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Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.
FB Author page: Alma Muerte.
OK, I'm officially hooked on this story!
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedOK, I'm officially hooked on this story!
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedThis story to me is quite an original supernatural tale. Though Arric is an Alpha, he has a strong mate in Lyssa which so contrasts to typical werewolf/supernatural stories I read. Good work!
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Such an originally excellent supernatural tale! You rock!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Wow, poor Lyssa is all I can say...caught between the lover she wants and the lover to whom she is promised...good chapter
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This book is so sad! So many mistakes have been made and much has been forfeited. Lyssa has to be strong but I am happy her uncle bound the vampires not to harm her or her child. Well you said not every story has a happy ending and w ith the never ending pain Lyssa seems to endure for her Ulric I even wonder why I am reading. But it's a good, well written story, I'm glad you returned.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Excellent chapter! Lyssa is awesome but I feel so sad for her. Leaving Arric will be difficult and being with Eros will be like a betrayal to her love...Will Eros develop feelings for Lyssa, I wonder or is he even capable...And how will Arric respond once he learns the truth of the bargain Lyssa had to make to save him...he'll be heartbroken...this story is so well written!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Eros is catching feelings? Odin's beard! Good story!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed So sad! A resolution to this situation in favor of Lyssa and Arric together seems so unlikely...yet I hope for Lyssa to return to her true love Arric...I think Eros is forbidden to drink from Lyssa because he will catch feelings...Lyssa is so powerful and could likely be stronger than Annabel...at least I think so...excellent story!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Poor Lyssa...how much betrayal and heartache does she have to endure...and now at the hands of her beloved Uncle...trust no one not even Arric for they all have been selfish with Lyssa...she alone has given and gotten so much less in return...sure Arric loves Lyssa but he betrayed her first by taking his wolf mate Soraya...Lyssa gave her life for love...but she has been hurt by all who supposedly love her...when will she ever come first for them...excellent work!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Lyssa should be head of the coven!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Arric is so in love with Lyssa...he sees that her ability to love deeply and strongly makes her special...she forgave her uncle and in doing so Lyssa also completely forgave Arric...he will rescue her from Annabell...great story!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed This book is so incredible...I hope at some point to be graced to read the remainder of the tale that was deleted...this chapter reminds me of how beautiful the love between Lyssa and Arric is to read...you rock with this book...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Ebony 'Bunny' Banks is the type of girl Clark Davis never thought he'd be in love with. With her cloud of hair and perfect imperfections, she wasn't the girl his parents or society taught him to go for. Clark Davis is the type of guy Ebony Banks would never notice with his close tie to the cheering hags and his movie star appearance. They are on two completely
opposite sides of the popularity scale. Him being a pretty popular guy and her a wallflower. Yet somehow these two seemed to have found each other and the odds of love seems to be in their favor.
Clark seems like the typical rich high schooler except for his dreams about his mother have me intrigued. I do wonder how he and Bunny will cross paths.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Bunny seems very different from Clark and actually I like her. It's still early to know much about her except she seems to march to a different beat and will be herself. Again I am intrigued to see how these two come together.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed He wasn't Romeo and She wasn't Juliet. However it was a Love Story Nonetheless.
Beautiful love story...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed A girl and a Homeless Man with Violet eyes find a common place in a cafe Called Melancholy.
This story is similar to New Home but different too. Alana seems to have a form of OCD so her back story could be interesting.
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedAlana clearly has issues that cause her to lead a very structured life and somehow her connection to Charlie could help her break free from these constraints she has placed on herself. So I like the story idea as it seems original to me and it's definitely different from the story New Home.
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It had been five years. Cynthia had moved on with career and her life after not hearing from Caleb, her drug addict mess of a rock star boss, for four of those years. When Caleb returns from Ireland, she faces her feelings for him while trying to survive a new strained relationship with another man. Will Caleb be clean and will he find his way back into her life and her heart?
Sequel to Foolish
Caleb has to redeem himself in the eyes of her parents. It's understandable. Hopefully he can!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Whoa, didn't expect that one! Good writing!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Didn't see that coming. Natia is Ace! I like that she's strong and tough.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Why would they trust Adam not to betray them? How are they going to prevent it, babysit him 24/7? This aspect of the story makes absolutely no sense. And Natia is supposed to be lusting after the guy that tried to kill her? Again after a betrayal of this magnitude they let Adam off this easy and expect him to simply comply with their wishes makes absolutely no sense to me. Hopefully in time, the method behind what I see as madness will become clear.
Reviewer: jahchannah SignedLynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that. She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back? And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?
This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber. I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story. So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.
Ssul is disgusting and clearly learned nothing from his "mistakes" with Alicia. The dumb man should take responsibility for his marriage failing and do better. Sexing the mistress even in anger isn't doing better. But Malcolm likes Lynne. Cute!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.