This is a very tough subject – one that most cannot express and yet, unfortunately, these tragedies happen every day. I applaud your bravery in writing the harsh realities of life. My hope is that somewhere, somehow, Demetrius is human.
It’s been so long since you’ve updated that I had to reacquaint myself with the story. I'm curious as to how all the players will meet on the same playing field. Until then, you’ve captured my attention to see it through.
Update soon.Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/11 01:24 am
I enough this chapter because of Reese and Marcus' relationship. I am looking forward to Riley and Troy meeting each other. I find Demetrius very interesting even though he is a bad guy. But there is something about a bad guy that you just have to like.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 05:11 pm
So is Riley going to fall for Donovan because he's hawt!!! I think that I'm in lust. I need to fan myself.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 02:40 pm
VERY good...that's what I think! The pace was excellent, the dialogue was light and interesting, details of Riley's credentials were presented in an effective and clever manner, new charcters were introduced smoothly...the entire chapter read perfectly. Job well done.
The F.B.I. hunh? How intriguing!
Date: 02/08/11 12:09 pm
whoa! That was intense, scary! My heart was thumping just as heavily as Riley's was!!
Date: 02/08/11 11:45 am
aww you chose david beckham as the lead male? i not found of him but the story is greatReviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/11 02:41 pm
This was a great chapter. But I am looking forward to Riley and Troy meeting up. But at least I get to see how they come to meeting, through Reese. Cassidy is hilarious especially when it comes to Troy and Miranda. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/11 04:58 pm
I absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next update. Thank you....Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 05:02 pm