Happy New Year! Can I just tell you how much I love this story? And can you please, please with sugar on top, let DeLeon get and keep his girl? See, I'm down on my knees, begging you to give DeLeon and Kendra the happy ending they deserve.
I know some people are rooting for Prince to come in and save the day, but he's had YEARS to let Kendra know how he truly felt. Instead, he chose to go the best friend/gay/bisexual companion, or whatever it is he's supposed to be. I say, if you're slow, you blow...and in this case, he blew it big time!
Thanks for a great update!
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 03:28 pm
thanks for the update i.t.!!! now that kendra and deleon are pregnant (hee hee) and in love prince needs to gone somewhere for real!!! he had his chance!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 01:54 pm
'You done violated my grandson ain't 'chou girl' LMFAO HAHAHA. Pa is too much LOL. I loved this one aswell:'Yea, you stink a' sexin'. hahaha, I love this family so much. Prince better not phuck up my happy ever after, I'm cutting him some slack coz he's Kendra's friend, but damn he's already giving me anxiety problems. LEAVE KENDRA ALONE TO BE SEXY WITH DELEON!
This was FABULOUS times a bajillion, thanks so much :D
Date: January 10 2011 01:15 pm
I LOVE THEM SO MUCH!
*sobs violently*
Where is my Deleon?!?!?! WHERE IS HE?! LOL.
Ergh, I mean I love Prince, but..........lol.
Eeek, I'm almost scared to read the next chapter.
Date: January 10 2011 12:55 pm
Like it. I also like that we now know what DeLeon does for a living. He actually has some SKILLS that he can used anywhere. He can certainly financially contribute to his and Kendra's relationship. And Pa wants some babies...well he may very well get them VERY soon, since Kendra and DeLeon cannot keep their hands off of each other and there is no condom in sight. LOL. I like where the story is going. But I am still looking forward to Prince showing up and totally jogging her memory. I just hope she does not go anywhere without talking with DeLeon. I suspect that them West Virginia boys don't play. LOL.
Looking forward to the next updates!
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 09:05 am
Excellent, excellent, excellent writing - did I say excellent?!Kendra & Deleon's passion literally leaps off the page thanks to your writing skills!
This whole family has drwan me in and I'm rooting for a happily ever after for Kendra and DeLeon. Great job!
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 08:03 am
Ughh! Complications!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 07:35 am
ooh wee, you sho'done spoil'd us miss titmouse. Thank ya ma'am! (hope I got that right) =)
Reviewer: fangirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 07:17 am
Dax and Pa had me laughing my ass off. Pa wants a grandbaby boy from Kendra and DeLeon. I'm thinking that's a real possiblity. I'm hoping they'll be given at least one more day of bliss before the shitz hits the fan.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 06:46 am
Loved the update! Hmmm, Kenny may just be preggers with all that loving DeLeon been putting on her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 06:19 am
Only the beginniing, Prince. I love this family, they speak their minds. I cracked up when both Dax and Pa told her she stinks. Love is in the air, after only 4 days.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 06:05 am
Kendra and DeLeon are so happy.. It's a shame that it's all about to come crashing down around them..
Love this chapter.. I want more!!!!
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 05:40 am
"But that had to be, what? Thirteen years ago?" DeLeon nodded. "This looks fresh."
"Cuz it is. I keep it this way." Kendra blinked at him, her throat suddenly closing as her eyes began to sting. "When we first did it, Dax useta love just comin' out here to hang out, git away from Pa an' his grief. Hell, from our grief. It was the first real memory we'd made since our folks'd died an' he loved it for just that reason." He shrugged casually. "So we'd make a night of it. Bring out some blankets and lamp and some food and just . . . hang out. 'Til dawn and chores and life an' shit came crashin' back." He cleared his throat, his eyes returning to her. "He eventually forgot about it, forgot 'bout his grief, an' moved on." He swallowed. "But I didn't. Couldn't. So I still come here. Li'l less of'en, but of'en enough. Brings me a sense of peace, 'specially when the moon's like this." They both looked up at that moment, the tears Kendra had been fighting sliding freely down the sides of her face.
OMG! I just fell in love with DeLeon myself!!
Seriously!
All I wanna do is hug him.
I don’t care what life she had before DeLeon, he’s her life now! And she is for damn sure his. She can’t leave that man now!!! If she did, it would surely do him in.
I know all good things must come to an end, but I just want a little more ‘happy’ with Kendra and DeLeon. Right now, they’re in this bubble – just the two of them loving each other and it’s like at any moment, some force will threaten a relationship that was meant to be. And then you find yourself holding your breath, desperately willing all reality, all ugliness to never appear.
Okay, I'm getting sappy now but gurl, I'm hooked!
FABulous writing as always.
BTW, Amy is the coolest! Luv her!!!
Author's Response: wow! but i must agree, that part was tugging at me too. DeLeon's a tough one, but a true man and sweetheart at the core of him. thanks for your words! Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 04:11 am
Please dont split up Kendra/DeLeon i love them...keep prince as a friend this story have so much potential for kendra and DeLeon. love the writing
Reviewer: marleanpat@hotmail.com Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 03:04 am
This was a Great Update! I really like DeLeon and Kendra together. But I am torn with Prince. He is also wonderful with Kendra. I don't think these two men will get along and neither of them will tolerate the other being so close to Kendra. This will be a cataclysmic meeting. LOL.
Looking forward to the next Update.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 03:02 am
Loving this story more and more. Makes me wonder if Prince is in love with Kendra?
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 02:22 am
My love?!! WTF! Where did that come from?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 02:19 am
So glad you updated. DeLeon makes my heart hurt. He loves her so. And now Prince is talking about his love?!?!? This can't be good.
Loved her convo with Amy and the good advice that Amy gave her.
They've had a few times without protection. Sistagirl is going to end of preggers. Can't help but. I'm thinking DeLeon is pretty damn potent.
Chica, you make me want more each time you post. I simply think you are the bestest!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 12:59 am
Awesome update! I love Kendra and DeLeon together.
I'm greedy - so another update please!
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 12:57 am
Even if you don't get another one to us, this one will hold me over. DeLeon is a sweetie, even with all of his roughness. Kendra will be the one to bring back the old DeLeon. Too far gone with each others bodies, to worry about protection. What will the outcome of this love-making session. Awesome update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 12:40 am
Oh snap, and now on with the drama!!!
Reviewer: fangirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2011 12:21 am
I've read this story from the beginning and I am hooked. I am team Kendra and DeLeon!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 05 2011 08:30 pm
DeLeon wore my girl out!!! He is so happy right now. I shouldn't anticpate the hurt that's coming, so I won't. I'll just enjoy his joy as he does.
THe best friend likes Kendra, the dog likes Kendra, what more could you ask for? :)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 05 2011 03:41 am
Loving this story. It's funny, sweet, intense and intriguing. I'm happy Kendra and De Leon got together. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. Will be looking forward to an update.
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 11:49 pm
Loved the update. Deleon and Kendra sure burning up the sheets. Wonder what all happened in the discussion with Barry and Dax.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2011 07:12 am