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Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Love this story! So GLAD your back!!!!!

 Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 08:46 pm
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

That was freaking off the chain. Wow, Vlad did it...he is turning Bowie!! If we thought Bowie was a bad ass before ..she is going to be off the chain now.

I will say I felt sad for her because she seemed so hurt..I also think I wanted them together but I didn't want Bowie to be a vamp but I guess she must if she is to be the queen!!!

It was so incredibly hawt though...Vlad knows how to put it down...LawdLwad ..I would give him my neck too if he put it on me like that ..lol lol.

Oh how I love Mr. Muse..he is back with a vegence and you are writing your butt offf sweetie...loving it!! Don't stop....

 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 07:18 pm
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Oh wow, Vlad really laid it on her. I knew that nasty bastard wanted to get all up in her, lol. So hot. Loved it. Oh wow, things will never be the same after that encounter. Hopefully will see that fine ass Joey soon. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 07:06 pm
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Wow; that was intense and really hot at the same time! 

Great job; story is really starting to heat up!

Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get around to it; no pressure...sincerely.

 Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 06:49 pm
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

oh wow that was soooooooooooooooooo hot this is one of the best storys on the chamber loving it thank you for sharing it with us just wow

 Reviewer: leahcar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 11:42 am
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Oh my god, he hasn't turned her into a vampire already? You can't leave it like this!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 11:33 am
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Oh sh*t!!! Is he turning her???!!! More please!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 09:44 am
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

He put it on her! Damn hard and good! Still, I'm curious about his timing. I have so many questions? She was late coming to him. Did he 'summon' her? And with her only in a shirt?! I thought she would have tried to keep distance through some sense of professional formality that she has tried before.

Why did he do it then? Is there a timeclock he's worried about or the Others that are after her? Why exactly now did he 'have to' bite her? So how can Joey, Bailey, Master Yoshiro and Hiroshi help her now? Or will they even still want to help her after the Bite?

Vlad didn't even take his clothes off in front of her. The man was just waiting for Bowie...nekkid.

I very much liked his tricks, esp. the fading in and out like missing movie frames. Still, I wonder why he chose to do 'that' then? And funnily enough, it felt like this chapter's Vlad was more like the Vlad in the very first few chapters--like I don't know him at all...again.

So much I'm dying to know! Vlad has got me all worked up again! Love him!

 Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 08:46 am
Title: The Beginning is the End is the Beginning

Woww,  he went through with it. I'm anxious to see how things will be after this. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 06:31 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

That was soo good!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 06:17 am
Title: The Players

what the heck that was very erotic & hot. I'm wondering tho about that book he didn't touch what's N it & Y is he appologizing what has he done besides the obvious of drinkin from her. can't wait 4 more keep on bringin it

 Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 09 2011 06:07 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Wow, great chapter! Am loving all the sexy tension between Vlad and Bowie! And it is just my imagination or is there tension Reid and Bowie as well? Probably not, it's probably cause Veronica keeps saying it over and over. Veronica I find annoying, it's like she thinks if she says something repeatedly it's going to come true, grr. Girl, Vlad only has eyes for bowie, so take your wrinkly ass home!

Wonderful add and please update when you can, I;ll be eagerly checking my inbox every day so like no pressure or anything lol :P

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2011 01:07 am
Title: The Players

first off I WANT TO SAY I'M SORRY I KNOW THAT LIFE SOMETIMES GET IN  THE WAY OF THINGS PLUS BEING A WRITER YOU WANT YOUR STUFF TO REPRESENTED OF YOU AZUTHENTIC I UNDERSTAND & RESPECT WHERE YOUR COMING FROM SO NO PRESSURE LET THE WORD COME & FLOW AS THEY WILL.

 

 

WELL THIS WAS A BIT OF A TEASER I FELT KIND OF A SETUP FOR WHAT COMING NEXT WHICH I KNOW IS GOING TO BE A TREAT

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2011 05:38 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Is Reid having feeling for Bowie or is it something about just touching her that makes men attracted to her..lol

I think Reid is a lot more powerful than we realize!!

Well tonight is going to be a interesting one..I cannot wait till midnight!!

Great job sweetie..want more!! lol

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2011 04:22 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

great update so glad that you have your muse back thank you for updateing wether big or small i am just so glad that you are continueing  looking foward to more in the future take care and thanks again  

 Reviewer: leahcar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 11:32 pm
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Love it

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 07:41 pm
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Whoo hoo, so glad I didn't have to send Stacy after Dude for another update. This was great. Hmm, if Reid wasn't so in love with Ludmila, I'd think he was a little head over heals for Bowie too. Bowie has the magic clam or something because her milkshake brings all the boys to the yard. I mean wow. I hope there's some freaky deaky between Vald and Bowie in the next chapter because you know Vlad can't keep it in his pants when Bowie is around. Loved the chapter. Hope Dude continues to inspire you.

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 12:04 pm
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

you know we did sista ...:P

great chappie cyn~

 Reviewer: cynn333 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 11:15 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Good things come to those who wait. Totally feel you on the hectic life thing. Take your time. A good story is to be told with love and to be savored by the reader.

 Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 10:47 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Loved the update. Wonder what he wants to talk to her about or is it like she thinks...a booty call???!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 07:39 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Great chapter. I love your work and I don't mind when you update as long as you do continue to update. Art cannot be rushed and this is definitely a masterpeice in the making. Take your time, love and don't be rushed or discouraged by naysayers.

 Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 05:28 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 2

Good update IT... When will Bowie find out the truth??

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 04:43 am
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 1

OK I really love this story but I was about to give up on it..please longer chapters and more often..please!!

Alex is stupid..Vlad is hawt...Bowie gonna whoop everybody's butt..and I so want her with Vlad when it is all said and done...good job sweetie..more please!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2011 11:59 pm
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 1

Thank you for the update . I'm still so in love with this story .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2011 04:13 pm
Title: The Respect Issue Pt 1

DAMN DAMN DAMN!

I HAVE SPENT THE LAST HOUR AND A HALF READING THIS! THIS STORY IS GODDAMN AMAZING! THE MOST SEXIEST AND SCARIEST THING EVER!!

Casting is super hot and super creepy! The story line is intense and I cannot wait till you add more!!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen between bowie and vladmir! Loving it!!

 

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2011 09:05 am


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