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Fatal Obsession by NubianBoriquaPrincess
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 102]
Summary:

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Victoria and Brian Collins are planning to start their dream family, but someone else has other plans...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1861
Read Count: 3641
Published: April 17 2012
Updated: April 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: One

I'm really interested to see where you're going with this because fatal attraction and obsessed were two different movies. Fatal involved a cheating spouse, obsessed did not. The only thing they have in common is that the other woman (actual or one-sided)  was crazy.

It also seems like Brian isn't interested in having a kid. Is this Victoria's last ditch effort to save her marriage, because at this point it seems she's the only one who wants a baby.

Even with the inner monologue, I don't believe Brian loves his wife. If he did, he wouldn't be at Alaina's. He knew what was up when he answered. He also would have had sex with his wife the night before and then wrote the article.

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Date: September 23 2018
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Esmee's (Not So) Little Brother by Yuukiyanagi
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Rafael Vargas has been in love with Tomiko ever since his teens. When he hears she might be leaving for good he realizes he needs to make a move and soon. There’s only a slight problem. Tomiko is his big sister's best friend and Rafael knows convincing Tomiko to be his is not going to be easy.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 4
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8369
Read Count: 29624
Published: January 03 2013
Updated: August 06 2013

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Title: Chapter 5: The Halloween Party part II Blame It On The A-a-alcohol

So...Are you going to finish this?

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Date: February 15 2016
Start Over by Benny Jude Road
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016

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Title: Chapter 7: Ring the Alarm

I'm lost... This began with a perceived one-night stand. I've been waiting for it; however, its continued with the back story. You've mentioned the last chapter is coming, but when are things between them going to be resolved. It obviously wasn't before they slept together.

This story is good and has potential to be great, but you need an editor. At times, I had to reread or pause to capture your meaning or direction.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. In the last chapter I never mentioned it was coming...so I'm lost. These four chapters that's coming up is going to lead to the one night stand. However, I needed to build up to that as well established characters and why they've broken up, because it plays a major role in the coming chapters. Mostly none of their issues are going to be resolved before the one night stand. Ethan is going to learn how Aurora felt during their marriage with Katherine and Aurora is going to learn to not take on all the blame for the ending of their relationship. When I post the other chapters I hope it will clear up any confusion. 

 Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 09 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Characters

It's about time you updated! Can't wait to you get to the present. Now that's going to be drama.

The other reviewer is right. Take a moment to read before you post and edit as needed.

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Date: September 21 2016
All's Fair by Diamond
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

It was an unusual arrangement. Like oil and water, they didn't mix. Throw in a confusing mixture of feelings, politics, and their tumultuous past and you get.... well I don't really know what you get. But you know what they say, all's fair in love and war. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6901
Read Count: 5053
Published: September 29 2013
Updated: May 23 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Yes, please provide Jerrik's POV. It would help. I want to believe he said all that because he's jealous and upset. Good start, can't wait to read more.

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Date: May 24 2016
The Pale One by WrittenC
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

I experienced him on paper long before I witnessed him on film. In my mind, he was so much more than a villain to be conquered and killed. He deserved his own story, love and maybe a family. I decided to give it to him. My friend said, "He would make a great character for a story" I couldn't agree more. 



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Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10330
Read Count: 9401
Published: November 13 2013
Updated: September 23 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: December 29 2016
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Can't pick your family by Hatty
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 243]
Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45726
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ok...Lauren. interesting, not what I expected. I like that. I'm definitely liking this story. I don't think Matt will be devastated over her cheating. Disappointed, yes. He just doesn't seem that into her. I think Scott's in love with her.

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Date: January 29 2016
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Dang! Really you're going to end it like that?!

I don't know if I'm ready for them to sleep together. Doing it like this will complicate matters and take longer for them to realize they're in love. They will use this as an excuse to remain and maintain distance.

I'm really enjoying this story; however, you need an editor. Too many times I have to reread or pause to think about what you meant. I appreciate you want to get the story to us. My suggestion is if you don't have an editor, take a pause after writing, do something else, come back to it and read it. That way you're reading what you wrote and not what you expect to be there.



