Penname: Pretty eyes [Contact]

Real name: Alexandria S.

Member Since: April 12 2010

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Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



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Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 65857
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012


Title: Chapter 2: The Encounter

Love it



Author''s Response:

Thank you pretty eyes!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: April 19 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Encounter

Rafel is funny even though he is an asshole. LMAO But I like Andrew and Dana. So far I like it. But you left a cliff hanger. I wonder whats going to happen next. 

Author''s Response:

Ah...it will all come in time. Thank you, pretty eyes!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: March 25 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Encounter

Leaving a little mystery behind but thats cool, because I'm interested in reading more... Can't wait for an update. So far so good.

Author''s Response:

I hope some things are made clear with the next update, thank you again pretty eyes!

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Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: March 23 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Encounter

Haven't even read it yet but the fact that you got a pic of my sista Aaliyah I got to check it out. I'm working on something too. Can't wait to read it. On to do so now and then I'll leave another comment. :)

Author''s Response:

I love Aaliyah, and she was perfect for the character I had in mind, I just kept picturing her. Thank you hon.

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: March 23 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

Loved the last chapter... Simply perfection. I like that Dana got out her feeling in one than another... I'm starting to understand her vunrability more. Oh and thanks for the added pic of Phillip I now see how attractive he really is. The first pic I thought he was ugly, LOL But I ran with it and as I read more he became more attractive to me.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you pretty eyes! I updated the picture of andrew and dana cause in part two a bit of time has passed since their first encounter which is 2003. Not many years but just a couple. I'm glad you noticed the topic on his looks, I didn;t want a traditional handsome guy, i wanted someone a bit rough looking. Thank you for the wonderful review and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: June 26 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

I guess the rude person that came to you like that was probably mad because you used Aaliyah's face as one of the characters. I'm guessing, and they may feel that if a form of disrespect. But hey its a great story and this is a fanfiction site. That person obviously doesn't know what Fanfiction means. If they don't like it than they shouldn't read it. Don't let anyone discourage you from doing something just because they don't like it.

Bottom line is you have a good story here and you are very talented. And I don't care if you use Aaliyah or shrek I"m still going to read you're story because its the BOMB DOT COM and like I said if a person doesn't like it, then don't read it.



Author's Response:

Hey pretty eyes, you are right it was to do with my casting mainly. But the thing is, all my characters in all of my stories are flawed people. I used the previous casting in a drug addiction story and scrapped it when I got the same complaint on the forum. I'm not using their actual names or real lives so I didn't understand why people took issue with it.

I will keep writing this though, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: May 31 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

Oh I am so sorry to hear that, and I hope you will get well soon. Take your time, we'll be waiting when you are ready to come back. Don't rush it, we understand.



Author's Response:

Thanks pretty eyes, cant wait to catch up on your stuff too!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: June 21 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.