Heather will do Big Bertha some good locked up. She is stalking and leaving a trail of threatening messages. LOL
Mr. K needs to lose his MF business; he is off the chain with his demands. You should flip the script on his assets.
Author's Response:
its about to get real for everyone....
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2011 01:47 am
This was a great update. I think that Heather is a sore loser and thought that Chad was going to continue to take her mess. The only bad thing in this is that Dani is the one now that she is trying to hurt because she know how Chad feels about her. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Author's Response:
Thanks CHerry
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2011 01:43 am
I like how things are starting to happen in the story but I'm getting tired of Dani just running away all the time.
It wouldn't have been hard for her to pick up the phone and tell Chad about Mr. Kerrington letting her go.
If she wants Chad in her life she needs to start including him when things happen to her.
Thanks for the great update! I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
I agree, but running away is Dani's thing...
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2011 01:38 am
Okay, now kerrington is just being a little heavy handy. It does give chad and dani a chance to start there own business with clients following the and of course picking up more because of they are know to be fair and good to there clients. now just what is that skank up to? Hmmmm! Now what can dani do to protect herself she has to know that heather is not just after chad and cory but her also. Could bitch slap her, but that's what got her fired. Being put out on tv about her slutty ways and a drunk has not done much to stop her, fuel her nutty fire is all. Maybe a little jail time? Yep that sounds good to me. Ha!
Author's Response: He had to be heavy handed. It's all he has. He may change his stripes though. Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 01:06 am
loving it!
Author's Response: Thanks Kaci.
Date: July 09 2011 12:27 am
Heather is pissed. I wonder what she's gonna do. I hope Dani sees what through her skanky self. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for supporting the story Reviewer: jannelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 12:16 am
Wow that sucks she got fired from her job. The girl tried to harm her and all she did was slap the bitch not kill her lol. What is Heather up too? Something tells me nothing good. Thank for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks. Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 12:03 am
The story is good, but at the same time its getting a little predictable also. Its more like a soap series where the bad guys just keeps doing bad things with no sign of self respect or dignity what so ever. I mean Heather just lost his job and there is also a sex tape of her. A normal person would be humiliated and clearly get the message that she needs to leave Chad alone. I'm getting sick of her. Its so annoying that this woman even after this still wants to continue doing bad things. And succeed at doing it. She needs to get over it already.
Author's Response: Thank you and you know what, I think that's how I'm writing it. In my mind like episodes. I appreciate your candor. Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2011 12:02 am
That heffa is crazy!! All who work for Mr Kerrington need to get together and file a suit against him.
Author's Response: Class Action lawsuit. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2011 11:57 pm
Love this chapter. Ben needs to get a life. Stop giving your opinions because no one is interested. Dani know she wants Chad back in her life but Chad needs to handle his business with that skank Heather.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading...
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 04:21 pm
Thanks for the update. It was great.
Author's Response: Thank you Reviewer: will2pear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 04:23 am
HEATHER IS SO STUPID, CAERY TOLD HER WHAT HE WOULD DO IF SHE DIDN'T LEAVE CHAD ALONE. THEN THE HO HAS THE NERVE TO CALL CHAD THE NEXT DAY. LOVED IT!!!!
Author's Response: Stupid is as stupid does. Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 04:07 am
I got caught up on the story and it is really great. I do like the way the Chad handle Heather. Ben is jealous of Chad and I feel like he wants what Chad have not Dani but Heather if he didnt already. Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 04:05 am
I'm lovin how Chad is taking charge and getting his life back in order.
Ben is an ass! I'm still wondering if he slept with Heather.
Carey is too funny.
Thanks for the update! I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I am glad that you're enjoying it! More to come soon Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 03:31 am
great chapter,,,,,I cannot wait until the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks ma'am. More coming soon Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 03:06 am
Loved the update. Yes!!! Heather finally getting hers!!! About time!!! Can't wait to see what she has to say. That skank has been doing too much damage without consequences. Both she and Ben need a reality check. Maybe she'll think twice about messing with Chad and Dani in the future. Enough is enough!!!
Author's Response: Ben is ugh, well like that one relative that gets on your nerves but you tolerate because they are family...
More to come this week!
Date: July 07 2011 02:32 am
LOL, this chapter was FUNNY, Dani LAYING OUT Ben, and they Jacking his Jaw was PRICELESS, and Chad KNOCKING him out was just ICING on the CAKE, and he derseverd that.
Its about time that Chad dealt with Heather, he should have done that a while ago, and know Karma is getting back at Heather BIG TIME.
I can't wait to see what Heather has to say.
Author's Response: Heather speaks in the next chapter. Finally! Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 02:31 am
Heather it is over. Dani is putting them down all over the place!
Author's Response: It's about to finally go down. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 02:28 am
You go Dani, enough is enough!!
Author's Response: She got her, finally! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 02:24 am
you know i thought maybe ben had also had some one on one time with crazy woman. cary love him having chad back. i would love a more intense intervention with family on ben's butt letting him know they know. ha! the picture are good too.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 01:41 am
yep, that's what i am talking about! of course she couldnt stay down. well another day another time to put her away and ben too such a jerk!
Author's Response: It's going to be finished soon Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 01:32 am
WHAT??!!! Dont leave it there!! Ughh!!
Author's Response: I had to leave the cliffhanger. I'll write some more soon!!! Promise Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:47 am
Chad is the man.,,trying to get back his woman... Had to take out the big guns.
Author's Response: I think so too. He's my sensitive guy! Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:44 am
Ben getting his racist ass beat by both Chad and Dani and Heather's skanky ass being exposed was worth the wait . Carey quoting Friday's over Ben's unconcious body was just too funny. I guess Heather is out of a job now plus I think she slept with Ben too. cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: More to come. They aren't finished yet, soon though!!! Thanks for following Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:41 am
Oh yeah finaly Heather is about to get hers for playing games with people and can't wait to read the look on her face. It good Dani going to give Chad a chance agian to work things out. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks maam Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2011 12:06 am