Penname: attheritz [Contact]

Real name: OLW

Member Since: June 03 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio: Teacher...avid reader...some would say I'm a workaholic...love creative people...and one day hope to find the courage to write a work of fiction for others to enjoy...just don't think I have the discipline for it right now...lol..


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It Is Yours by Sade
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A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

After being hired as the executive assistant to one of the youngest most influential and sexy corporate raiders of the 21st century Kenya Price comes face to face with her destiny.

 

Kenya is a mild mannered 22 year old thick sista with a beautiful soul and a caring spirit. Though her ultimate goal is to go back to university and earn a Degree in Childhood Education to become an Elementary school teacher, she takes the job working at the Roswell Corporation so she can save and finish off her schooling. Her motto is "Love can heal all wounds."

 

Grant Abraham Roswell III is a man that prides himself on a being a level headed, hardworking, no nonsense go getter. At the age of 24 he is a MIT graduate with more money than he could spend in a lifetime, he parties with rock stars, sleeps with models and feels that life cant get any better than that.His moto in life is "Who needs happiness when you have Money and Power?"

 

When Kenya enters his life and shows him there is more to life. Will he trust in Love or Will he let society take love away from him?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 20252
Read Count: 76147
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: April 29 2013

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, that Melissa is a real bitch...can't believe that trick took her 'relationship' to the court of public opinion...she has some nerve...Grant doesn't want her skank arse...yet she's too pathetic and self-loathing to crawl back under that rock she crawled from...the nerve of her...hope Grant makes good on his promise to ruin her and her father...action speaks louder than words for a skank like her...

I love Grant with Nathan and how excited he was in becoming a father...who knew that out playboy would turn out to be such a family man...can't wait until he asks Kenya for her hand in marriage...he's already thinking of himself, her, and Nathan as family...now time to make it official...

Loved the update...thanks for sharing...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Thank you as always for the review. hope you like the new update.

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Date: March 28 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Now that threw me for a loop...Melissa...I expected as much from that gold-digging whore...but his father...is he tapping that too...I wouldn't be surprised...Melissa's like mayonnaise...she gets spread around alot...but what would Grant's father motivation be for busting his son out like that for...could it be that he doesn't approve of Grant's relationship with Kenya...and cannot bear the thought that the family business will go to someone he considers 'beneath' him and the Roswells...he doesn't even know Nathan...he doesn't know anything about the special relationship and attachment Grant's developed for that young man...yet, he's trying to force Grant's hand and out him about his 'secret'...but little does he know...Grant's serious about these two people...as he said...they're the most important people in his life...and his father will have to come harder than that if he wants to separate Grant from his new family...

I already love the growing bond between Grant, Kenya, and Nathan...they're already behaving as a loving family...loved how Nathan snuck it in that Grant loved Kenya...too cute...but so right and true...

Can't wait to see what happens next...thanks for the wonderful update...see ya soon, I hope...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait between updates.

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Date: April 14 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loved how Kenya handled the desperate, pathetic Melissa...who tried to hand out digs and got dirt thrown in her own face...lol...

Grant's nose is wide open...he's so territorial when it comes to Kenya...even the limo driver isn't safe from his possessive posturing...

So it's jerk chicken and a "sleep-over"...ooooh....can't wait for the naughty...wink, wink

Update soon...the anticipation is killing me...



Author's Response: Im glad you like the interaction between Melissa and Kenya, those are the most fun for me to write...besides the lovin that is soon to come *wink wink*.

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Date: June 21 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So glad to see this story and you back...that was a screech moment if I ever read one...and poor Grant really put his foot his mouth, didn't he...hopefully...Kenya will give him a chance to redeem himself...and hopefully Grant will be able to control his raging hormones and possessive tendencies as he deals with this new wrinkle of discovery about Kenya...can't imagine this will be easy for a man as sexually aggressive as Grant...but as he's rapidly discovering...Kenya isn't your run-of-the-mill kind of girl...and hopefully he'll come to discover...she's well worth the wait...

Great update...and will be on the look-out for more updates from you on this and your other stories...



Author's Response: Thankies as always, Glad you enjoyed this update! all the reviews keep me going!

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Date: September 02 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update...so glad Kenya forgave him and Grant got out of the doghouse...though she did make him sweat...well, just a little...but something tells me we haven't seen the end of Melissa quite yet...

Looking forward to more...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the update. yes Melissa with be back.

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Date: January 25 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow...Grant sure cut Melissa down to size...her face sure cracked when he let her know he peeped her game...and who does she think she is to go threatening anybody...skanks like her come a dime a dozen...she was dismissed...couldn't happen to a 'nicer' girl...

Uh-oh...Grant's in the doghouse...Kenya is really POed at him, isn't she...this is new territory for Grant...wonder how he talks his way back into her good graces...can't wait to find out...



