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Summary:

 

A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

After being hired as the executive assistant to one of the youngest most influential and sexy corporate raiders of the 21st century Kenya Price comes face to face with her destiny.

 

Kenya is a mild mannered 22 year old thick sista with a beautiful soul and a caring spirit. Though her ultimate goal is to go back to university and earn a Degree in Childhood Education to become an Elementary school teacher, she takes the job working at the Roswell Corporation so she can save and finish off her schooling. Her motto is "Love can heal all wounds."

 

Grant Abraham Roswell III is a man that prides himself on a being a level headed, hardworking, no nonsense go getter. At the age of 24 he is a MIT graduate with more money than he could spend in a lifetime, he parties with rock stars, sleeps with models and feels that life cant get any better than that.His moto in life is "Who needs happiness when you have Money and Power?"

 

When Kenya enters his life and shows him there is more to life. Will he trust in Love or Will he let society take love away from him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 20252
Read Count: 76138
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: April 29 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW!  Kenya's first day at work is very entertaining!  I like that she's a sincere hard worker and she needs to be because Grant sure assigned her a great many tasks, regardless of his atttraction to her, he's still about business.  But, WO!..the tasks includes such personals as picking up his laudry and sending personal thank you notes to whoever last night's girlfriend was.  

YEAH!  Young rich handsome sexy businessman like him definitely require their beautiful assistants to be their moma too, LOL  But, she's paid a large salary so he gets points for not being cheap!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. lol so true!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Kenya is still a Virgin at 22years of age!  WOW!  That surprised the hell out of me along with Grant!

Kenya's one voluptuous lady so her Virginity if she's determined to continue keeping for awhile would be hard for any man to suffer! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I feel a lack of realism here, but maybe I'm wrong.  However, Kenya is 22yrs old not a pre-menstral girl, so it seems odd to me that she would accept a sleep over with Grant, a very virile sexual mature man; yet, with the intent of no sex, to sustain her virginity.  Unless you've been JUST FRIENDS with a man for more than a year sharing the same bed does not work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I understand your scepticism.

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Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OKAyy!  I am so enjoying this gala affair, ;pve Kenya's fress, so glad she chose a cream color to show ogg her chocolate, and a dress cut to tastefully show her beautiful cleavage, YEAH !  girl compliment yourself don't hide it!!

And now jealous and furious Melissa is going to bring on some fighting, I know she will probably be racist sluty!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WOW!  Kenya gettin the kind of food that will really satisfy her appetite!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, Grant is a KNOCK-OUT so I can understand Kenya being dazed.  Yeah!  Then she had to get it under control, he is her employer interviewing her for a job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

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Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

AH!  that was a great date:  movies and Grant was a gentlemen with no necking, just a nice proper good night kiss at her door!  Yeah!  I'm liking grant more and more, I know its hard for him to maintain his cool with this so very feminine beautiful lady, smooth pretty chocolate complexion and beautiful big buxom!  I'm only a B-cup myself so I  do give praise.  Great couple very virile handsome Grant and sweet beautiful sexy Kenya!  I'm excited to see how this romance will go down! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice Kiss!  But this story is certainly moving fast here!..boss deep kissing employee on first day and in the caferteria, no other lunchers yet present but could walk in.  But, i do like both of these characters.  Loved Grant doing a peeping tom behind the pillar, that was cute!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well done and I don't like Melissa calling Kenya fat; Kenya is a voluptuous and very sexy beautiful lady.  She really looks WOW! and I usually don't aesthetically appreciate this type but, she's got it going on!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 452]
Summary:

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banner by minx 


Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76770
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Introductions

I will take a peek at the next chapters of this story but I am immediate suspect it might not interest me because it is too fantasy that any business would have a clause requiring their employees cannot date each other.  Firstly, it would be unconstitutional and secondly the employees would violate it.

So the premise to obstacle to love for this story is already weak for helping the story sustain my interest, but we will see! 



Author's Response: Thanks, I guess. I'm sorry it wasn't as realistic as you would have liked.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstar
Date: February 08 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

               Ghosts

A Supernatural Story

He wondered if he loved her, if he was even capable of loving her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1028
Read Count: 4496
Published: August 02 2010
Updated: August 02 2010


Title: Chapter 1: Ghosts

Really weird sort of "vacant" story but, that is also the intent,  "supernatural".  So okay!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 05 2011

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168947
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Well, sounds like she is lost in the deep South, a town that's only seen one Black person and ran them out with cross burning, so I really wonder how this is going to turn out for her.  I really would not want to be in her shoes!!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Glad to have met Chase, he will develop a even deeper worry of what could have happened to his sweety Kendra.  Although, from the impression she's making on Dax and maybe grandpa too, Lol; Chase may end up having some competition.

