Reviews For Farewell
Title: Hunter vs. Game

Jumping up and down . Loved this chapter. Can't wait fo more . It's so Dark ... I love it. Great job !!!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2011 04:26 pm

Title: Hunter vs. Game

It seems that the dreams are getting more and more vivid. I wonder what's going to happen next.

 

Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 07:02 am

Title: Hunter vs. Game

Ok now what do I do..there is no more to read and this is getting so good!!

I knew that crazy heifer would be trouble but I am still not sure about his sister. I think Bowie can handle that trashy blond g/f but his sister is another story!! I wonder is she the one who turnrf Reid?? He is crzy in lust for her and she is playing with him...humm!!

I wonder does Bailey have someone watching Bowie..he knows everything going on with her or is it their connection as twins..

Anyway so many intricate details...so intriging I can hardly wait for moreeee!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 03:07 am

Title: The Outsider

Wonder why Reid  is so nervous?? Isn't he one of them since he has been changed or is the clan against him too??

Vlad's brother is a big and an animal and needs to be put in his place. I am not sure about his sister Mila..I will have to see what she is about so I reserve judgement right now!!

Joey better watch out but I think he will be ok..wonder what Bailey knows are feels...I am little nervous but I cannot wait for more!!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 01:26 am

Title: Try a Little Tenderness

Joey is sexiness and their night of passion was hawtness but now the stuff gonna hit the fan and Bowie is going to be put directly in the fire!!!

Where is Yiro and Hiro...I hope they are not far away as well as the Lycans...she is going to need all the friends and back up she can hav now cause she is going to meet the clan...More more moree...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 12:37 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

Bowie's conversation with her mom was Wow...and very eery!! I hope she takes her moms words seriously because it s look slike there is a war a brewing all over Bowie...and it gonna be a crazy wild one!!

Cassius is a lucan..love it actually love the wolves...they are big and ubber sexy!!! Wonder is Joey a wolfman..he is something different lol!!

I do not trust Vlad's sister ..she is sneeaky and trouble...Bowie has so many enemies  now ..it is a good thing she has powerful friends...bte Hiro..sexy as heck too!!

Girl this is good!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 12:03 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

Pooe Bowie has had her share of heartache..her mother is probably not insane but how she knew all this would happen is the mystery..somebody killed Bowie's dad to make sure non one found out..somehow I dont think it was Vlad but who???

Darn this is good...I am so glad I found this jewel and you are the jewel master...excellent job sweetie!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 11:36 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

OK another sexy man for Bowie...does she every sexy man in town..even those from out of town..lol.

I am glad Bowie has Yosh and Hiro looking out after her and that they know exactly what it is that wants her...I hope they can help her!!

I am freaked out that Bowie's mom knows about teh immortal that wants her and apparently has before Vlad entered her life. I wonder was her dad an immortal...and why does her mom think her dad was killed by Bowiee...lots more to that story for sure...

Joey the gentleman...I do not know what to make of him...I am still wondering!!

Vlad has a woman waiting for him at home...I am starting not to like him very much...I might want him to back off Bowie as well!!

Keeps getting gooder and gooder :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 10:44 pm

Title: Kinetic Energy

Ok I love Reid..he is perfect gay boyfriend...not sure if he is but I kinda get the feeling he belongs to Cir or Vlad in a special way..lol.

I love Yosh is watching out for Bowie and can at least somewhat protect her from things that would hurt her..she needs him.

Not Cir how I feel about Bowie but I do not think she is safe around him and he his quest to make sure their blood line stays clean he may hurt her or try!!

Poor Joey or not....I just got a feeling there is more to Joey than we know...he seems to be hiding something as well....I don't think he is Mr. Perfect at all!!

I loveeeee this story sweetie..just enough dark to make very interesting and just enough sexy to make you anxious to see what happens next...and I lovve the intrigue more than anything!!!Great job..

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 10:05 pm

Title: Just a Little Closer

Ok I feel bad for Joey.he seems like the perfect man..heck I even got the hawts for him!!! I hope Vlad wont kill him ,,,or I hope Joey can hold his own...I like competition between the men and let the best one win Bowie's heart!!

Ok new job could mean the death of Bowie...Vlad is putting her in a lot of danger I hope he knows what he is doing!! Something tells me Bowie is not such a weakling as Cir would imagine her to be after all!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 08:21 pm

Title: Distraction

Joey is playing with fire...find another woman Joey..one not that is not the object of desire for one very dangerous hawt Russian vampire....I am worried for Joey!!!

Bowie has the hawts badly and I am not sure if it is because Vlad keeps coming to her dreams getting her all worked up, or if it is because she hasn't had any for a long time or if it is that sexy southern man...whatever the cause...her desire to get her groove on with tall dark and sexy man hurt him more than her.

