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The Warrior's Bride by Spiderbite
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24537
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Four

This story is on my must read list. I love this challenge and this couple. This good man better not finish last. I love Pen and Brady.

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Date: May 08 2016
Title: Chapter 1: One

I am liking this so far. Brady is a man that deserves love and that music lol. Great start

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Date: May 08 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Two

Oh my I am loving this. Pen is exactly the woman that Brady needs. I don't think that hat he could even make himself touch her without Pen's ...ah help LOL. What an awesome chapter.

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Date: May 08 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Three

I love Brady Sloane and Penelope Sands. They are so passionate and it just pops off the screen. I am just addicted to them this chapter was so amazing and enthralling! As for Harvey I have no words for someone with the entitlement gene. BrDy shut him down once I think next it will be physical because Pen is his. LOve this story

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Date: May 08 2016
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Knight In Shining Armor by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11381
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: ~Chapter Three...~

What an awesome update. I am glad that they know now they are on the Sam elide but now Norvi has started something that I don't know if James can put it back together. He told him not to do anything. I love your characters interactions. I love this story please update again 

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Date: March 29 2016
Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

I am definately looking forward to more of this and what it will add to your series. I am already hooked. 

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Date: March 08 2016
Title: Chapter 2: ~Chapter Two...~

I love it! Kelsey is my kind of girl with her room full of karate movies!lol I love her. she and Nickolas will be Percy for each other if Patrick don't decide that he wants her then .....it's on. I love the banter between the four of them. Love the way that you have connected your stories absolutely so cool. I hope Joey falls off a cliff in an exploding car. Randall better watch his back because Kali if on his a$$. Excellent chapter

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Date: March 20 2016
Title: Chapter 4: ~Chapter Four...~

I will take what you can eek out and I hope that it is not the flu ( LOL)

I am totally a Nickolas/ Kelsey team. I love them together and I love her feistiness and intelligence. Keep it coming. I love this story

 

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Date: December 29 2017
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Domestic by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 154]
Summary:

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He wasn't anyone's choice for a companion. His crippled psyche made him ruthless not better. However, to one man he was perfect....a perfect weapon to control.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 24932
Read Count: 12824
Published: December 20 2017
Updated: February 22 2021

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Title: Chapter 5: V

The feelings that you have invoked in this story are amazing an brilliant. I need and want more please update!

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Date: December 23 2017
Title: Chapter 4: IV

I think it's called Love...like in I Love this story.

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Date: December 23 2017
Title: Chapter 3: III

Oh how I love this story! I love the way that you write them!

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Date: December 23 2017
Title: Chapter 1: I

Oh what an INCREDIBLE surprise.... I Had a story here with these two but I LOVE yours much more! I love this pairing!

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Date: December 23 2017
Title: Chapter 2: II

I must express to you the feelings that you weave around them is addictive. I love the way that you write them. And as always someone always wants to break that up. Please don't let that happen

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Date: December 23 2017
Title: Chapter 6: VI

Love this couple! I love how you write them. I have a feeling of doom though because of the Admiral. He will do something to hurt Khan which means he will harm Nyota. you better not LOL. Love this story

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Date: December 29 2017
Title: Chapter 7: VII

This story is so well crafted it has ...desire, suspense, drama, mystery, intrigue, violence, lust, jealousy and ROMANCE!!!! I LOVE this story please update more of it!!!

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2018

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