Penname: GreenRoots [Contact]

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Member Since: April 29 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Pretty smart. Pretty observant. Pretty opinionated. That's pretty much me in a nutshell. I like to read BWWM romances, which, in my opinion, is the most neglected genre in literature on this here floating rock. One of these days, I'll put up a story of my own, but for now, I'm just a kick ass Beta Reader, leaving the occasional well thought out critique and accolade.  


I'm cowriting a BWWM book named "The Good Girl & The Porn Star" with Jaye Sims on another account, Jaye N Green. So check it out if you haven't read it yet. It's a doozy!


P.S. I wished for Chris Hemsworth last year and found his beautiful, flawless face on the cover this year's People's Sexist Man Alive in my stocking hanging from my fireplace last Christmas, furthering my belief that the power of prayer is real y'all.



On Hiatus: No
Beta-reader: Yes

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Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

The final moments of the last day of Magdalen's former life.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 768
Read Count: 2446
Published: May 13 2015
Updated: May 13 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a great story! What is she becoming after that night? Werewolf? Vampire? Sorry, not familiar with the challenge.



Author's Response:

Magdalen will still be human.  The compound is used to give her certain alien traits that will enable survival on Vaydren's planet.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

He made a promise to protect her. Can he keep it? Can he keep her?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 12071
Read Count: 20330
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well done! This is very interesting, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48920
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Well...that escalated quickly, didn't it?

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: May 26 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 153]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 37197
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What? You gave in that fast???  The body reacts to physical stimulation, even if the subject isn't the slightest bit interested. If you sit two strangers, a hetro male and female, in chairs facing each other, forcing them to look each other in the eye for a significant period of time, they will experience feelings at the end of it. So kissing him, the ass wipe who hasn't said he was wrong for everything he ssid, shouldn't erase how awful he was.  Ugh.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: June 12 2015

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[Reviews - 765]
Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78667
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

Oh man. Brandon...why Brandon, why? I get that we don't know the whole story, but he's way too comfortable raging all over Diya. Whether he's manhandling her or dismissing her or hollering at her, it's getting to be a bit out of hand. And Diya has to be the most laid back, somewhat spineless balc woman I have ever had the pleasure of getting to know. Where is her backbone?  Her voice? What is going on??

 

P.S. Brilliant as always JJ :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Branny did take things too far.  The why of it is fodder for future chapters.  I'm not sure if I get or agree with Diya being somewhat spineless or missing a voice.  Laid back?  Yes.  Smart enough not to buck up to a boyfriend gone snarling beast?  Definitely.  I have several theories about what passes for strength and weakness among black women Diya's character sort of highlights.  But that's a different discussion for a different forum and day. 

Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Rite of Possession

Oh my heavenly father.  That was the single most, excruciatingly beautiful love scene I've ever read. Holy shit J. I'm dumbfounded. Did you participate in the "Diversity Pit" event for writers of color they had in Twitter a couple of weeks ago? If you didn't, I have a ton of agent's info for you. They're all looking for stories about people of color right now. I was hit up by several to submit queries. I can't imagine what they'll do when they get a whiff of your writing, because you are...that was...it's just beyond brilliant!

 

You know how to reach me darlin :) Great fucking job lady!!!

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Date: May 07 2016

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Beware the Prowlers

I can't with you Joelle, I just can't. How you do it amazes me!  Where to begin...

I really can't stand her family. I'm trying so hard, really I am, but dammit they make it so difficult!  Why is everyone so damn selfish? It's aggravating as f*ck!   And this big buildup to the drama that will ensue once Big Daddy finds out...sweet baby Jesus, I don't think I'm ready for it. Like at all!

Great chapater as always!



Author's Response:

Lol!  You'll have at least another chapter or two to prepare before all hell breaks loose.  And break loose it will.  

Thanks for the fabu review and your continued, above-and-beyond support, GreenRoots!  I am UBER grateful for both.  

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Date: February 14 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

 Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!

I'm so happy you brought this story back, you have no idea! I was so over the moon wth Brandon and Diya and I'm ever so grateful the muse has spoken and their story has found its way here! 

I just cannot wait to see where their story goes...SO HAPPYYYYY!!!



Author's Response:

Your enthusiasm for these two is infectious and oh so appreciated.  Thanks GreenRoots!!!  

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Date: July 04 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Missing Pieces

Every time I see an update, I get way too happy.



Author's Response:

That makes me way too happy : D  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Misfortune Tellers

Um...yeah. So Diva's issues with her dad are only there because she gives him full reign to continue to create them.  How old is she and why doesn't she just move to another office?  And this thing with her dad having exes followed and what not, I would never speak to him again if he pulled that. That would be a stipulation in our father-daughter relationship, "If you do something this intrusive again, i will continue to date this person but never speak to you again."  What is going on with Diya?  And Brandon is not innocent in this either. He's hiding something...and it's big. Hope Diya  stops playing this game with her father, she has a lot to loose if she doesn't.
P.S. I haven't been this excited for an update since ICE

Author's Response:

Okay, so to answer your questions, Diya's thirty, she did move to another floor but William's all about an elevator ride, and what's going on with her is that she's never met a guy worth risking her relationship with her father over...until now?

There are some yet-to-be-discussed family dynamics that'll explain Diya's willingness to forgive her father's behavoir.  Those are coming several chapters down the line.