BTW I love Rion and Bowie's friendship..they are funny and oh so real friends!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 07:35 pm

Title: And Life Moves on

Sometimes me Vlad is not going to like Mr,Joey all up on his woman..not one single bit..Joey may be in danger but we know  Bowie definiteely is...loving this one sweetie ..on to read more!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 05:14 am

Title: Hunter vs. Game

I just got caught up on all the chapters and I must say Vlad is very interesting.  I do hope things end well for Bowie.  And in spite of the creepiness this story is very good. 

As I was reading the chapters I had to ask myself am I a romantic wimp?  Although, Vlad is this ultimate badass I found myself hoping that Bowie makes it back to Joey.  But that doesnt seem like its going to be possible.  Especially with all of the folks that want her dead.  And the ones that were fighting for her are all the way back in America.How sad!

I can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2011 12:47 am

Title: Hunter vs. Game

Wondeful update, love the teasing between bowie and vlad...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 10:30 pm

Title: Hunter vs. Game

Oh No, Slutlana didn't!!! That bitch better watch out messing with Vlad's woman like that, Hmmm, interesting dream Bowie had. I thought for sure Vlad would step up the game and make a real move, corner her and tap that. LOL, but you're building up the anticipation just fine. And I anxiously wait for more. Still missing my Joey though and hoping for that Menage a quarte. Umm, Reid, I like him a lot but I think he's taking his life in his own hands by letting Bowie sleep in his bed. Hope Vlad doesn't find out or else,  poor Reid may never get to express his love for Mila.  Great job, IT! Can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 08:17 pm

Title: Bullseye

I just started reading this and I am really digging it!! I really like Ms. Bowie Fern and her independent self....she has Vlad tied up and I cannot wait to see what he does about it!! Great story sweetie..

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 07:55 pm

Title: Just a Little Closer

I luv, love, LOVE Joey and Bowie as a couple. They have great chemistry and he compliments her well as she does he. As for Vlad...ehk, he's just like every other powerful, rich, undead Vamp: manipulative, controlling, horny jerk who always get what they desire which equates to a certain sex appeal I suppose...the Joeys of the world (hopefully not this Joey) are thrown by the wayside (damn that, the man is TOO fine and hella sexy to throw away!)

Having said all that, Vlad is written with a twist that makes him 'interesting' to watch. The revelation that he's pure Vampyre intrigues me.

My boo Joey (haha) better watch his back!

Great update lady! :)

Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 07:02 pm

Title: The Players

thanks for the update... i cant believe bowie claimed him in her sleep and told the man he was her mine.. so bowie is his queen maybe she could help them right a new level of vamprye with out killing folks ..update soon please i feel like a stalker with this story

Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 04:06 pm

Title: Hunter vs. Game

Vladimir appears extremely happy to have Bowie with him in the castle.  And Ludmila is worrying.  And Reid and Bowie were so cute together when she ran to sleep with him because she was too afraid to sleep in her room after her dream.  And the man with the mask was Vladimir?  Bowie was pretty lethal with her nails on him.  And now we have the first person who wants to harm Bowie...Ms. Svetlana.  Although it looks like Alexei might feel similarly. LOL.  Can't wait for the next update.

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 08:48 am

Title: Hunter vs. Game

Oh the intrigue! The sexiness! The darkness! The creepiness! The bondage...ness!. Glad your back and feeling better, lady. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 07:07 am

Title: Hunter vs. Game

LOVED IT!!!! With that strange reaction to the room, is there something special or magical about Bowie?? Bailey had me cracking up with his potential antics. Is Reid a vamp too?? Hope Vlad isn't upset with him as Bowie was in his room. Hope she returns to her room in time. Oh oh, I'm scared for Bowie now that Svetlana is on the hunt. More please!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2011 06:44 am

Title: The Outsider

I'm crying on the inside because I need an update!! Please put me out of my misery and update!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2011 05:33 am

Title: The Outsider

Thanks for the update . I'm totally loving this story .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2011 04:35 pm

Title: The Outsider

 

Luv Luv it!!!! I am officially addicted to you story. I don't know how your going to make Bowie fall for Vlad but I believe in your ability. I am just in love with you story. Please update soon 

Reviewer: tayia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2011 02:44 am

Title: The Outsider

This fic is like crack to me!! I just can't get enough, and I am sure as fire is hot that I am addicted. I sure hope you can sueeze out another chapter tonight, whoo hoo! Vlad is back on scene people, get ready!! Love the added characters by the way. Man, I must say, you have the Midas touch with this story, so I hope your creative juices continue to flow. Great work as usual.

Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08 2011 02:12 am



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