That was funny when Dax in his frightened nervousness cast those flowers from the tin into Kendra's lap; she started laughing and I giggled a little too. 

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Well all the extremely racist name calling that came out of the filthy soul of Cathleen Bronson certainly brought the reality to Kendra's situation of being down there in that small Southern town.

Cathleen is low class trash and a prostitute; her only sense of worth is based on being White and her sexual attractiveness to men. 

DeLeon is a priority catch she desires.  For Deleon of all men to respect and show appreciation of Kendra's beauty, a Black woman; this topples Cathleen's delusion of grandeur so she responds like a fearful, snarling rabid dog..... 

It will be very interesting to see how Kendra handles the racism of Cathleen and others like her as it comes to her.

 

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is interesting, I'm surprised at all the humane attention they are giving to her in that she is a Black woman, perhaps there is something to southern hospitality but, we will see!

I applaud you Intellectual on your command of the dialect, doesn't appear stereotype! 

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I suspected she might have some amnesia from that head injury but, I hope it will be temporary!

I'm starting to get a small feeling of like for grandpa and his two sons, they've been gents and nicely caring about her, so far! 

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Intro

OKeee!  Let me see what this adventure into hick town rural South it seems will bring to this high styled city lady!

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Date: February 08 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69890
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Consequences of the Obvious and Oblivious

Sienna is right her friend Amella is a woman of tattered remains, or shattered that's why she has greatly aged beyond her 27years.

Sienna needs to be introduced to these people to put Harrison in place, she'd make him step back! 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Talks of Tea with a side of Shade

Well, I'm really glad Amelle got out of that Black dress and into the White, something that complimented her complexion.

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 7: You bait me...

Eddy is very daring, evidently very spoiled to high esteem by everyone.  So far none of these men seem charming nor a man in his own right, I wonder if such a man will eventually appear.

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Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 10: A Lover's Thoughts and Actions

I like this story a lot, it deals realistically with the color bias we chocolate ladies have to triumph over and I've always wondered how a Black woman of any complexion (but, we of the darker hue always facing stronger bias),  deals with, I would think, a great amount of prejudice when she marries a White man or her boyfriend/fiance is White.  

This chapter confirms to me my suspicions that Emelle's accelerating aging was from lynchings of her self esteem, the racist insults of David's mother that she has been bearing are a confirmation. 

I greatly look forward to the next installment of this story.  Anxiously want to see how Emelle handles working with Harrison, who is quite a "monster"!  And how she, hopefully, will restore who she really is as a person, her independent individuality with pride and strength.  I know that will take a while to slowly emerge throughout the story because, she does not want to lose her relationship with her beloved David.  So, her success will be another major point of interest to me in this story.  Emelle has a huge battle ahead of her from these enormous conflicts from all these people and the most important ones are her future in-laws, they too are against her.  She will need a lot of strength and David is certainly no assist.

Drogheda thank you for this story, good writing, very entertaining and informative including the conflicts of class bias.  You've truly packed a whopper of real life into this story and I appreciate it; nice change from the glossy romantic fantasies that I also love!

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Behind Jade Eyes

Glad Amelle slapped William, she took some of herself back with that slap and I believe her fiance David would sell a little bit of her favor to Harrison to enable his own move up the ladder but pretend to himself he doesn't know what Harrison's doing.

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Date: February 08 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Banner

 Banner by Missus James. :)

 

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"- William Shakespeare

 

She didn’t believe in love at first sight, yet when she met Fabian she believed in anything. Even the belief of her death at the hands of her lover…

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10873
Read Count: 20773
Published: December 28 2010
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Con Te Partiro

Fabian is turning me on something fierce; he seems a "dark" stranger; yet, a friend and one of power, that's a good friend to have; plus he's handsome.

Is Meka a virgin, she said she never allowed a man to previously touch her? 

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Date: January 10 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Why does she choose jumping from a second floor window to get away from him; does he have her locked in their room with him?

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Date: February 14 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Con Te Partiro

A beautiful song but so deep in it's poetic meaning I had to read twice and slowly; perhaps confusion is because it is sung in a foreign language and I had to be translated.  I think I came away with the meaning that she brings the divine light of life into his life; that as long as he is with her he can even go to places where he's never been.  It's with her that his life has meaning, is alive with meaning and as long as he is with her he never feels alone, he can even go to strange countries he has never been in before as long as she is with him.  Also, when he is alone without her physical presence,  she is so much a part of him that her essence in some way has remained with him through his love for her so that all these enrichments that she brings to his life also remain; he still has these enrichments of self and spirit that are with him wherever he is or goes in life.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.