Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds
I guess the rude person that came to you like that was probably mad because you used Aaliyah's face as one of the characters. I'm guessing, and they may feel that if a form of disrespect. But hey its a great story and this is a fanfiction site. That person obviously doesn't know what Fanfiction means. If they don't like it than they shouldn't read it. Don't let anyone discourage you from doing something just because they don't like it.
Bottom line is you have a good story here and you are very talented. And I don't care if you use Aaliyah or shrek I"m still going to read you're story because its the BOMB DOT COM and like I said if a person doesn't like it, then don't read it.
Author's Response: Hey pretty eyes, you are right it was to do with my casting mainly. But the thing is, all my characters in all of my stories are flawed people. I used the previous casting in a drug addiction story and scrapped it when I got the same complaint on the forum. I'm not using their actual names or real lives so I didn't understand why people took issue with it.
I will keep writing this though, thank you so much!
Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed
Date: May 31 2011