Penname: Suprina Frazier [Contact]

Real name: Suprina Frazier

Member Since: June 20 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Writer of Edgy Inspirational and Secular novels. I'm also an avid reader and a mother of two.

Any WIPs that I have on this site will be updated mainly on the weekends (bearing no unforeseen circumstances). Completed stories are subject to be removed when ready for publication.

Thanks for reading along with me!




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For Love and Football by Sade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 489]
Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: The morning after and well into the evening.

Good start and great storyline. A few errors here and there, but nothing distracting. Keep up your momentum. I'd like to see how this story ends.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review~ I hope to keep you interested.

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Date: June 20 2009
THE MAIN EVENT. by wwefanforlife
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
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In the left corner is Tanya Rodriguez, a woman that has it all. A great business, the best friend in the world and a mother and father who love their baby girl. But the one thing she's always wanted but never had is love. True love.

In the right corner is Jaycee Cristoforo. He's at the top of his profession as a sports entertainer. He's sexy and with millions of adoring female fans Jaycee knows he can have nearly any woman in the world but feels he is still missing something.

When these two meet will they find what they are looking for?

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 47718
Read Count: 19329
Published: February 09 2011
Updated: January 01 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I...LOVE...IT!!!

You did a great job on this story. I so love the humor that you threaded throughout. I LOL when Jaycee got all distracted in the ring by her...uhm...beauty. LOL.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

P.S. I can't STAND gyms that treat their overweight patrons like dirt. I'm glad Tanya opened up her own gym and showed them how to REALLY do it.

I also see that you added part of your real name as one of the characters. Smooth. Real smooth. tee-hee.



Author's Response: yeah i got that idea to add my real name from another author wonder who that could be mmmmmmmmm lol. Yeah i hate that gym or any other place treat people like dirt and don't real care how a person feel. yeah he sure did get distracted by her beauty yeah beauty lol. thanks for the review girl.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: February 10 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 part two

That Charles is trouble with a capital T. I don't like him at all. Hating on his brother for nothing. smh

Thanks for the update...and for keeping it good!



Author's Response:

Yes Charles is a big jerk and trouble for sure. It is a shame when family can't support family. Thank for the review.

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 part one

So sorry that Tony and Trina haven't quite worked out the way we thought...yet.  Perhaps there's still hope for them? Pretty please....lol!

Thanks for the update!

 



Author's Response:

Who knows if there hope for those two lol. Thank you for the review

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Date: November 19 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great cast! Not surprised at all to see John Cena among them. lol.

Author's Response:

lol girl you know i had to put that so dam sex he get the underwear of a nun lol.  Glad you like the cast thanks for the review.

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Date: February 10 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter. Can't STAND Coco. Love the banter between the friends. So sorry for Jay though. He messed up by dancing with Miss Thang-Thang. I hope Tanya gives me another chance to impress her.

Thx for keeping it good.

P.S. No worries on the formatting for me. I understand how it goes. Plus I was still able to follow the flow of the story.



Author's Response: Yeah Jay did mess up big time dancing with the walking STD my CoCo but hopefully he can make it up to Tanya. Thanks for understanding girl with the format. I will try to get it right on the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed
Date: February 27 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope she goes out with Jay. He deserves a 2nd chance. Also I loved how he found out about her owning the gym. This way she didn't have to come off bragging or acting like she was tryna get his business cause he's a celebrity.

Keep up the good work, Wwwefanforlife. So far so GREAT!!



Author's Response: Yeah Tanya is a woman who doesn't brag of what she has and want to Jay to know Tanya who just herself.  Hope she give him a second chance too I mean look at him lol I give him 50 million chance if I was her lol. Glad you like it so far and thank you for the review.

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Date: March 20 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm glad that visit with HER parents went so well. Pops had me nervous for a minute. lol. Also I LOVE a man that can cook. Oh yeah, and did I say that I LOVE a man that can cook? tee-hee.

Thanks!

 

PS. MomDukes is a trip. Talking bout had she hit that yet. Too funny!!!



Author's Response:

Lol I know couldn't belive that mom said that either lol. Yeah glad that you like it and you and me both love a man that can cook. thanks for the update.

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Date: April 21 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Random thoughts...

Awwww...Jay loves da kids. :D

Nana ain't no joke, stealing cars and such. lol

She hating on my boy Regis. I LIKE Regis! Think he's a cool old cat. lol.

Bird fever? LOL!!!

Nana's friends are just as crazy as she is.

Look at Jay staking his claim. You go, boy!



Author's Response:

Yeah Jay love kids  he love supporting them and putting smile on their face. Yeah Nana Rose is gangster big time lol. You got to love her yeah bird fever kath need to cut back on the drinks lol.  Glad you like the chapter and thank you for the review.

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Date: April 28 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was sweet of Jay to want to make her smile always. As for the love scene, it was HAWTT!!! Definitely a 9 1/2 on a scale of 1 - 10.

Thanks for the read!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review yeah Jay loves Tanya alot.

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Date: October 16 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 part one

Great post! Tanya was sooooo wrong for telling the fib about Trina. Got Tony all upset and bothered over nothing. lol. Even so, it might help him step his game up.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Yeah Tony boy need to step up his game other wise he lose her. thank for the review means alot that someone reading this story.

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Date: May 28 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 part one

"...the last time we went out my life flashed before my eyes. Twice."

I love that line and she's so right. ROFL!

Thx for the update!



Author's Response:

Lol yeah I think why she proably updated her will before she went out on another date with him lol. Thank for the review.

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Date: May 28 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm glad everything went great on Tony's date, but...OMG, I hope he didn't kill or paralyze Jay!

Great post!

 



Author's Response:

Yes this time tony didnt' harm or try to kill anyone on their date lol. You have to wait to see if Jay alive on paralyze. Thank for the review.

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Date: May 28 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

First off, I'm soooooo thrilled that you decided to continue the story. Woot!

Secondly, I'm even more thrilled that Jay is not paralyzed. He's bone-headed for sure, especially about even THINKING about getting back in the ring, but not paralyzed.

Tanya did what she had to do. It was painful, but necessary. Especially since I suspect she's pregnant and thus don't need to see her baby-daddy get hurt again. I mean, she is pregnant, right? If not, what's with all the throwing up? Hmmmm? ROFL!

Thanks for the GREAT chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Girl you and babies lol. Yes Jay is bone headed big time. He thinks he super man and nothing can touch him. Hopeful he listen to Tanya words. Thank you for the review.

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Date: January 16 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.