain just that, and move on.  Can't wait to see what Elle has in store. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Regardless, it’ll be a learning experience for the both of them. Since their both a bit confused at this point.  I’m actually putting finishing touches on the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

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Date: December 03 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

She needs jus simply apologize, and talk to him honestly about how she feels. 



Author's Response:

Definitely and it needs to happen sooner than later. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

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Date: December 12 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I hope Dean can get past this and moves on. Elle is tiring and isplaying too many games. 



Author's Response:

I think you’ll like how Dean moves on in the next chapter…stay tuned. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

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Date: December 17 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

They both need to grow up. 😐



Author's Response:

Good point Musicluva. Now, if only they could see that.

CG

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: December 31 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Wow. Some progress! Interested in seeing what's next for theses two. 



Author's Response:

And I’m glad to know you’re still intrigued, Musicluva.

CG

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Date: January 06 2015
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Hmmm.  I think Elle should be crystal clear and honest with herself and Dean about where exactly she wants to go with their relationship.  Based on how she's reacting, I'm getting the feeling that either she isn't sure or it's possible that she's been sexually violated in some way.  Her girls also seem to imply that Dean has some control issues to work on.  I think Elle needs to be very careful.  After the many, near-misses they've had with taking their relationship to the next level, I think Dean may feel she's playing on his emotions if they go through another round of that.



Author's Response:

I definitely would lean more towards her still not being sure, but only because of past occurrences. Tracie didn’t imply control issues as much but more so Elle’s lack of knowledge of how men work. T was just letting her know most men don’t act the way Dean does unless they want serious commitment. But I agree, Elle and Dean should be careful especially considering their history. Thanks so much for reviewing Musicluva!

CG

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Date: January 18 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Very enlightening. Good update. 



Author's Response:

Well thank you Musicluva!

CG

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Date: January 28 2015
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Go'on Elle! 😄 



Author's Response:

Ms. Foster if ya nasty...

CG

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Date: February 05 2015
Ezekiel Black by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40496
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015

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Title: Ezekiel Black

Wow!  Willoughby is a snake!

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Date: November 23 2014
Camp Outlook by Briella
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: You & Me?

Congrats on the new place. Nice build-up. This last chapter was HOT!!!  Please give us more and longer chapters. 💖💖



Author's Response:

Thank you! I usually stick to shorter chapter because of my attention span lol. But I'm going to at least try to update more often, that wouldj make up for it right?

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Date: January 14 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Secrets Out

Another sizzling chapter!

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Date: February 15 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Treasure Hunt

Well, dag'on it!  Why did Josh have to interrupt?!



Author's Response:

Right? It was just getting good.

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Date: January 26 2015
Title: Chapter 7: First Things First

That was hot! **Sssssst** 🔥💥

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Date: January 01 2015
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Wasurenaide by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

No matter what, I'd never forget you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wasurenaide is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2801
Read Count: 46898
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: February 23 2020

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Title: Wasurenaide

Interesting. So far, it comes off as very depressing, but I want to see where this goes. 



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva :) Thank you for commenting for the (new) Wasurenaide ^^ I have returned the old story here and I will properly give the story with Hiko and Khyrssa another name. They are two seperate stories haha. I assure you that it will get better as Hiko and Khyrssa come to discover themselves and their relationship. :D Be blessed and take care~ ^_^

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Date: November 23 2014
Title: Wasurenaide

I hope Elle is ready to go back to work after her traumatic experience. 

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Date: March 16 2015
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Accordance by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 129]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101580
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019

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Title: Accordance

Wow!  This has to be so difficult to Ebere. I curious to know what would compel her parents to send her there, and all alone?  Glad that at least one person helped her out. 



Author's Response:

Yes it has been so hard for her up until this point!

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Date: February 16 2015
Title: Accordance

Wow. His parents are tyrants. Nuts!  I'm so glad that Hiroto and Rae found each other. 



Author's Response:

Hi Musicluva~ <3 YES. THEY ARE. NEED TO SIT DOWN SOMEWHERE LAWD. Me too! Me tooo!

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Date: April 13 2015
Title: Accordance

Man, what is Emi's deal?  She can't get a man without money?  Just sad.  I hope Rae lets the relationship develope ... shouldn't fight true love.  It's a real gift.  Not everyone is that lucky.



Author's Response:

Emi need help and Jesus. That is all I gotta say about her LOL. Yes, it seems like they definitely are a bit hesitant but it will grow most wonderfully. <3 Their love is so real. 

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Date: March 28 2015
Title: Accordance

The truth will set you free!  That was hot like fiya! :0)



Author's Response:

hhehehehehehe yes ma'am it shall set you free LOL. Bwahaha. Thank you lovelie~

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Date: March 29 2015
Title: Accordance

Wow ... these two ... so intense!  If I could give this 100 stars, I would.  Just beautiful ... I loved this update!



Author's Response:

hehe thank you~ Yes indeed they are a very intense couple :D <3 THANK YOU SO MUCH Musicluva! I appreciate it so much eheh ^_^ <3 

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Date: March 29 2015
Title: Accordance

Yes! That $@!itch got what she deserved!!! 👏🏾



Author's Response:

ahahahahahah yassssssssssssssssss itch snitch got them handsssss

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Date: September 01 2015
Title: Accordance

Hmmm. I'm a bit confused on this one. Why is Rae having thoughts of Hirito and Aiko being together?  Is she unsure of her feelings for Iwase?



Author's Response:

Rae's feeling jealous... of something she has no business being jealous of. Instead of her being unsure I tink the right word is denial lol! She's going back and forth with it because she's...... *read update* LOL. Can't say!

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Date: August 27 2015
Title: Accordance

I'm sure it was Emi's @$$!  It's on now!

I love Rae and Hirito!!! <3



Author's Response:

HAHA ON LIKE DONKEY KONG! BOOM! hehe. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.