Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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I just love to read.




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Deal With it by readlover
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37625
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014

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Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

Why is Jeremy marrying Jade when he is in love with Shenai?  That make absolutely no sense to me.  How could that each not now how the other feels?  I don't like  Jade, and Jeremiah makes me teeth itch.  He knows how how they both feel about each other,  Why?  Please don't let that fool marry that ho!!!!



Author's Response:

Jeremy loves Jade to some extent.. but you know the deal.. he has feelings for Shenai.. 

Who knows what Jeremy will do.. hmmmmm 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: April 23 2011
Title: Chapter 3: In the rhythm

I know that I read the newest chapter and it was a good and now the new chapter is gone bye bye in cyberspace.  What is the dealio?



Author's Response:

sorry... deleted them to make some changes.. sorry for the tease... will repost later 

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Date: April 24 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Un-regrettable Events

I so loved that this chapter, thank you for the hot, butt, naked sex!!!  I do mean HOT!!!  Shenai and Jeremy were sizzling there is not way that Jeremy feel that good when hes sexing Jade.  I don"t believe that he loves Jade, if he does he's definitely not in love with her. THe love of his life is Shenai.  I give this story two thumbs up!!!



Author's Response:

lol on the " hot, butt, naked sex" 

THANK YOU!!!!!!! 

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Date: April 26 2011
Title: Chapter 5: The Best Shower Ever Taken

I don't like Jeremiah, he is a douche bad.  How could he be in favor of Jeremy marrying a woman that he doesn't love?  Is going still going to marry Jade after loving Shenai?  I so love this story!!!



Author's Response:

But Jeremiah is such a cutie.. lol.. 

THANK YOU!!!! 

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Date: April 26 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Caught in the Mix

I hope that dummy doesn't go ahead and marry Jade, he doesn't love her.  At lease not he loves Shenai.  Why is she apologizing to Jeremy, it takes two to tangle and he wanted her just as much as wanted him.  The woman is daft, and you can't take back hot sex.  Please don't that fool marry Jade.  Have I said that I can't stand Jeremiah, he also has the hots for Shenai.



Author's Response:

TTHANK YOU!!!

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Date: April 30 2011
Title: Chapter 8: A Friend In Need

How is Shenai going to make it through this farce called a wedding?  He spend some money on her and she still doesn't believe that he loves her.  So sad, he someone going to wake up before it's too late.  I can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks

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Date: May 20 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Island Time

I knew that she was pregnant so it would be cool if both Jeremy and Jermiah were a father to each bqby. Why is Shenai so stupid? She annoys me and I am waiting for her grow up. I also want Jeremy to wake up. Jeremiah was wrong for sexing up Shenai knowing that his brother is in love with her. I not thrilled with none of those knuckleheads.  

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Date: October 09 2013
Title: Chapter 10: The Wedding

I was really hoping that Jeremy wouldn't go through that farce of wedding, Jade is a lying trick that ho can't have babies!!!  Jeremy there is no way that you are really in love with Jade their is not a thing lovable about her.  Your father is dead, I can't believe that you hurt Shenai like that and expect her to still be your best friend.  I really hope that she kicks Jeremy and his brother Jeremiah to the curb.  She won't be able to move if she remains there.  I wonder is she's pregnant, that would serve that sneaky heifer Jade just right. 

Jeremy makes my teeth itch and Shenai why didn't you tell Jeremy how you felt about him?  They are both so stupid!!!

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Date: July 05 2012
Title: Chapter 11: After the Reception

Jeremiah is as much of an ass as he brother Jeremy.  Doesn't Jeremiah have a girlfriend?  Wasn't up Jeremy's ass for sleeping with Shenai because he was getting married?  Now you have slept with the woman that you know your brother is in love with, what happens now?  Shenai, now that you slept with both brothers, what happens if you get pregnant?  Who would the father be, Jeremy or Jeremiah?  What is Jeremy going to say when gets back and Shenai tells him that two have slept together?  That by the way would be so awesome, I want Jeremy to rue the day that he hurt Shenai and I want his face cracked!!!

Neither of those brothers deserves Shenai, but then again she is really kind of stupid.  You can't cry foul if you never told the man that you were in love with him.. But it wouldn't have made a difference as Jeremy has no back bone and would marry the wrong woman  just to please his dead father.  I mean come on Jeremy, why are you so lame? 

