Nice and I got her from the beginning. She had many layers and it was nice that Lucas was so patient and determined to see them through.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2016 06:43 am
Good story! I'm so glad Lucas is dumping Lana...she's incredibly selfish and a snob...don't like her right now...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2015 01:49 am
I love this story. And I like Lana...for the record :)
Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2013 10:06 am
Cute story.
I thought he would've made her wait a little longer.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2013 04:38 pm
Yay! They had the talkand it worked out.
Nicely done!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 05:00 pm
Thanks for a great read. I am glad that they got to be together as a couple.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 03:04 pm
Fantastic story! I'm sooo happy Lana realized she could have Lucas and her career!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 08:08 am
Heart warming. I really enjoyed this chapter, thank you for sharing
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 05:27 am
Lana is now willing to make some space in her life Lucas. It's about damn time! Will there be an epilogue?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 05:27 am
Glad they both got the stuff they needed to say out in the open . I think with a little hard work they will make a really good couple . I'm sure they will have other ups and downs too . Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 04:56 am
b25;
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 04:04 am
:)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 01:22 pm
I'm so dissapointed in the both of them. Lucas for being so petty and callous as to use another person to get at Lana and Lana for being blind and cowardly. But that "I don't know where you live" line, oof, that hurt.
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 06:44 am
"If she keeps talking Lucas knows he will carry her to his bed and apologize with his tongue for being too rough." I love himmmmmmmmm.
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 06:20 am
Ack, you're killing me with the angst! Every little thing is a field of battle for these two. It's like instead of sitting down and talking, they fight over the direction they want the relationship to go in through other things, like sex, and meals. And Lana's not just fighting him, she's fighting herself, too. It's so sweet that what he needs from her is something so simple and so comforting as a meal. Oh, I love these two. She says "It would be very different," and all I hear is a woman who knows how she's fucked up relationships before and for once just doesn't want to do that, just wants something simple, but he hears her words and he's hurt, which is totally understandable. And then she goes and says that rubbish about supporting him and stuff. Smh, the girl is digging her own grave.
"When have I ever asked for anything from you other than your time?" --and her heart, and her love, and now her respect, too, Lucas. I hope Lana lets go of these standards she has for "the perfect man" soon, because she's hurting him and herself, too.
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 06:00 am
"And there was always paint smeared somewhere on his body. In odd places like his hip or in the center of his back."
Love these descriptions, but I think my favorite parts are when he listens to her and does as she says. Lol, I've been on a bit of a dominance streak lately, and this is all kinds of good to me.
And Lana. Lana Lana Lana. Ladies like her always get hate for being "bitches" and for not falling at the feet of the men in their lives and being grateful for their love for them, but I've always had a soft spot for them. It's nice to read a story with a woman in it who has these shades to her. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 05:39 am
"He doesn't know her birthday but he knows she likes having her nipples rolled between his teeth."
O.M.G.
These are the kinds of stories I love, with surprising little sentences like that and just feeeeeeeeeelings everywhere. And I love love love it when the guy in a het pairing is the one who wants more, and he's all cautious and kind and confused. It's so sweet and so hot! Lol, it just "occurs" to him that maybe he should get some more furniture for her. He's all grumpy and upset she didn't call him, like a puppy who's upset his owner left for a week. I also love how he thinks of it as her giving him a gift, meanwhile he can be supplicant and pliant and obedient enough to give her gifts in return. And great images, as always. Off to read more!
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 05:23 am
Lana is ridiculous! As long as he's being safe, what he does with the rest of his time is off limits to her; especially as far as other women are concerned. She made herself quite clear about what she thought about him and his station in life. As she perceives it, anyway.
Lucas is no better here either. Don't bring an innocent person into that sh*t he and Lana got going on.
They don't know what they are doing here.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 10:12 pm
Good update Lucas finally gave Lana some of her own medicine.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 06:39 am
Lana is so jealous that it's making her drink which is hilarious. Lucas make her sweat she deserves some pain in life! I am loving her angst it makes me smile! Jessica is quite unprofessional throwing yourself st s man while at work. She would break Lucas off a piece with no hesitation. This is some goof shit!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 05:27 am
For someone that don't care she is extremely jealous.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 02:00 am
love the update...
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 01:46 am
OH MY GLOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S GETTING SO JUICY, OOH YOU GOT LANA JEALOUS AND I LOVE IT!
Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2013 01:36 am
I understand Lana and why she acts the way she does. I don't like the way she treats Lucas but I understand why she feels the need to keep him at a distance.
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2013 06:43 am