Author's Response:

I desperately need an editor! I keep rereading but it's so time consuming that it delays everything so I gave up on the final pages. If you my friend know anyone I'd happily get the help. 

Thanks for reading!!

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Date: January 30 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would be happy to edit for you. Just let me know.

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Date: February 09 2016
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Damn is right!

Great chapter. I can't wait to read what's next. Will she actually become his baby mama? Will they be able to maintain a friends with benefits relationship? Who will catch feelings first?

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Date: February 09 2016
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thanks for continuing this story and updating when you can. Life gets in the way of everything, especially best laid plans. 😏 If you still need an editor, I'll be happy to help.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the encouragement d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

 

I still have you email. Will send something soon. 

 

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Date: December 23 2018
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love love love this story and ABBY!!!

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Date: December 25 2018
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Below The Surface by Alexandria Glass
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 181]
Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 48920
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!

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Date: January 18 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Wonderful finish! I'm glad you continued it. I want to say I was surprised by Donna, but I thought her quick acceptance was suspicious. 

Can't wait for the next one.

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Date: January 18 2016
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Ok... I thought this story was over. I already figured who the true culprit is and thought this to be the epilogue. I started not to read it, but I like this couple. Half way through I was planning my review. Nice way to reinvigorate the story. By the way, I would love a sequel centering around Denise and Asger.

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Date: December 30 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Note

In Denise's words, oh f yes! I can't wait for their story. The potential and possibilities are endless.

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Date: January 22 2016
The Numbers Game by farawaychild
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Strong woman.

 

I've always considered myself to be one, but there's always been something about him thats made me weak.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 887
Read Count: 1720
Published: August 07 2015
Updated: August 08 2015

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Are you going to update this story? I would love to know what happened at the concert.



Author's Response:

My muse has left the building with this story but I still have every intention to finish it! :)

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Date: February 10 2016
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200 DAYS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 470]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121644
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017

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Title: Chapter 24: BACK AT HOME 4

Interesting...

I hate to express this in writing, but I think the grandmother may pass or be unable to care for the twins. I can see Sterling Sr stepping in to keep them out of the system, and Corrine going ballistic.

I like the slow friendship building between Anika and Sterling Jr. I wonder if they will consummate their love on the island or after returning home.

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Date: January 30 2016
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Save Me From Myself by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301197
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

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Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Frustrated!!! But I'm willing to see where it goes. I will say this...old Willow seemed stronger and stuck by her man. I liked that. Sebastian deserves a strong woman who supports him, not one who will only go back to him after he saves her (again).

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Date: January 04 2016
Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Yes...yes I did! So GOOD! I'm glad they're back together.

I like Isa. What's up with the dad. There's more to it than providing Nat with the ability to avenge his first family (Willow's definitely his second).

When will juliette meet her Shakespearean end?

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Date: February 07 2016
Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Yes...yes I did! So GOOD! I'm glad they're back together.

I like Isa. What's up with the dad. There's more to it than providing Nat with the ability to avenge his first family (Willow's definitely his second).

When will juliette meet her Shakespearean end?

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Date: February 07 2016
His Mercy by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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COMPLETELY UPDATED


(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113654
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018

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Title: Chapter 13: Hell of a Night

So good. Love the rewrite. Now my question is was Riley's fake confession foreshadowing for Mercy and Gage?

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Date: January 09 2017
Title: Chapter 9: Want

Welcome back! Thank you for updating! I've missed this story!

I'm glad Mercy was finally truthful with Gage, but more importantly herself. Now the balls in his court to prove his truth. I'm glad you've held off consummation. She needs to be sure about him; although, continuing the "little" things doesn't hurt her or us. 😉

It's definitely a happy holiday for me. I hope for you as well. Take care.

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Date: December 23 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Leading Cast

I hit submit before rating. Sorry!

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Date: December 23 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Heads, Beds, & Webs

So glad you're back. I've missed this story.

I'm thankful Mercy has accepted Gage. I can't wait to see where they go from here.

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Date: August 29 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.