Penname: fcho4506 [Contact]

Real name: Fauzia Choudhry

Member Since: November 30 2014

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24537
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Three

Where exactly is penelope from when she mentions that she is from half way across the world? 



Author's Response:

Sorry I meant to say half way across this country not world. I will change it. She is from the western US

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: April 05 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69509
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

I just happen to stumble on this story and really enjoyed it.  R u planning to update because it has all the ingredients to be a very interesting story.  

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 01 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Thanks for the update.  Just one question....how old is Alexa?   From the way she is portrayed she can't be more than 19 or 20.   Am I right?

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Thanks for the update.  Just one question....how old is Alexa?   From the way she is portrayed she can't be more than 19 or 20.   Am I right?



Author's Response:

Hey! She's early twenties. 22. Brody is a little older. 25 :)

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So many feels........they so belong together.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 09 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Plz plz update soon.  Is Brody going to bump into Alexa soon?

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 10 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So good.....great update....plz update soon.  Have a feeling Brody is going to bump into Alex at the exotic night club

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 11 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Great update.......they r together....hopefully things will sort themselves out.  Can't wait for what happens next.

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Date: March 12 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This story is just so good.......plz update soon.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This story is just so good.......plz update soon.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This story is just so good.......plz update soon.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So so good.....he is kind and he is hot.......so where does one get a Brody.....loving this story 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So so good.....he is kind and he is hot.......so where does one get a Brody.....loving this story 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So so good.....he is kind and he is hot.......so where does one get a Brody.....loving this story 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody is just a gem.....Alex better not mess it up.....can't wait for "what happens next"

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody is just a gem.....Alex better not mess it up.....can't wait for "what happens next"

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody is just a gem.....Alex better not mess it up.....can't wait for "what happens next"

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody is just a gem.....Alex better not mess it up.....can't wait for "what happens next"

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody is just a gem.....Alex better not mess it up.....can't wait for "what happens next"

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: March 17 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

This is stupid.....This is his dad.....how can he not be aware of brody's problem....and really what has pride got to do with telling his dad about his health....This story is just going around in circles for no reason.....annoying



Author's Response:

It's all coming in full circle soon! ^.^

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: September 02 2015

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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118377
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please come back to the chamber.  Or provide a link to purchase Lover's dance.  Please do publish a print version as it would be wonderful as a gift.  Thank you and seasons greetings.



Author's Response:

Hey fcho4506,

I do plan on returning to the chamber, thanks for bearing with the wait. Hopefully it won't be too long now.

K. Carr

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: December 19 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 296]
Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 424941
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 10: Fighting A Lost Battle

He did not wear a condom.....

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: February 16 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4646
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Chapter 5

Love yr story. Pls update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: December 01 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Six

This is so fantastic thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: December 09 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30364
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What happens next?  Pls update.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed
Date: December 03 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.