Great update. I hope that these update will come regularly from now on!

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Date: July 05 2012
Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

I just reread this story and I have discovered a new level hate for Jeremy, Jeremiaj and Jade. For Jeremy because he spineless your dead father was not perfect. Jeremiaj beacause he's jealous of his brother for having Shenai's love. Not to mention cheating on his girlfriend. Jade just because she's lying skank who doesn't know what true love is. Shenai please loose those ho te ndencies!

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Date: August 18 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Thinking

That was so wrong.  That was more wrong than tits on bull!!   You got me on tens!!!

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Date: August 26 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Its a complicated thing

OK, Jeremiah knew that Shenai was and has always been in love with Jeremy.  Did you think that good sex would suddenly make her fall in love with you?  So crazy but I am glad that you told her how you feel, but it doesn't make it for the fact that you had sex with woman that you know your brother is in love with. This whole situation is a mess and I think that Shenai could get some perspective movng away for a bit.

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Date: August 26 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Breakthrough

Shenai needs to chill and get to know herself before immersing herslf in a relationship.  She can't be in love with Javed when her heart is supposedly confused about whether she love Jeremy or Jeremiah.  Shenai is making my teeth itch.  I really hope that those babies are Jeremy's so that maybe that ho that he married admits that she can't give him children.  Jade is evil!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review pmgayles 

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Date: October 12 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Next

Shenai it's a bad idea to use Jeremiah because you can't have Jeremy. I still say that she's pregnant. When it gets published I will buy this book.

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Date: October 06 2013
Title: Chapter 18: Letters

I can't stand Jade, she should have told Jeremy that she couldn't have children in the first place.   Jeremy is a fool he punched Jeremiah for sleeping with Shenai whic was what he did. Looking forward to Shenai coming back to confront her stupidity.  Wake up Jeremy!

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Date: October 14 2013
Title: Chapter 19: Stick by my side

I understood that she's hurt but to get involved with another so soon is assinine. Now she is no longer in love Jeremy?    I want Jeremy to divorce that duplicitous ho that he married since she never told that her uterus was removed. Please don't make us wait as long for the nedt update.

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Date: February 02 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Stick by my side

I understood that she's hurt but to get involved with another so soon is assinine. Now she is no longer in love Jeremy?    I want Jeremy to divorce that duplicitous ho that he married since she never told that her uterus was removed. Please don't make us wait as long for the nedt update.

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Date: February 02 2014
Welcome to the Family by philipa1234
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89372
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

What does Ellie mean that they don't work?  Nick and Ellie were working just fine before she meet his family.  They were working just fine before he showed his ass about the baby.   We will finally get to know her true reasons for running away like a punk.  Juliette needs to be banned from the hospital, I don't like her.  Great update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 22 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 11

I had some more comments. Nick was hurting her.  The is in a hospital you left 6 months ago with telling him why.  Elle, Elle, Elle, so cruel to the man.  Woman up, Elle.

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Date: June 22 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

I know that I want Ellie and Nick to get back together, I want Marta to apologize to Ellie for all of the pain that she caused her.  I also want Nick to explain his reaction to Ellie's telling him that she was pregnant.    I am glad that she realized that punked out when she left Nick that way and that he deserved an explaination.  She should have told him how bad the miscarriage had affected her and how is families business scared her. I hope that being around him again makes her change his mind.  Please don't let Nick die!!!

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Date: June 19 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

Say it isn't so, she didn't leave Nick after he got released from jail?  I can't take it, I for them to be a happy couple!!  Oh , woe is me!!!!

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Date: June 17 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

They broke up, was it his families business or the miscarriage that broke them up.  If is obvious that they still love each other even Nico is sexing up other women.  I want Ellie to be happy and together with Nick!!! Waa!!!

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Date: June 17 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

I am glad that Biance apolotgized to her brother and to Ellie.  When is Nick going to man up and tell Ellie the truth about his families business?  I love this story, thanks for sharing your talent.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 27 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am liking what have written so far, so please continue.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 20 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like the story,  personally like knowing the name of the city where the characters are.  I like being to picture actual locations in my mind as I read. I am seriously hooked on this story already!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: May 23 2011

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