Penname: shadow [Contact]

Real name: Arlen

Member Since: July 20 2013

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For Her Pleasure by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57814
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Good update! I like them both Richard and Graham, I would like to see Richard struggle and sweat a little to get her.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I am loving Richard. Dominant, Alpha male is Hott! He's about to kick Annabelle' s ass. Thanks!

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Date: November 24 2014
Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111870
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yes! Ready for the date! Is HE just looking for a hook up with a smarter girl? Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2014
Title: Chapter 2: School Woes

Good start. Keep it going. Can't wait to meet Jameson. Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Love the cast, love the summary. 

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She has to give him a baby? Jameson is sounding kinda creepy. Let's see what the next chapter brings.

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Date: August 14 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Boundaries

I think Jameson is not too much.Everything was in the contract. Elise is being selfish, she signed the contract, Jameson gave her the money and then some so she needs to honor the contract and stop bitchin about it. Wear the lingerie for the man.

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Date: August 16 2014
Tangled Between the Sheets by Kaleah
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

Hello again my Chamber friends I appreciate the opinions that were posted here and the ones that were personally sent to me. I have decided that I will keep the names the same and the story of Kayla and Tyler as well, but I think I’m going to polish it up a little bit without changing the story line. As for the new characters I have decided to let this be an independent story and this will be the first chapter into the world of Kaila, Jordan and Canada with a few changes starting with where it takes place and a few other little things. I will be reposting this first chapter when i have it redone so please be looking out for it, and again thank you all so much for your input.

 

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2083
Read Count: 1127
Published: June 28 2014
Updated: June 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I never read the original story so there's no confusion for me. But I'm interested and would like you to continue.

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Date: June 28 2014
Scorpion by LolaWrites
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Was it by chance that they met? 

 

This is an introduction to two people, Justine and Mikkel, and how their lives will intersect from their first meeting. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4570
Read Count: 2086
Published: July 02 2014
Updated: August 03 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very good. Liking it. Want to definitely read more.Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it! I definitely want to read more. Where is Mikkel from? I guess next chapter. Please continue. Good start.

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Date: July 03 2014
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like it. Keep updating.

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Date: August 05 2014
Fate's Edge by GrlInGlasses546
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

The Keybearer has vanished, and the darkness is spreading beyond the rifts that connect each world. Without the Keybearer...darkness is consuming worlds without mercy...someone new must wield the Key.

Enter Ariel Rance, average college student completeing her first hectic year of college in the heart of New York City. With her best friend since childhood, Michaela Yuri, Ariel has dreamed of traveling the world to escape the constraints of everyday life. However, when an out-of-place hurricane hits NYC, Ariel's normal life takes a quick turn. 

The fate of the universe is now on this stylish 19 year-old's shoulders.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10393
Read Count: 13659
Published: July 05 2014
Updated: July 10 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: White Noise

I am really enjoying this story. I like your descriptive writing. Loved the outfit, it was on point. Thanks for the little taste but would like more. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It means a lot that you take your time out to review my work, and I really appreciate it. I try to provide detail so readers can clearly see what's going on in their heads. Yes, I know I was cruel teasing the new male, but much more is coming! Thank you again for the fabulous review!

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Date: July 12 2014
Title: Chapter 3: Clique

Really cool! I freaking love regular show! It's hilarious! Can't wait to read about the party. O I think Harriet is jealous of Arial, that's where the all the hateration is from.

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Date: July 07 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Kill the Stars

Very surreal, which is what it's suppose to be. You write awesome, I love your descriptions. It's a different story than what I'm used to reading here but refreshing. Please continue it. Hey since the game is Japanese, can I put in a request for a cute Asian male character.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it so far. But yes, I'd love to include an Asian Male character. Keep your eyes out for him, he's coming soon :D and I'll include a picture of him too!

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Date: July 07 2014
Title: Chapter 1: KH Cast Photos

Cool ! I like out of box original creative concepts.  Nice cast. Get it started girl.

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Date: July 05 2014
I Do by SaraiDanielle
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Today was Ryan and Zeke's wedding. It went without a hitch. Thanks to the people supporting them. Was everyone else satisfied? find out what happened before the nuptials took place.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6251
Read Count: 3369
Published: July 15 2014
Updated: September 12 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Characters

I love me some James McAvoy. Good cast:-)

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Date: July 15 2014
Title: Chapter 2: "Something Old"

This very creative. I like how you did the parents story and tied in the comb as something old for the wedding. It all interlocks nicely. Good job.

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Date: July 15 2014
The Big Kahuna by SleepEasy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16318
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Damn. Those Kahuna men are gorgeous! I like the rest of the cast also.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2014
Title: Chapter 5: The -Itis

I Loved the interaction between Ryan and Camille, it is adorable. I like that they have gotten to know each other and am looking forward to the date. The Janice and Ali's part was just "Eh" for me, I guess because I don't remember them from the previous chapters so there's no established emotional attachment to them.

#1. I find that people think because racism doesn't affect them directly or they are not racist themselves, it doesn't exist.

#5. Only frozen crawfish :-( but there are still some kick ass dishes that can be made from that.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I always sit and stare at my phone until I get that email like "soooo did they like it!!" 

I love Ryan and Camille's interaction as well, they're a lot a like and it makes them easy to write. This was actually Ali and Janice's interaction, we are sort of starting from the end with these too. I really wanted them to be "ending" while Camille and Ryan are beginning so that we can see both sides of relationships. 

 

1. Couldn't have said it better myself

 

2. Frozen crawfish is tasty, but there's something about making you fingernails bleed with spiciness that makes boiled crawfish amazing b

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Gym Rat

If the story is interesting, the longer the better and yours is very interesting. I'm loving the way you write. I think no matter what size you are or how you look or if you're a woman or a man, if you have confidence in yourself, it makes you 100 times more attractive. Confidence is the key and believe it.

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Date: August 12 2014
Title: Chapter 3: Fat Chance

5. Socks for your feet and no covers?

I really hope Camille is a confidant woman, just cause Ryan is Hot as shit Doesn't mean she isn't either.

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Date: August 12 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Parking Lot Pimpin

I soooo agree with your 5 points. I would love to have a conversation with you. Love the story. Ryan needs to stop lying, it's not good. Come clean. I like these two characters. Glad I finally got around to reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Date: August 12 2014
A Rose for Ms. Roberts by Vida Henley
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

"I want you to teach me everything you know about sex..."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Teacher/Student, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4890
Read Count: 2580
Published: August 30 2014
Updated: October 14 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: First Days, Meeting the Boys, and Unwanted Exercise

I like it. Kate and Tyler's interaction was cute.Keep going. I like the potential for a sub plot with the students especially Tyler's brother. 

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Date: August 30 2014
Emotionless by readlover
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Dedicated to my Bestfriend 



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous, Poetry
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 385
Read Count: 702
Published: September 14 2014
Updated: September 14 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Emotionless

This absolutely beautiful. I have definitely been there. Reading this makes me realize,I've come a long fucking way. I can't tell you why,how, or even when I matured enough to be unselfish and discovered who I truly was but reading this makes me thank God I did.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Shadow

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 15 2014
Play by CaramelGal
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

 

 

One night of passion. That all started with a grapefruit.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2527
Read Count: 1254
Published: September 25 2014
Updated: September 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Play

Very good Caramelgal. I liked it. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! If it weren't for you and the other ladies bringing up the topic I doubt I would have tackled it. Thanks for reading and reviewing shadow.

CG

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2014

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