Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

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I just love to read.




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Welcome to the Family by philipa1234
Rated: 17 and older
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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89293
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 5: The lombardi family pics.

I can tell that this is going to be an interesting family!!  I can't wait to read more.

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Date: May 26 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

Ellie just told you that she can't marry you until she knows the truth, what the hell is your problem Nick?  His mom and sister don't think that shes good enough for Nick because she is African American, but they made living being criminals.  That is really rich.  That was hilarious!!!

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Date: May 26 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6

Wow, Sammy got hit.  Now would be a good time to tell Ellie about his family's mob connection.    I hope that Sammy isn't dead but just shot somewhere non=life threatening.  I so love this story.

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Date: May 29 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

Okay, Did Nick know that would be arrested?  If so why didn't he tell Ellie?  She's pregnant, that should help his mother get over her displeasure.  I am glad that Sam is going to survive.  Now that Ellie knows what the family business is she should realize that she is safer with him than without him.  Great update and I am glad that Nick got a little nookie before he was arrested.

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Date: June 08 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

All the stress of finding out her finances family does for a living combined with the stress of the shooting and Nick getting arrest caused her to have miscarriage.  I don't think that she will be sticking much longer for Nick, he's going to have to choose it's either his love for her or his families business.  This is so sad, I want my HEA!!!

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Date: June 10 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Why in the hell did Nick marry Juliette in the first damn place? You don't mary one woman when you are in love with another!  Why did the ho show up at the hospital? She wouldn't have been holding my baby. Ellie is geting smart again as she working my nerves be fore cor hurting both herself and NICK. Although Nick deserves to feel some pain, marrying that woman I have m7ssed this story!

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Date: May 28 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yes, she's preggars!!!  I love Devin, I am so glad she is telling Nicky!!  Ellie is stuck on stupid.  How are they not good for each other?  Okay, so Nicky is in the mob and he told her to get an abortion.  He could always leave the lifestyle but I would have a harder time getting past his wanting me to get an abortion.  Why is Ellie so stupid?

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Date: March 14 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Elle you are 6 months pregnant and their is no way to hide your pregnancy.  So stupid!!!

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Date: April 25 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so disappointed in Nicholas right now, he married Juliette a woman whom he does not love.  Now he's happy about having a baby with Elle, but when they were about to get married he wanted her to get an abortion.  In my heart of hearts I want these two back together but damn Nicky Juliette?!

Why Juliette?  I want Juliette broken and destroyed when Elle and her true love Nicky get back together!!!!  More please!!!

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Date: April 25 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Just go ahead and divorce Juliette as you don't love her anyway and you never have.  But you would rather continue to hurt Ellie, just to prove that you can still get her.  Ellie you did push Nick away, saying that love wasn't enough.  Nick got married mighty fast and that had to hurt Ellie.  I so love this story, but I am waiting for both Ellie and Nick to wake the hell up.  Please tell me that it will happen sooner rather than later.

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Date: October 22 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 13

Please kill off Juliette, I really hate that ho.  Nick don't want you, you're his consolation prize.  Since Nicky can't have Ellie he'll have sex with you.  Juliette Nick will never marry you, you are just his piece!!!  I am so glad to see this story back.  Don't make hus wait to long for another uppdate!!

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Date: March 11 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 14

I hope that she gets preggars, I can't wait for Nicky to find out. I want my Hea and they are messing it up! Nicky get rid of psycho chick zjuliette she is not good enough for you Nicky! Smoking sex scenc Philloa!

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Date: March 12 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am still wondering why Nick that ho Julliete in the  first place, so he just needs to divorce that ho and work on trying to rebuild his relationship with Ellie.  Ellie is really not going to allow Nick to get any closer.  Is it just about the fact that I didn't tell what his families business was?  Or is it more about the fact that he didn't want the the baby that she lost when he got arrested?

I am trying to understand what she minds when she says that they aren't good for each other.  Ellie you still love Nick and Nick still loves you even though he married that trick.  Please let them work it out, I want Nick to leave the family business or least make it legit.

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Date: July 23 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another update, yes!!!!  Nick continues to frustrate me, why did he married that ho in the first place?  If he were honest with himself he would admit that he has never been in love with Juliette.  All Juliette was sex, not even good sex because there was never any love involved.  If he wants to convince Elle to give him a chance he needs to divorce the gorgan and quit the family business.  Handle your business, becasue on her own she will never give you another chance.

Nick, my grasshopper, you must show Ellie through actions that you are serious about being a family.  That is only way to convince Ellie and win her over.  Delia works my last nerve, Ellie doesn't have to tell you jack.  What ever is happening between her and Nick is none of your business!!

Great as usual!!

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Date: July 31 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Did he finally divorce the woman he shouldn't have married in first place?  Ellie is so stubborn she knows that she loves Nick and that he loves her. Let go and love him you will both be much happier!  Thank you so much for this update and I am looking forward to reading the full chapter. 

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Date: January 03 2014
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ellie is both stubborn and stupid!  Nick loves you and that baby please give him a chance Ellie? Her friends are works my nerve, they are supporting Ellie by calling Nick names.  I hope that they can work it out, that baby deserves to have both parents. Ellie is being selfish, although their lives. And the way in which they live it makes it hard to sympathetic. Yet I still love Nick he is cool people for a criminal!  Juliette makes my teeth itch, she knew that Nick wasn't in love with her so why is she so angry and hurt? Juliette is dumb dumb ditty!

I love this story, thanks for updating!

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Date: May 14 2013
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please updateeveryone this wonderful story!!

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Date: November 29 2014
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please come back  and finish  this incredible story!

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Date: February 10 2015
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Pleasecome back and finish the story.

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Date: May 31 2021
BIG! by readlover
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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 A symbol of satisfaction plus the embodiment of attraction…..  Just like age aint nothing but a number, theses five women will learn that size is nothing, but a number through the situations they endure to find their happily ever after.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Poetry, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 19410
Read Count: 12015
Published: May 25 2011
Updated: January 08 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I like this story, I would love to read more.



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thanks for your interest

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Date: August 27 2011
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Bouquet de Fleurs (Bouquet of Flowers) by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Six months after being attacked, Grace moved to Paris with her boyfriend, Henri. Once there, she must overcome adjusting to French life, working with her crazy new boss, and move on with her life. Henri is trying to find the right time to propose to Grace, but will her pride and his family get the better of her?

 

Sequel to Floraison d'Amour (Blossoming Love)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90875
Read Count: 33721
Published: May 25 2011
Updated: September 15 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope that Grace doesn't do anything stupid, Henri loves her!!!  I love this story!!!

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Date: July 24 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Grace and Henri deserve to have some happiness.  I just love this story!!!

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Date: July 31 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Grace is going mess up my HEA!!!  I do hope that she talks to Henri, because he needs to know what is happening in Grace's stubborn mind.  Julien deserves to a beat down.  Why would he show at their place knowing Henri wasn't there?  I know that he knew that Henri wouldn't be there yet.  Thank you for this update, reading these stories helps me to deal with being underemployed.

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Date: September 12 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Have Grace and Henri discussed having children?  It's wrong for her to make a decision about children without discussin it with Henri.  They have a lot to talk about before they actually get married.  Children is a big issue. 

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Date: August 17 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Grace is still stupid, you were suppose talk about the dreams and what they may represent.  The didn't tell you to break up with Henri completely.  Grace you are making teeth itch, you don't deserve Henri!!!

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Date: September 18 2011

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