Author's Response: Some women just dont know when to give up and sadly for Grant, Melissa is one of those women. Thank you so much for the review.

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Date: January 02 2010
One Wish by Sade
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Summary:

 

A Special Thank You to MINX for the AMAZING banner.

Alicia meets Nick and they begin a Journey full of love, forgiveness and Passion. From two different worlds their love bridges the culture gap and emotional walls come crashing down. This is a Story of faith and love in its purest forms.

Alicia is in her third year of nursing school, at 23 she is more than ready to take on the real world after moving to New York far away from her overprotective family where she is learning to depend more on herself and taking big steps to her independance.

Nick is a first generation Chinese-American living in New York, at 25 he is done pleasing everyone but himself, he was to be a doctor like his father and for most of his life he spent his days and nights studying and working at that goal... In the last year before his graduation from medical school Nick decides to take a break and
somehow how ended up buying a club with his bestfriend Sean. one year later Nick is conflicted though he loves his life the one he made for himself he misses his family and he even misses medical school. After his little detour from the path his father wanted him to take his family relationships are strained at best. Alicia teaches him the meaning of forgiveness and shows him that its time to let go of the past to embrace the future. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 15038
Read Count: 39264
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: November 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Gram's is so right about Kandice...gah...I can't  stand her or her arrogant attitude as if the world owes her something...I believe her superiority complex is bred by people always catering to her every whim and not letting her facing the consequences of her own actions...she should have been left to stew in her own mess for a long while...then, when she'd gained some semblance of humility...then maybe, she'd appreciate having someone liek Alicia in her life...and there are just no words for Alicia's mom...is Kandice secretly her child...she behaves as if that's the case...always trying to guilt Alicia into doing Kandice's bidding...Nick's a better one than me...but he love Alicia so much that he just wants to relieve the stress in her life...so against his better judgment...he bails Kandice out under conditions...but let's see how long Kandi-ho keeps her end of the bargain...

Can't wait to see what happens next...thanks so much for the update...

 



Author's Response: Thank you as always for the wonderful review.

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Date: April 11 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love Alicia's Nana...she seems to be the only one in her family who truly loves and appreciates the real beauty in Alicia...Nanas are so special...and she's a mess, too...sounds like Nana still likes to get her groove on...

Nick and Alicia are already in love...now, Nick's father has had this setback...what will it mean for them...wonder what his mother will say now that Nick has introduced Alicia as his girlfriend...something tells me it won't be smooth sailing...

Looking forward to more...thanks for updating...

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

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Date: December 20 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, how I can't stand racists...Nick's mom takes the cake...the bitch...yeah, I said it...hope her miserable arse gets what she so richly deserves...her husband barely tolerates her...certainly doesn't respect her...and now her son may turn his back on her simple behind...

Looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Hope to write something very soon like tonight maybe.

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Date: December 31 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Uh-oh...why does Kandice always show up like a bad rash...in jail...I wonder whatever for...and why is Alicia's mom calling her to bail her out...I think it's time for Alicia to stand up for herself and not keep letting her family take advantage of her...this is ridiculous...isn't Kandice supposed to be a grown woman...why doesn't she call one of her many men friends to help her out...

Glad Nick's father likes Alicia...and he recognizes how good she is for his son...can't wait until they get some alone time...but I see the drama that is Kandice doesn't want to give them a break...

Thanks for the update...please, don't wait so long until the next one...I really love your stories...



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the new update!

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Date: January 23 2010
For Love and Football by Sade
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Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013

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Title: Chapter 11: Meet the team.

I knew that skank didn't actually know who the father of her child was...and the nerve she had to tell Kevin that he would be taking care of the 'both' of them...ummm...if that kid is Kevin's...it's the baby that will benefit...I hope Kevin is smart enough to put the money into a trust fund for the child so his/her money-grubbing mother can't get her grimy hands on it...all Rina wants is a meal ticket...she could care less about that baby...

And now what does that other skank, Sara, want...and what's so important she has to talk to Kevin alone about...poor Grace...she'll have to continue to be strong...these two whores want stop until they get her man...time to put her foot down...or preferably in someone's rear end...



Author's Response:

LOL

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. I hope you find the new update to your satisfaction.

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Date: June 15 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Meeting Rina

Sade...you know, I'd be so upset with you if your stories weren't so goood...but I forgive the absences and welcome you back with open arms....

Glad Kevin and Grace showed up at Rina's as a united front...something tells me that she intends to make life difficult for the newlyweds...and that viper Sara has slowly been trying to worm her way into Kevin's life...decorating his penthouse...putting her 'touches' here and there...glad Kevin gave Grace carte blanche to change anything in HER new home...and that she wanted them to take on the project together as a couple...they really are so good for each other...can't wait for the next update...stop making us wait so long...you're a talented writer...and your stories are the bomb...write...write...and write some more...



