Reviews For Farewell
Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

Vikings, Vampryes, and Werewolves? oh my this is getting so massive and Bowie gettin a lil lovin to add in the mix *hearts this so much*

YES! 

 

LOL 



Author's Response: is that chloe seviegny (how ever the eff you spell her name)? lol great .gif as usual. i still want that giraffe one though. hotdamn that is great.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2011 01:08 am

Title: The Players

Damn, Cassius is fine! Wouldn't mind him protecting me ; )

Reviewer: Dani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2011 12:52 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

Yay for casting Mila Kunis. I heart her!

I'm really intrigued about Bowie's parents. I can't wait to find out where her father fits into all of this! 

Sexy creepy Vlad is going to make his move so Slutlana better step off! Great work. I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 11:30 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

This chapter explained a bit more.  Cassius is some kinda bad ass isn't he.  Alright!  He sounds like he is a Viking werewolf.  And Bowie and Joey will finally come together. Great.  But I have to say, I am getting more on Hiroshi's band wagon now.  He was her first crush and probably would have been her first love, but for his uncle Yoshiro sending him back to Japan.  So, now we know that Bowie is special...special how?  And is Vladimir willing to bring her to Russia if he cannot fully protect her?  That does not sound like him based upon his past actions.  How strong is Vladimir?  And who killed Bowie's father?  

It sounds like things are about to get ratcheted up.  Looking forward to the next update!

Nyeesha 



Author's Response: you pose the best questions. really keeps me on my toes. and yeah Cassius is no joke. his background will come later though.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 10:58 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

Wow, this story is getting deep with Vikings, vampyres and protection spells....LOVE IT!!!!! Can't wait until Bowie's specialness is revealed. Hmmm, what's Joey's part in all of this??? Is he special too??? Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 10:48 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

I can't stress how much I love this story. I just don't think its possible. Like another poster said, I'm not sure who to root for. On one hand, Joey is so super fine and I want him and Bowie to get it on, and Hiroshi is also fine, hmmm, he needs to get up in the menagerie too, lol. But then you have Vlad who is determined to have Bowie and that's really sexy too. He won't be stopped. Cirico is asking for his ass to be handed to him. I'm sure Vlad hadn't planned on that otherwise he probably wouldn't have severed the link. Wonder if Vlad will be bringing Ludmila to the US to meet Bowie in person. And hope Slutlana is not trouble. Mmmm, Cassius is kinda delicious too. Is he down with the brown? Maybe he can hook up with Rion. LOL, So glad Bowie and her mother found closure. By far this is one of the top ten stories on the Chamber so far. Can't wait for tomorrow's update. If I could give this story more than ten stars I would.

Author's Response: my numero uno motivator! it's always wonderful reading your reviews. and as the writer at times i flipflop. sounds insane, but the characters just keep yelling at me and Bowie's just sittin' there like, "i dunno either." thank you so much for the compliments!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 09:38 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 3 (Final)

Another great update! Gald to know Bowie's mother is in a better place and they both received some closer. There is so much going on in these chapters that I get so bummed when I reach the end, so please keep em coming! This story is very captivating and I don't know wheater to cheer for the good guys or the bad ones. That vamp king is super hot and I can't wait for he and Bowie to put the heat in the sheets! Though I must amit Joey's a hotty and Hiroshi is fiyah! So many hot men in this story I don't know what to do!! Keep up the great work!  ~_^

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 08:34 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

oh vlad u make them respect the queen

Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 04:16 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

Wow, this story goes deep! Hmmm, it seems her mom may have been having visions of her future. Sort of scary! Hmmm, Cassius is abit scary too. Wonder if he's one of them???!!! Can't wait until she meets her mom face to face again.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 08:19 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

Wooooooow that was really good, and stop that!

 

are your an awesome talent! your a phenom already made not in the making I repeat already made.

