Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104074
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

What a mismatched pair!  Hard to see these two getting together!  I like that Devyn is not intimidated by Jason.

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Date: June 02 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

I'm not liking Erin or Jason.  Poor Devyn has to deal with them both!

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Date: June 02 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Devyn doesn't owe Jasaon anything?  He has offered no explanation as to why he wants information from her.  So she should tell him because it's easy?  I'm with Devyn.  He did barge into her life with an expectation.  He's not the police and the matter is not legal so Jason has no right to expect anything from her.  But he does...rich, pompous jerk...

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Date: June 02 2015

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

I loved this story! 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2015

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[Reviews - 427]
Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94668
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Good story...the pace got rushed towards the end especially dealing with Franklin Miller and Albert Wainwright's fascination with Sugar...but overall good work...

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Date: April 05 2016

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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

mother of the heir

 

"My ascension to Hell is far from what you're after; the birth of the End of Days is hardly suited for the faint of heart. Even if it was my fate from a life before this one. No one teahes you how to trust yourself in times of uncertainty. Nor do they warn you about the power of your own vulnerability. The worst part is knowing too late that you're never whole until a vampire has consumed you into the absolute darkness."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Horror
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 73939
Read Count: 19270
Published: January 27 2012
Updated: May 11 2018


Title: Chapter 8: FOUR : The Fallacy of Fear

I like the story but I think Neg being blindsided with her mate and family is not cool...she has no memory of Kosta or their past life...why not bring Nef up to speed first...why not rebuild their relationship first...



Author's Response:

This is kinda crazy, but my sister actually wondered the same exact thing. I wonder that the severity of her being left in the dark about everything is possibly exacerbating her outburts. 

 

Thanks for reading, hun! 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: November 07 2016

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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24537
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: One

I like Brady...he's portrayed as a good man who is at a disadvantage because of the sacrifice he made in doing his job...I like that you are giving the love interest in an IR relationship an honorable man...I look forward to more...

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Date: April 03 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Two

I like Brady and Pen...though the story is moving quickly to the physical, it's written as if they both sense the underlying strength of character and integrity that each possess...so many stories start with lust like a bw has no value until what's between her legs is first discovered...intelligence and strenth of character matter so much more especially in the long term...good job... 

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Date: April 03 2016

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 77991
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 13: {Thirteen}

Wow, this book is sooo good. I hope you will one day return to the saga of Will and Ana

 

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Date: June 30 2015

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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Once in your life you find somebody who turns your world completely upside down. You love them just as much as you hate them. You do things you wouldn't normally do but everything you do, you do it like crazy..



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: Challenges
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11309
Read Count: 20080
Published: June 11 2012
Updated: June 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Like Crazy

That was wild and I loved it!

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Date: May 22 2015

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Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75327
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 6: C is for Compromise

I am really enjoying this book so far.  A few grammatical and spelling mistakes are present, but that's not a big deal.  Definitely a good story!

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Date: January 25 2015

Title: Chapter 11: H is for Hurricane

If the storm is so bad, AJ can't get home, how could the pizza get delivered? Otherwise, good story.

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Date: January 25 2015

Title: Chapter 14: K is for Kisses

AJ is breaking down Esther's walls.  Good!

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Date: January 25 2015

Title: Chapter 18: O is for Obstacles

William is sick.  Poor Esther.

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Date: January 26 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Q is for Questions

Her mother is awful!  Poor Esther! AJ should have given her a chance to explain especially since he knows she's been abused.  He let his hurt overide his protective instincts.  Excellent story!

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Date: January 26 2015

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[Reviews - 424]
Summary:

She despised celebrities, maybe even hated them. That was until she met him. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 88706
Read Count: 297145
Published: June 18 2012
Updated: April 23 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Talk about crap friends....

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Date: October 08 2015

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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6946
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 3: 3 - Heat

So Raven is fine being molested by a stranger? Good to know...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed half-star
Date: May 01 2015

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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Good start!  I hate Dice and wonder that Camille is a bit lacking in the self-esteem department to be with such a druggie and woman abuser.  Poor Xavier!  I don't know how he yet fits the story but I'll read to find out!  

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Date: June 10 2015

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Abuse stories are hard to real but, unfortunately, abuse is the reality for some women.  I just hope Camille is able to get out of her situation before tragedy meets her.

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Date: June 10 2015

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Great!  I love Xavier and Nick! Men who can kick a** are so sexy!  And Dice needed a good a** kicking.

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Date: June 10 2015

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Great!  I love Xavier and Nick! Men who can kick a** are so sexy!  And Dice needed a good a** kicking.

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Date: June 10 2015

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Good chapter!  But men like Dice are bad pennies, always rolling back around...poor girl is in for more trouble before it's over...

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Date: June 11 2015

Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

My condolescences for your loss.  

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: June 12 2015

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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47468
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 5: You Shook Me All Night Long

This story is so passionately hot!  There is a visceral connection between these two that waits to be further explored...I hope you return one day soon...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I am weaving the tale...but it is just coming in short bursts. I hope too post something soon.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

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In the world there are two types of people. One’s who need a label to understand who they are. Then there are the people who know who they are. Kaia was a part of the group who knew who she was. But when the schools most prestige student Seth begins to show interest in her will she stick to her values or fall for his charm. Is Seth as put together as he thinks or is he just as confused as the rest of the population labeled the beautiful ones.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16576
Read Count: 11058
Published: January 15 2013
Updated: August 10 2015


Title: Chapter 7: How Soon Is Now PT. 1

I am not sure honestly how I feel about this story...some handsome, very rich, white boy annoys the middle class but beautiful and intellingent black girl because he really likes her and wants to be with her...definitely not original but Kaia is strong and independent...not judgmental...I like her...clearly she has a strong support system in her mother and her father was strong too...she knows who she is which is her most endearing trait...Steff should have to work for her and he should be the one to really fall in love with her first because in his arrogance he seems to expect her to fall for him (I'm remembering his dream where Kaia told him she loved him and he responded I know)...when there is nothing about him I see that seems to make him deserving of her in spite of what he thinks...maybe once another side of him is revealed beyond the arrogant and rich entitled boy, I can understand why he is supposedly deemed worthy of Kaia...

 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 11 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.