Gr8 update. Heathers a ho and whats up with brian is he a closet rascist? Otherwise the brothers were impressed. Wow chad is so gaga over danny
Author's Response: Ben's the one with the issues... the rest of them are cool. Brian's just an dunce... Yep Chad is sprung and he hasn't even done the do yet.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2010 12:15 am
Well that explains a lot. I love Carey, I hope you give Carey his own story.
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about giving a story to Carey.. but hmmm... I might just go that route...
Date: March 31 2010 12:04 am
Ms D, thank you for giving an update twice in one week. Do you have leave us with a cliffhanger. I assuming from the way Chad brothers talk that his parents never interact with successful black people or his brother are just ignorant good ole country boys.
Author's Response: You know I HAVE to do the cliffhangers... its just how I write... LOL... His parents country music folks from Tennessee... Reviewer: tcarey Signed
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 11:53 pm
lol not the way you wanted to meet family but it turn out great. she not a white girl specaliy with a ass like that lol to funny. glad she put that fake hefa in her place let her know chad doesnt' wanted her. thanks for the updated and can you belive that jc team with orton last night lol world going crazy lol.
Author's Response: Orton is becoming a face and Bautista is the new heel. I like Orton and Cena together... New DX... World Domination! LOL...
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 11:39 pm
Dani...proud of you babygirl! That's how a woman handles it!! With class, dignity and grace. No tantrums, theatrics or drama.
Brothers....so dumb they are.....lol.
Chad...the boy is showing that he was raised right. Love a guy with some home-training.
Nice
Author's Response:
Glad you approve of the brothers... LOL...
Dani, she's that ish! LOL
Chad, well he's the man..
Thanks for reviewing and reading.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2010 11:30 pm
Another great update. Dani cooked for her man and met his brothers. I like the direction the story is going and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks Jules... Since this was a double installment it may be Friday before I post anything else.
Date: March 30 2010 11:26 pm
Oh I can't wait for their reactions. Loved the update. Hopefully Dani gives him another chance. I'm so loving this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I think you will be pleased with the reactions.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 06:15 am
That was funny, I am glad that Dani was finally in the mood to listen to Chad. What does Heather have planned for Chad and I hope that he's ready for that heifer. I love this story too!!!
Author's Response: I guess when you have a hangover and you're no at your house, you gotta listen. Thanks for loving my story... :)
Date: March 30 2010 05:22 am
Well, that brothers get to meet his girlfriend..the woman of his dreams.
I'm glad they are getting things cleared up
Author's Response:
Thank you...
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2010 02:44 am
O.k. he's got Dani where he wants her, in his bed. so to speak: and now his brothers shows up. What the hell?
Give the man a chance to shore up things with the love of his life. I hope that they won't be giving Chad any grief about his girl.
Great update.
Author's Response: You know how siblings are, of course he's about to get grief. Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 02:34 am
Thanks for the update! Loved the interplay between Dani and Chad at the club. Chad truly has a friend in David. Dani is a little gun shy about a relationship with Chad, but he is confident enough for the both of them.
I love the pacce of your chapters, but the cliff hangers are killing me! Could your next chapter me a double istallment? Their impending relationship is a must read.
Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
So are you saying that you don't like the cliffies? I do the cliffies, because when I write these chapters, its like I literally see how I want this to play out. So it's like leaving you wanting another episode. I'm going to "try" to give you a double installment. That's like a 2 hour episode in my mind... LOl
Reviewer: Traci Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 02:21 am
I can write my update for this chapter in 2 words, "loved it" So glad David was such a friend, and backed off. Now we get all the yummy goodness of the brothers. I know there will be more angst for Chad and Danielle, and your story will definitely need some male solidarity and support for Chad when he and Dani are not exactly clicking.
Thanks for posting
A
Author's Response: Yep, more angst is down the road.... Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2010 02:15 am
That was a really fun update!!! I like David's caveman comment and What Tan said was way to funny!!! Awesome update. Glad Chad got to explain himself. Look forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks ma'am... Don't we all have friends like that?
[Report This]Date: March 30 2010 12:50 am
Ah yeah, I loved the club scene! Chad didn't even waste time trying to explain anything he just went and kissed his woman and took her home. Yeah!!! A little caveman, a little gentleman. Perfect!
I'm happy Chad was able to let Dani know what happened the other night with Heather. Now I can't wait to see what Chad's brothers think of Dani. Patiently waiting for the next update.
Author's Response: Working on the new update now... Work can wait.. LOL... Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 30 2010 12:08 am
Good for Chad. Now Dani knows so she can take Heather as she comes.
Why are his brothers there??
Author's Response: They are a part of the plot twists and turns.... Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 11:44 pm
What are the brothers about to get up to?
TY for the update
Author's Response: Just being brothers.... Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2010 11:06 pm
So many chapters to read!! And I enjoyed each and every one of them!! :)
Heather is definitely a skank! I hope someone puts her in her place soon before she causes too much trouble!!
And I am sure that Chad's brothers meeting Dani in nothing but a UT shirt is going to be entertaining to say the least!! LOL
Author's Response:
It's not going to be that good, inititially, acutally kind of boring but its important
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2010 11:05 pm
This story is just keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm enjoying writing it.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 10:36 pm
this story is cute i like it. Chad is so hot, and Dani is sweet so damn its gonna be nice.
Author's Response: Thanks Lily. Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 10:24 pm
im loving the story and the frequent updates keep em coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks Kell and I'm spoiling you guys! LOL
Date: March 29 2010 06:50 pm
Omg, cant wait for Chad to unleash the caveman he is so hot.
oh btw Davids advise was the bomb i laughed me silly.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it... c'mon we all know guys like that ....right... :)
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 06:45 pm
Yay! Great update, and now the hottie brothers...can't wait to read that!
Author's Response: Thanks ma'am...
Date: March 29 2010 06:23 pm
oh crap the three hot brothers at his house and they finaly meet dani witch is good and kind of funny since they both have hang overs lol. also wanted to say Cena is the champ yes yes yes lol. glad she listen and now knows he like her and doesnt' wanted his ex. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: I know, I just posted on Facebook about Cena being the Champ! So excited! LOL...
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 06:11 pm
Awww man, I wonder what the brothers will think! I just love these two....
Author's Response: Thank you. I like this couple too.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 05:28 pm
Can't wait for more . Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks Stacie!
[Report This]Date: March 29 2010 05:23 pm