Although I love this chapter series "Roots Bloody Roots" I ain't quite feelin the song tho,lol all that screaming and yelling like he done lost his dayum mind hahaaha...but I understand that it's a really good soundtrack, very appropriate  for the vibe going on in this chapter series, so it is what is, lol don't change it *thumbsup*

I know, I'm sorry I'm sucha dork with the gifs,hahaha, I get so excited in expressing my enjoyment and delight of the stories I have to show out in gifs.lol  

Awwwwww Thanks for Queenie me the honor!  

 

LOL 

Also, I'm looking forward to more about knowing about her father and why he died and why mom is so loco.  I have a feeling the ending is going to be a shocker so make it a thriller Hint hint... Good boys are always the one but bad boys are so much fun! *fantasy wise of course not in real life* lol

Reading your story has been like watching a film it's so detailed in that effect I'm so drawn and lost in it I keep watching the scroll bar hoping it won't end lol it reminds me of a incredible writer on here that has gone on to become a very successful author T.A. Ford aka Minx on here. 

Now until then, I'm off to obsessing about the next chapter  please post soon asap *sigh* lol

  

 


Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 06:59 am

Title: The Players

very interesting....waiting for the next update

Reviewer: jay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 06:25 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

You are making me an addict to this story lol. I like want to see it posted everyday lmao. 

Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 05:02 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

I don't know why you keep putting this story down because this chapter was the bomb. It gave so much more insight on the characters. I like that Bowie, isn't the perfect cookie cutter heroine. She has a past, she has issues and she's not perfect, but you make the reader still like her very much. I'm beginning to think Bowie is no ordinary human judging from what's going on with her mother. Perhaps her father was one of them and perhaps Vlad locked on to Bowie from when she was in college and her father tried to prevent what he knew would eventually happen. Would love to see some kind of flashback. I also understand now why Vlad has been slow to make a move, its more so to protect Bowie from the elders. Nice. I like Ludmila, and I still hate Slutlana, lol, I like how you incorporated that nickname into the story. I'm still hoping nothing happens to sexy Joey. Looking forward to seeing the scene between Bowie and her mother, and still hoping Bowie gets some sexay times soon with any of the hotties in this story. Loved it. You did it again girl!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 04:29 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

Amazing Titmouse, this chapter is dark, but expertly written. After reading this chapter, I changed my mind about V. I don't want Bowie to loose her soul and become a vamp. I hope she doesn't fall for his charms and look. Like I said before his love only brings darkness. I hope Joey and Horishi can save our girl B. I wonder do Bowie have natural abilities sense her mom have some weired premonition thing going on. Damn I am a little upset with her mom, because she should of been trying to save Bowie, not push her away further. I'm still said to know that she is dying, hopefully she can end things well with her. God Bowie has a lot of strength and she will need it against V alluring ways. Damn I could go on and on and on lol. This story needs to be published, damn this is good lol.

Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 03:09 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

So, Bowie's mother knew after her father's death that Bowie would be Vladimir's Queen?  What is her mother?  What was her father? Was he part of the Clan?  Are they some special beings?  Questions, questions.  I still don't like Vladimir sexing his young victims and Svetlana.  You just know he will not like his Bowie letting other men touch her.  Hmmmm....

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 02:58 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

I totally love this story. It's different and interesting. But I just don't feel Vladimir. I mean we haven't really got some interaction between them, so i don't really feel any kind of chemistry between them. Its more like a love story between Bowie and Joey and not Vladimir.

I really wanted some hot stuff between her and Vlad, But right now I just don't feel it. They barely even talk. I don't know who i want her to get with. May be Yorisho. I do hope for some interaction between Vlad and Bowie, maybe then I'll get the vibe between them. And especially after these last two chapter. Why would he sex someone else  instead of Bowie. Does this mean that he doesn't want her anymore?? 

Anyways update soon!!

