Penname: kiavicmcp [Contact]

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Member Since: May 04 2013

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Summary:

 

Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11987
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so you'll feel me long after I'm gone now that is sexy

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Date: November 19 2013

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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Taught to see the worst in people so he lived life semi- emotionless, that is until he met her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1643
Read Count: 10511
Published: December 26 2011
Updated: August 23 2015


Title: Heat

Cool nice update

 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21 2014

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78020
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 11: {Eleven}

Aw El's just scared hopefully Nathan can get her to come around. Thanks for updating.

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Date: April 01 2014

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Summary:


 


Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 17299
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013


Title: Chapter 8: They'll See...

woah crazy bitch alert



Author's Response:

You ain't never lied.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 01 2013

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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6947
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 3: 3 - Heat

love the story so far i hope you post more chapters

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Date: May 20 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 231]
Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 218597
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

she better tell him before she ends up really hurt if she really loves him she would explain to him whats going on instead of having him misunderstand 

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Date: July 30 2013

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Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 64436
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Jump

Really

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: September 04 2013

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Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34090
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Note to readers

the pics are gone:(



Author's Response:

Nooo Oh my gosh, thank you so much for letting me know. Jacci is hooking it up and putting the pics in that new revolving thingy. Fancy! Lol hahaha Thanks again. ;)

-p2p-

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: June 08 2013

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Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

Well alright Sean that was hottt.

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Date: March 01 2014

Title: Duplicity

You see what happens when you believe a complete stranger over your own brother and now her wedding is ruined and Layla oh boo hoo she acts like he did all this with the sole purpose of deceiving her and not to protect his family.



Author's Response:

Sooo true!!! Lol but remember the story is called Duplicity, you never what can happen! Aww poor Layla she doesn't know all the specifics yet. She just knows the guy she feel for has been lying to her. And for her it's history repeating itself so she's not really open to listen to his reasons.

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2013

Title: Duplicity

 Poor Layla you see if she would have actually asked him why he posed as Merle he probably would have told her what was about to go down and she wouldn't find herself taken. Luckily for Layla Sean has a set of skills that make him a very dangerous man for people like Rollins. Oh and everyone's in on it nice plot twist.



Author's Response:

Yep yep, poor Layla but she wasn't really having any of it. Now she's right smack in the middle of it. Sean has some skills for sure but this is going to challenging since he's not exactly thinking straight. Thank you so much for comments!!! I treasure them. :) 

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Date: January 19 2014

Title: Duplicity

I knew this wasn't gonna be the chapter where he tells Layla who he really is I just knew it.



Author's Response:

Lol sorry there was a lot going on in this chapter, I couldn't add that on top of everything. But soon I promise!

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Date: October 23 2013

Title: Duplicity

Wow I was not expecting a new chapter so fast. I just loved this chapter very entertaining I can't even complain about Layla this time. Oh and yes Haseem is so fine he should have his own story.



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad you approve! Ah yes Haseem Haseem, so many possibilities. I'm working up an outline now. hopefully next chapter will be up by the end of the week. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2014

Title: Duplicity

Off work early and I can really comment now ok so now that Layla knows the truth about sean how are they going to be together because he seems very confident that all will end well but he's gonna give himself up after the wedding and Laya give him a break I mean dude has an excellent reason for hiding his identity from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back and leaving a comment! Yea Sean seems confident he can win Layla back but it's not going to be as easy as he thinks. :P 

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Date: November 25 2013

Title: Duplicity

love it



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25 2013

Title: Duplicity

yay! your back great update



Author's Response:

Well thank you! It's really good to be back. Hopefully it'll be smooth sailing from here on out. Thanks for dropping me a line!

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Date: July 10 2013

Title: Duplicity

ok what is up with henry



Author's Response:

Good question... Lol

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11 2013

Title: Duplicity

Okay yeah she has had to deal with lying boyfriends before but she has never had someone go so far as to put on a costume and make-up to fool her she never asked him why he was pretending to be Merle when Sienna asked her if she knew about Merle's true identity Layla still didn't asked what the heck is going on in this house she just decided to run away.



Author's Response:

Yep yep. I think she's just overwhelmed with it all and wants to go back home to regroup. More to come hopefully soon!

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed
Date: December 14 2013

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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

 

 

 

Professor Wilson is in the office late again grading papers. I wonder who'll stop by...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19538
Read Count: 18959
Published: March 25 2013
Updated: November 24 2013


Title: Chapter 5: In the Woods

yay! I'm so happy your back. nice chapter

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Date: November 24 2013

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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40306
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wooooo happy belated 4/20 to you too. Thanks for the update.

 

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Date: April 23 2014

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Summary:

Nina has just started to live her life. She drops out of school and moves to L.A. At 23 she is essentially having a midlife crisis. So at this point she was not mentally or emotionally prepared for a relationship. Then she meets Alexander, the dark stranger with as many secrets as there were stars.

 

Nina wants a brief affair but Alexander has different plans he has waited years for her to walk into his life and he is not willing to let her walk out of it so easily. Even when shadows from his past reappear he will fight for a future for them. The question is will she fight for a future with him? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7365
Read Count: 6234
Published: April 15 2013
Updated: June 20 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3-You again

wow i luv this story i hope you keep writing for it

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Date: June 29 2013

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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

awwww

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2013

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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Okay yay Sasha got a back bone but her new take on life will only lead to her being sad and alone,I still strongly believe she needs to be on someone's couch because she's already on the wrong path to heal herself plus she is no where near over Dmitri who is she trying to fool herself that's why she wants to move so far away. Oh and Dmitri man up you were a bit over the top with how you spoke to Sasha and stop acting like your sister's shit don't stank.

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Date: December 18 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Sasha is so wrong her mother not wanting her is not the same as his father wanting to control him and she is wrong to suggest that he do it and it is not her place to try and get nadia and Dmitri talking again did she bump her head somewhere and you forgot to mention it.

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Date: October 01 2013

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Who will the sequel focus on?

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.