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A Perfect Fit by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39376
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is a fun story that I'm enjoying!  Men and the attention valuation that they give to the size of their penises.  However, I suspect that that's a valid concern for a man!

It seems Russell has a bigtime continuing sex fantasy about Black women still lingering unrequited from his college days, that's weird since he does love the White woman he chose to marry and been married happily to all these years!

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Date: January 26 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great writing and I'm glad Russell is getting his sex fantasy with his wife, he will now be a happy man!

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Date: January 26 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was some Dynomite HOT lovin between Selma and Maxie, he really whipped it on her!!!

Real glad for the much better communication between Maxie and brother Russell, whose now able to relax and really be "human" now that his true sexual appetite has been satisfied with his wife.  It's amazing how much sexual satisfaction and true enjoyment are so very important to our psychic selves; seems we discount the value of the physical too much, as something merely animalistic, dirty, and not worthy of true human consideration.  But, sex really is a great part of us, we are after all animals but just with the higher evolved brain; nevertheless, are libidos remain purely in the physical zone but individualistic as to desire fulfillment.

 

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Date: January 26 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!  I'm greatly Happy for Maxie that he finally found a woman that his small dick could have sexual happiness with; also both he and and Selma sure gave me a lot of laughs, not at them but, how they express themselves, especially Selma!

I love Selma's super womanness, she really don't play and this is just the kind of woman Maxie has needed, and equally important, they are great friends and companions for each other, before the sex!

I am very glad this is a story about adults in the upper age range because myself being age 43plus in years and single, its nice to have a believable romance fantasy of members of my peer group seeking and finding love.

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Date: January 25 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yep!  Stanley's one of those evil parasitic relatives, but I sure can't figure how he expects to get part of the money his deceased brother left to Selma and their children.  Real glad Selma has a strong man like Maxie's  for support to lean upon and his love, as, well, as three grown sons.

 

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Date: January 26 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

AH!  Maxie & Selma are Great together and truly a Perfect Fit!

Ironic, that these two descendants of two opposing races, especially in view of historically the Whites as barbarous slaves owners and Blacks as the slaves, funny that 147years after the abolishment of slavery these two descendants were only able to find true happiness in-love with each other, even true completness and fulfillment.  INTERESTING!

The song "Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow" is one of my great favorites of my youth.  I sang with Matthew and Michigan as my memories traveled sweetly back!

Great Chapter!  And I am so happy they are now married, I feared something would happen to prevent the union from taking place!

 

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Date: January 26 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

My God!  The filth in a Racist person just has no ending!.... that Racist White woman just had to come and tarnish even this divine event of the birth of Maxie's and Selma's babies by determination to plant the evil seed in Maxie's mind and heart that the babies are not his off-spring because they are too dark she says to be  bi-racial babies.  Although, are fictional characters I felt a pang of nausea at this evil from this Racist, also knowing how greatly Maxie wants children and these specific babies that he fathered, the impact her words will have on him, irregardless that they are lies.  Yet, that is in fact the intent of this stranger a woman, motivated by her intense Racial hatred, especially seeing an interracial couple.

I have greatly enjoyed this story and hope so much that you continue it Brenda1257 and thank you so much for writing it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  My muse is sleeping here resently.  I am currently trying to update this if the muse will just cooperate!  LOL  Hopefully an update will be up this week.

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2012
The Gift by Brenda1257
Rated: All Ages
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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5872
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!  Henrietta has a very loving heart for the human race in general because, if I were in her shoes I never could have given a bone marrow donation to a biological father whom she has never known because he coldly abandoned her mother who had been a virgin, abandoned her and never looked back not even in thought after her mother told him she was pregnant.  And he had told her young mother that he loved her.  That surely made her mother's experience doubly painful because she loved Henry and believed he was in-love with her!

Very interesting idea for a short story Brenda1257 and thank you for writing it.  Interestingly, even for this just one chapter these characters and their history were very clear to me and I felt their personal feelings and thoughts, due to your good writing!

Brava!



Author's Response:

LOl Keep reading.  I'm updating this with every holiday.  Valentines will be up soon, but I haven't even started that yet.

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.