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 02:09 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

It wasn't so bad,,,I really like how Bowie character is shaping up...I don't know if I'm going to cheer for Vladmir, Joey, or the sexy a$$ asian guy I forgot his name 

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 01:38 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

Stalking you........ Update!! Please please please!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2011 07:34 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

I want more dammit! lol Great job Titmouse, this story is banging. I'm already into these guys, but I have to say Joey and Mr. Asshole Boss are doing it for me. Shit Bowie needs to fuck one of them lmao. I would for her but........................ lol. Anyway great job, the plot has me at the edge of my chair. Will V corrupt our girl Bowie even though he is in love with her? The love that V has is dark where as Joey is more of an uplifter. Will Bowie soon be in the realm of having her own supernatural abilities? Can Yorisho and sexy Hiroshi save her or can she save herself? What will her mom tell her? I have so many other questions and some about Reid as well, but I will save it for the next chapter. lol :) 

Author's Response: great questions and a lot of them will certainly be answered. thanks for loving the story!

Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 01:33 am

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

I went back and re read this story because I just love it so much and I realize I haven't given you the credit you deserve. This story is so intricate and complex. It's layered and the characters are flawed yet you still root for them. So much is going on yet you manage to pull it all together beautifully. I think that's why I love this story so much. My hats off to you.

Author's Response: aw! thanks, Happy! i don't even know what to do with this praise! other than hope to continue to please you. i always write what i think i'd like to read, so i'm glad my taste goes beyond my weird imagination. lol thanks again. sorry i couldn't update tonight, but i should be doing so tomorrow. no plans! i have major things to do with this story and i can not wait! i'm so happy you're along for the ride!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 01:08 am

Title: Bullseye

IT....this is CREEPY!! *creepy organ music*



Author's Response: that's my goal! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 11:24 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

Another great update - keep it coming!

Author's Response: i certainly will! my brain is churning with these characters.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 10:42 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

oh my goodness another man wanting her?!?!?! im not sure now if im still pulling for joey or this new guy. the more i think about it the more i DONT  want vlad to touch/turn her.

what in the world kind of powers do her teacher and this new guy have anyway??!?!? and her mother -  whats up there????? so many questions i.t.!!!! masterful as usual though. you have me on the edge of my seat!!



Author's Response: you may be disappointed, brownskingurl, but i hope not so much that you stop reading or enjoying the story. ::sad face:: pweeeaaasseee?! lol

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 05:43 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

Oh IT, you broke my heart with this chapter. What the heck is Vlad doing sexing up someone other than Bowie. I'm shattered I tell ya!! I don't like Slutlana. *sniff* Does this mean he no longer wants Bowie? But Hiroshi is very dishy. Hmmm, Maybe Bowie should have a threesome with Joey and Hiroshi. Yummy. You did it again girl. This chapter had me panting for more. Keep up the good work and please update again soon. This story is like crack to me, I need another hit!! LOL

Author's Response:

be patient with Vlad; he's still trying to figure this thing out. lol love the new moniker, Slutlana. lol that's great.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 01:27 pm

Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 1

*Does the happy dance*

 

LOL Thank you, Thanks you, Thaaaaaaaaaank YOOOOOU!!

This is insane a back to back story *highpitched voice* YES!! LOVING IT!!!lol 

OMGosh! Bowie got Three hella FIONE dudes chasing after her Sexy Badazz Vamp Russian, A Sexy Japanese stud muffin, and a Fione azz Southern Gentleman!!Awww Haha

I'm so happy I truly enjoyed this chapter,  It This just felt right, I'm glad "the Lovin" it wasn't rushed or forced in as you mentioned.  You just let followed you instincts and and let if flow wonderfully so when it happens I know it's gonna be the bomb!!.  I really love the anticpation for it is so exciting for me!

Thanks for another great chapter!! 



Author's Response: you, my friend, are the Queen of .gifs! that is awesome. thank you for reading and for your patience with the whole sexin' part. i know i chose erotica for this story, but it doesn't really seem to be, huh? once the sexin' starts though . . . damn!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 09:53 am



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