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. hope you enjoy the next update.

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27 2010
Title: Chapter 3: The Date!

Glad to see you back, Sade!!!

I've missed this story and the others...so glad Kevin was honest with Grace about who he is and what he did to his team mate before they met...I think Grace handled the news maturely and am glad to see honesty seems to be growing theme in their marriage...which is a good thing...Grace is slowly finding out things about her new husband and she hasn't turned tail and ran yet...seems like Kevin is truly falling for his new bride and beginning to get possessive of her already...this could be very interesting...

Uh-oh...now is the moment of truth...Kevin gets to meet Grace's family...I can't wait to see how he handles that in the next update...thanks for sharing and update soon!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait. Expect a chapter tonight or tomorrow, hope to keep you interested.

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Date: July 13 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Family

Aw, hell naw...you didn't just go there did you, Sade...things were going along just 'too good to be true'...and just when I thought that Grace and Kevin really had a chance to make a go of it...who's on the phone...is it the team mate's wife...damn, Kevin...does he ever wear a jacket when he does the do...this smells like some big time trouble for Kevin and his new wife...and will he still have a wife if what I suspect is true and he's knocked up some other man's wife...

I loved Kevin meeting Grace's family...he's finally found a family unit he can fit right in since he seems to be not close to his own...and then...well, you know... 

And let's not forget that we still don't know the outcome from Kevin and Grace's honeymoon night...could there be another bun in the oven...so many directions this story can take...can't wait to see which path you choose...great story...please, please, update soon...I love this story...

 



Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait, Im sooo glad you enjoyed it! I love writing it for you ladies! thank you for the review.

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Date: September 03 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

The skeezers are coming out of the woodwork...Kevin, Kevin, Kevin...thank goodness his taste in women have drastically improved...

Are Rina and Sara working together...are they comparing notes...yet both see herself as one day becoming Mrs. Kevin Denson (as if either of those skanks still had a snowball's chance in hell with Kevin again...because seriously...once you've become accustomed to filet mignon...you can't go back to ground round)...and they have both seriously underestimated Grace...no, babygirl is far from the sweet, naive, push-over of a country bumpkin they pegged her as being...Grace is a lady in every sense...but she doesn't mind baring her claws when the need arises...and she's going to get plenty opportunities with those pit vipers around trying to push up on her husband...

That's right, Kevin, insist on a DNA test...and hopefully, if the baby is yours...you and Grace can go for full custody because someone like Rina doesn't deserve nor need to be any poor kid's mother...she couldn't even refer to her own child as anything but an 'it'...that's some maternal instinct for you...she thinks she's bought her ticket to easy street laying flat on her back and producing a kid...but something tells me not all is as what it seems...why hesitate with taking the test if you're so sure that Kevin is the father...I suspect that she doesn't know who her babydaddy is...

Looking forward to more...Grace, girl, stay strong...your man loves you and only you...but be prepared for all the frontal, backward, and sideward assaults coming your way...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

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Date: April 11 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Pregnant?!?

Grace is quite amazing...glad Kevin recognizes it...loved how he couldn't even admit to himself that he'd never willingly let her go...don't know how things are going to turn out for them and how much trouble this revelation will cause for them...but I do know they will face it as a united front...together...that bodes well for them as far of the future goes...

I also like how Grace handled the situation upon hearing Kevin's news...often, we as women, like to hold the past against the man we love...Kevin made a serious mistake before he met his wife...used some very bad judgement...and Grace recognized that he had a life before her...and she's woman enough to face the consequences of his actions with her man...she's a real woman...oh how I love this couple and this story...can't wait to read more...

Thanks much...please update soon!!!



Author's Response: Im glad you like it, thank you so much for reading and thanks for the review.

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Date: December 18 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Kevin and Grace's time.

I love Grace and Kevin together...I really hope that baby really isn't Kevin's...seems Kevin wants to be a daddy...but to his wife's child...looks like Grace is already changing him for the better...he wants to put down roots...

More please...love this story!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update, hope to keep you interested.

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Date: December 29 2009
Title: Chapter 7: S.O.B

Sara is a real bitch...gads...she's worse than Rina...how insulting...putting his WIFE in economy class...I hope gets her read with a quickness...with all the parasites in his life before Grace...it's a good thing he met her...

Kevin is falling more deeply in love with his new bride...whether he wants to admit it to himself or not...he is indeed whipped...she has become a blessing in his life...I hope he cherishes her...I love how he didn't make a decision without consulting her...that's something that witch Sara hadn't counted on...Kevin is in this for keeps...he loves him some Grace...and she is not merely a passing fad...

