Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40858
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Elise is changing for the better...I like her as I watch her growth...she's definitely more mature and grounded...good character development...

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Date: April 03 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Good story...

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Date: June 26 2016

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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69504
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Alexa and Brody

Love Brody and Alex. So romantic.

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

I love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! <3

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Date: August 18 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start. Why did she take the money and why was she with him. I need to read and find out!

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

I liked learning a bit more about Alex. Good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Cute!



Author's Response:

:D

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Good writing and good story.

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Date: March 03 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Poor Alex. Well written story that is really good.

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Date: March 04 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Loved this chapter!

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Date: March 09 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Good chapter!

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Date: March 11 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Excellent chapter! 

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Date: March 12 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Loving Alexa and Brody!

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Date: July 31 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Good chapter...good book

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Date: August 05 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

So sad...good work...



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: August 19 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Elena is sick...so sad...



Author's Response:

She's definitely got some troubles. We're going to hear about this in the next chapter so stay tuned! :D

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Date: August 25 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34239
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Taken down for publication!

Not trying to be rude but i'm just correcting a grammatical error. It's "reins" as in those used for guiding horses during riding not "reigns" as in rule over. Griffin is letting Roxie take the "reins" not "reigns".  I don't know many black women like me who are into horses so I understand the mistake.  Well written chapter. I like Roxie and Griffin and look forward to reading more of your work in this book.

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Date: February 10 2015

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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

 

What happens when you begin to second guess the gift you gave to someone? Do you ask them for it back? Or perhaps you just take it back? Maybe that gift was fine for then, but holds no value now. Five years later, Teddy considers re-gifting but Tanner is worried that it is the same old tired shit just wrapped up in a shinier package. *Sequel to “The Gift of Goodbye”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10569
Read Count: 7612
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 19 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They belong together!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Stupid David is gonna get it if he messes with Teddy!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

David is an idiot.

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Date: February 21 2015

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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83453
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen

My biggest problem with this story is Noah's crueltyl to Amora is deemed acceptable because he's sexy, white and good in bed.  When Amora first arrived, he locked her in the basement with a chain around her ankle like a slave as well as beating her like a slave after her escape attempt.  Yet he says later that he wanted her because he saw an abused girl that didn't know love, and then proceeeds to abuse her too. Good sex and new clothes are not love, especially in the face of being chained and beaten so at what point has he really shown her love?  Amora doesn't leave the premises.  He hasn't even taken her out.   Showing someone off to your friends like a trophy isn't love.  He got her pregnant because he wanted her to have his child not because he cared about what she thought.  She has no education and he has given no thought to what she wanted out of life.  Yet he's a good guy because he's white, sexy and wealthy and said he was sorry for beating her? I think the story is well written, I just wished that Amora was shown as having more value for who she has shown herself to be as a person to Noah.  She still brought light to his life in spite of the cruelty he brought to hers.  At some point, especially since they are bringing a child into the world together, he should really atone for his sins against Amora. 

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Date: July 09 2015

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14874
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ahhh...the best story of forbidden love I have had the pleasure to read...it's all because your talent is so amazing..I love how you bring Carter (Mikhail) and Tamryn to life...so beautiful in the midst of so much ugly...I know you haven't updated in a while and I love your newest story but I hope your muse returns for this one at some point...you are brilliant



Author's Response:

Wow.  Thanks for the amazing review!  You've made my week with this : )

I hope to get back to this story soon, but won't post until it's complete.  There's so much going on with the plot and subplots that I want to be able to update frequently (as I edit) so that readers don't have to do a lot of re-reading to make sense of it all.  I don't know how long that'll take, but I definitely plan to finish this one.

Thanks again for the wonderful compliment, Jahchannah, and for your interest! 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2015

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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111866
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 2: School Woes

Interesting concept.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Clause

Medical school has many options for students to get financial aid, particularly students considered minority like Elise, so the sugar daddy option just seems farfetched for a medical student.  Also working 2 jobs in medical school is unlikely since most medical students are not even allowed to work on campus because of the possible interference with schoo studies.  So again that aspect for me lacks plausibility.  I could better understand the sugar daddy optioh in a different career choice where the options for financial aid are quite different,..but again I am coming from a position where I have information that other readers may not have.

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Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

At this point, her chances of becoming a surgeon are beyond finances. She has to get into a surgical residency after medical school and working 2 jobs suggests her grades are not llikely the best so getting a recommendation for a surgical residency is not  high.   Again plausibility...



Author's Response:

okay well this is just a story that is fiction by the way. I think most people here know that working two jobs in medical school may not be real but this is just a story only for entertainment. If the facts bother you or if they are not real enough thats your opnion and thanks for the facts. It's not serious. 

Thanks.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starhalf-star
Date: February 23 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.