Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286532
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 31: A/N

Dag, I figured it was another update (I know, I'm greedy ... but when it's good ...).  Anyway, I still stand by my previous comment.  I'm proud of Valerie, and how far she has come.  It was a long jorney, but she overcame to hardest hurdle which was to admit that she has problems.  I jusy hope that she can overcome those, as weil as the issues that remain with her parents (she needs to tell them what George did to her).  I agree with Henry that she needs to spread her wings and leave the nest with respect to working for her father.  I also wonder if she'll ever be able to comfront George about what he did to her and how much of an impact it had on her life.  Maybe it will help in getting some closure there.  Having Henry's support will be very helpful, I'm sure.

I also hope that that Henry's brother will come around as well.  Any who ... looking forward to what you have for the rewrite, and what remains of this journey (though, I hate to see it end ... I loved this story ... most definitely one of my fav's <3)

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story is one of my favorites. I hope all is well. I went back and read the story again. I was wondering if we can expect some closure with Valerie regarding her parents and her MIA sister Monica?  One thing I would also love to see is an encounter with George which involves Henry giving him a swift kick up his @$$!  Can we make that happen? 😈

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Date: September 20 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8750
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Nagging obsession

I think Alicia still wants Morgan, but feels insecure after hearing about his character and reputation from his sister.

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Date: December 23 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12843
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Lithium

I'm intrigued. Great start so far. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82565
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

This could be the start of something beautiful (and hot! 😉)

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Login' it so far! 😊

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 31 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Interested in the direction this is heading. Would like to see longer chapters though! 😉



Author's Response:

This started out as a 500 word exercise and I have failed miserably.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

Janie sounds like a nut!  Can't wait for the next installment! 5 stars! n88;n88;n88;n88;n88;



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Janie...well she's a bit obsessive, but now she has a new obsession.  LOL  More is coming!

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Date: August 02 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

At last! 👏👍😀

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Date: August 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Ruby Gray is heading to a family reunion and this time, without her husband. She didn’t want to see the disapproval in her mother’s eyes or hear her sister talk about how good her marriage is but she knew that if she didn’t go, she’d never hear the end of it. Only the moment her car breaks down, Ruby realizes that she might’ve gotten more than she bargained for, especially when she runs into a very handsome stranger.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4369
Read Count: 2766
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

So far, so good !

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12987
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting start. Looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. She sounds miserable! My heart goes out to her. Sounds like home may be worse than school. 😟

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Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

She needs to take 'Battie' to that @$$ !!! 😡😡

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Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

As a mother, this would be a true nightmare! 😡😖😥😭

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Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok, now I'm truly confused. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

If she's going crazy, she would be well within her right to do so. 😕

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
Date: May 23 2015

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Summary:

A race of aliens need females to survive.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8688
Read Count: 11233
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great start so far.   Not like anything I've read so far.   One thing I'm curious  about is a description of Summers appearance.  I don't recall seeing one of her up to this point.  Looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55741
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12

That was hot!  Waiting for the next installment :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 25 2013

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

I love it!!!  

Okay, Why is Vic trippin' over Rory's new power?

I wanna know what that crazy nut Scarlett is into!  

More please :)

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

Can't wait!  :0)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2013

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

I will say I'm not surprised at Scarlett's involvement. I must ask though, why does it seem that Vic and Rory always get interrupted when the gettin' is gettin' good?!  D@mn!!! ;0).  Five stars !

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2013

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Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37781
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this, and also vote for an epilogue. Joss ans Eshen have so much chemistry through the story, it would be a crime not to 😜. I'm so glad to see that karma caught up with Hirah! Bravo!!👏



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!  I'll see what I can come with for an epilogue or short follow-up. 

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Date: October 18 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hey, I'm just going to put it out there. I want them to consummate their union (we ... yes, Joss, Eshen, and the readers have waited long enough!). 😊

I  would also like to see how things go when Joss meets Eshen's parents. Or better yet, when his parents meet Mrs. Pearl!  😀

Please update this for us. 💗💖💗💖



Author's Response:

Lol!  I don't know how much of a peek you'll get into the consummation.  I'll just have to see what feels right for the characters.  But anything else I write will definitely include Pearl.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Beautiful!!!!  I would love for a happily ever after too.  But, in reality, the odds are very much against them. Never underestimate the power though. Can't wait for the next submission. 💖💖💖 



Author's Response:

You never know...  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Musicluva!  Update posted.

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I really commend Joss for taking the high road at the end. Not an easy thing to do, I'm sure. 



Author's Response:

No it's not.  We'll see what it profits her.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.