As for Brandon, he is far from innocent.  No one is.  More on that to come.

P.P.S.  I've seen several people mention ICE here on The Chamber and they've had nothing but great things to say, so I'll take that as a compliment. 

Thanks GreenRoots!!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Kiss and Telltale

So good! Marisol ain't foolin no one! Shy my foot. And now, she's going to be the attacked victim that Brandon feels the need to protect, regardless of how it affects Diya. Ugh. Oh Diya, hang on girl, it's about to get bumpy...



Author's Response:

"Shy my foot."  Too funny.  It is about to get bumpy.  How might surprise you.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I miss this story Joelle!  Here's to hoping that your winds of inspiration are blowing strong...



Author's Response:

Thanks, my dear.  No ripples on the water as of yet.  But I am feeling a gentle breeze ; )

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Cause (Revised)

Jesus Christ, this chapter was outstanding. I may or may not have skimmed through it on my way out the door top work, so this is the first time I was able to really READ it. Holy shit JJ. This is absolute genius. Your storytelling is off the charts perfection girl!  Gotdamn!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks GreenRoots!!!  You got a girl blushin' over here : )

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Date: January 30 2016

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Angles

I am confused. I get that she trusts her man, but her man said no, and that should have been enough. She's giving Marisol so much leeway and so much freedom to cross over the line.  I tell you what Joelle, it couldn't be me. I would have given her the keys to my car, wished her and her brood safe travels, and helped Brandon unpack. lol. Oy vey.

But beyond that, I just caught up on 4 glorious chapters that I had missed and can I tell you...they were fantastic. Whenever you're ready, we will package these bad boys up and sell them to the highest bidder!  C'mon JJ!  You're brilliance needs to be shared with the world!



Author's Response:

GREENROOTS!!!  Aw, thanks, chica!  The way this job is working my very last nerve, I'm getting ever closer to taking you up on that offer.

 Lol @ the safe travels!  I hear ya.  Diya thinks she's easing Brandon's emotional burden and avoiding the dangers of pitting herself against Marisol and the girls.  But that might very well come back to haunt her. 

Hell, who am I kidding?  You KNOW it will.

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Date: November 15 2018

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - In the Beginning (The Last Supper Part I)

SO GOOD. SO GOOD! SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOODD!



Author's Response:

Muchas gracias : D

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Date: November 15 2018

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Knights and Shining Armour

Whew child! That is a roller coaster. I honestly don't know what will happen next. Like, I cant see how Diya ends up okay with everything going on. But I ca t wait for the next chapter!

 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: December 21 2020

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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Need I say more?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4858
Read Count: 1220
Published: September 16 2015
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god, I'm sooooooo happy right now. This is literally the greatest gift ever.

 

RICH.  Oh, how I love your dastardly ways so much. 



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Matawan, I hope this gets written one day!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: January 25 2021

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113671
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 7: Sugar on Top

I am loving this cat and mouse chase, even though I never read the first version.  But what I am REALLY curious for is more of their back story. If they've known one another for over 20 years, what was their childhood like? I would love to see detailed flashbacks about them in school, why they hated each other, how long before he knew he really didnt hate her at all, but she hadn't caught on...etc.

Excellent story so far!

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Date: November 04 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Run & Hide

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! LOVE! 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
Date: April 21 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

 

Getting stuck in federal prison at nineteen wasn't wholesome. Being an accomplice to multinational drug trafficking wasn't moral, either. Worst of all, however, is waiting for your ten-year sentence to run up, only to get stuck in witness protection with the world's biggest jackass.

Welcome to the life of Bee Woods.   



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 8368
Read Count: 8486
Published: November 21 2015
Updated: December 30 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Last Day

Love this so much. The imagery leaps off the page. I can absolutely picture her life in prison. And Carr is the perfect villian for our heroine. Can't wait to see where you takes us.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2016

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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4413
Read Count: 2238
Published: December 08 2015
Updated: February 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Broken Heart [1]

I really like this. I'm intrigued and looking forward to seeing where you go with this...

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Date: December 09 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Six years ago Ember Michaels left behind her loving family, dear friends, her hometown, and a hurtful event that split her town apart. Now with new friends, finally finishing college, and starting her dream job; she begins to feel like she can enjoy life again. But what can she do when her past wants a future. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 22018
Read Count: 15775
Published: December 28 2015
Updated: December 31 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy shit!!  Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! YEEEEEESSSSSSS!  Amazing first chapter! I am absolutely hooked.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holy shit girl! Your writing is so goddamn good, I'm almost rooting for Vincent. I love the way you've laid this story out, the character development is on point! I'm not sure I'm lkin this new character that wants Ember for himself though. I kinda want to see if Vincent is able to convince Ember, over time, to understand his obsession/undying devotion to her and fall for him too. Yes, I understand this is a dark story of an attacker and a vctim, I get that, but I gotta be honest. I've often wondered how many have ended up with their stalker, not knowing they were surveiled and watched for long periods of time. They just thought the guy was really sweet and attentive, and into them.
Anyway, Great writing! The imagery leaps off the page. Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving the story progression.  Can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

Thank you, just waiting for my editor to get chapter 5 back to me. Oh, and GreenRoots... love Soraya a and Sean. 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.