Penname: Carmel Beauty [Contact]

Real name: Lakeisha Collins

Member Since: June 04 2010

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Summary:

 


When Caleb, heir of the four and alpha of his pack, attends a party celebrating his twin deltas’ birthday, he doesn't anticipate finding Luna’s greatest gift: his mate, Ava-Rain. Immediately consumed with curiosity and undeniable interest, he manages to make his presence known to her, but their introduction is kept brief. To reject one’s mate is to reject Luna herself, and that is exactly what Caleb intends to do. Not because he wants to but because he has to. But will he be able to stay away in order to ensure both her and his pack’s safety, or will their unbreakable connection lure him back and add even more trouble into the mix?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 165660
Read Count: 34486
Published: March 27 2015
Updated: October 30 2016


Title: Chapter 17: 12 - 'Say goodbye, as we dance with the Devil tonight.'

Please tell me he is only hurt not dead



Author's Response:

Lol, as much as I would LOVE to tell you that, you'll definitely have to wait for the next chapter to learn if Declan survives or not!

Thank you so very much for reading & for your review, Carmel Beauty! I'll try not to make you wait too long for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2015

Title: Chapter 18: 13 (1) - 'And my heart is a hollow plain, for the Devil to dance again. . .'

Thank you for saving declan.  It would have destroyed ava rain if he died and caleb.  Lovin it!



Author's Response:

YAY for Declan surviving!!! If he hadn't, I would definitely not want to be in Ava-Rain's shoes, that's for sure!

So glad you're still enjoying it, Carmel Beauty! Thank you so, so much for reading & for your review! :)

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2015

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