Can't wait to see what happens with the meeting with Rina or Kevin tell a bitch (Sara) what's what when it comes to disrespecting his new bride...

Great update...and absolutely love the new banner...



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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Date: January 01 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

So that tired ho still thinks has a chance with Kevin...ew...Kevin slept with the wicked witch once in the past...and now that she's had a taste of his 'joystick' she wants more (excuse my language)...and thinks she can disrespect his wife and walk all over her to get to Kevin...time for Grace to get in touch with her inner rhymes with witch...and tell a heifer off...but I like your style...kill her with kindness though I think it will be lost on a subhuman like Sara...and Kevin is not having the disrespect...on to that other viper, Rina...

Great update...looking forward to more...



Author's Response: thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the update.

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Date: January 24 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Kevin and Sara talk.

I love the influence Grace is having on Kevin's life...he's putting those two witches in check and slowly falling deeply in love with his new wife...I also love Grace's quiet strength...she's the stability and calming factor that Kevin always needed in his chaotic life...and now he can't imagine a life without her...they make me smile...

Of course, the vipers Rina and Sara are not done by longshot...and I fully expect them to rear their ugly heads fairly soon again...loved when that little boy in the elevator called her crazy...because that's what she is...crazy...and she bears watching...

Looking forward to more...please don't make us wait so long for the next update...



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the chapter, I hope the new update is as good as you expected.

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Date: June 28 2011
Four Walls, For Love, Forever by tpeezy22
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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 49397
Published: August 29 2009
Updated: January 24 2010

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, this story speaks to my heart...I'm a simple 'country' girl too...can imagine the culture shock from moving from the country to the big city like Mackensie....whereas people in the country are more laid back and hospitable...and the face-paced lifestyle of the city makes them appear 'cold' on first impression...

Looking forward to reading more...good start...

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Date: August 29 2009
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Series: Uhura's World Series
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Completed:No
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Published: January 01 1970
Updated: January 01 1970

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Oh thank you, thank you...for the update and especially Nikolai's POV while Sunny was locked in the safe room...the raw emotion...the desolation that any minute his world could be turned on its axis...perfection...and finally...THE CALL from Adu...that assured him that Sunny was safe and unharmed...I don't adequate words to explain how beautifully written that was...and I like how you slid in a little bit of Nikolai's history as the Nikolai the Bloody in there...

The reunion in Paris was amazing and oh, so hot...loved her massaging her man and reaquainting herself with him...the only thing that would it more perfect would have been her telling him what he so desperately wants/needs to hear...she loves him...oh, please...let it be soon...and I wouldn't mind if they've created a life together...they would make wonderful parents...and that little one would be so loved...Sunny says she his forever...now say THE WORDS, girl...

However, I was a little perplexed with Royce extending the invitation for Sunny to go back to the Sudan in the future...like Nikolai...I don't think I could take that again...I hope the wanderlust is finally out of her system...

I can't wait until Part 2...I'm strung out on this story and not ashamed at all to admit it...as always...superb!!!

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Date: February 21 2010
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The Clause by Dsmoothone
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Summary:

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banner by minx 


Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76818
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 12: Nashville, TN

That was absolutely lovely, D...I knew their first time would be so special and I wasn't disappointed...but I feel this is the calm before the storm...something tells me the bliss will not continue indefinitely...but at least I got the 'I love you's'...that will have to substain me through the heartbreak and angst coming their way...I loved this beautifully moving update...update soon...loving this story and this couple...

Author's Response:

I've finally updated... a year later, but thanks for reading when you did!

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Date: April 24 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Uh-Oh...

Aw, sookie...sookie now...it's about to be on and popping!!!

Why Chad...why...did you have to be such a nice guy and take Heather into your apartment...and in the process shoot yourself in the foot with Dani...messed my girl's head up...you did...now Dani's out playing with fire...and looking to get burned...

Let the drama commence!!!!



Author's Response: I think Chad will redeem himself... eventually

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Date: March 28 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Things happen

D...you know you're wrong for that turn of events...my goodness, why is us gon' do now...my poor Chad...what was he thinking to get that drunk and end up naked in bed with an equally naked Heather...I know that's going to come back and bite him in the butt...but knowing how conniving Heather is...I wouldn't put it past her to set up this little incident...

Now, that throws a damper on the Nashville trip...even if Chad and Dani go all the way...Heather will still have her blackmail photos to throw a monkey wrench in what should be a happy union...I'm already weeping for them...don't know if Chad should just 'fess up and let Dani deal...or keep praying that Heather will keep her big mouth shut...but who am I kidding...drama and more drama ahead...

Looking forward to what's up next...thanks for the update...



Author's Response:

I love to read your reviews... Thank you so much!

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Date: April 23 2010

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.