Wow! Hiroshi is HOT! Can we get a picture?! All I can say is, move over Joey. I don't see why she can't have Joey and Hiroshi, if they don't mind sharing. LOL. And Vladimir...out of sight, out of mind? He is all hot and ready to get it on wth Svetlana, eh? He is proving to be a faithless son of a gun. Hmmm...so, Hiroshi is her bodyguard, right? I like that Reid is protective of Bowie, but in the end, he will do whatever Vladimir tells him to do. Is that why Reid is protective or is it genuine? What's up with Bowie and her mother? Is she dangerous to Bowie? And I am looking forward to the confrontation between Hiroshi and Cicirco. May the best man / spirit win....
So, looking forward to the next Update!
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Hiroshi's pic was added to The Players' section so check him out. the pic's a little mysterious but i chose the actor Takashi Sorimachi if you want to look for more.
Vlad's a thousand+ year old vamp; he barely does emotions. lol. but he feels a little twinge of something foreign so all's not well on the . . . "cheating(?)" front. lol.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: February 01 2011 09:11 am
Loved it!! Wonder who the sex is gonna be with, Joey, Vlad or Hiroshi?? Let the games begin. Yay!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2011 07:36 am
NO JOEY AND BOWIE SEXING I WANT SOME BOWIE AND VLAD SEXING!! ANYWHO I AM LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2011 05:55 am
Great story so far and I can't wait to see where this is headed. You have a very creative mind and your characters are so visual they seem to pop off the page. I am officially an avid fan, so please continue the great work.
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you for such great praise!
Date: January 31 2011 11:39 pm
nice chapter,does he want her soul or her love ...
Author's Response: Vlad wants it all, with his creepy self.
Date: January 31 2011 10:44 pm
Bloody yes! - what a great chapter! The plot thickens and the characters are so interesting - can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 31 2011 10:30 pm
Cirico, is trouble with a big T. Joey and everyone will get caught in the way unless he is trying to protect her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2011 09:38 pm
I was ready to say I love this story until you dissed 30STM! You know they say a writer's story contains truths about them and so instead of giving this story a ten out of five stars, I'm giving it a nine. That will teach you. LOL 30STM is underrated IMO.
But seriously, I love that song from Apocolypta and I totally feel the vibe of the song in the story!
Loving the characters and the fact Bowie is a strong woman and isn't going to just play a weak chick when in Vlad's presence. I like those stories best when the female doesn't fall at his feet.
Author's Response:
Lmao! i'm glad you like it.
sh, don't tell anyone, but . . . i actually really like The Kill. haven't really given any of their other songs a chance, though i hear really good things about that particular album.
i enjoy writing Bowie so i'm glad you like her. she's a great character with loyalty, but a backbone as well.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 31 2011 03:35 pm
oh my gosh i am loving this!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2011 02:17 pm
This wasn't crappy at all. Well worth the wait. I really like Reid. That damn Cirico is going to get himself killed when Vlad finds out what he's up to. This story is my new obsession. Whoo Hoo bring on the fun. This chapter was well worth the wait. Please update soon!!
Author's Response: thank you so much for following this story and pushing me as well as being patient with me with it. it's been a great motivator.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2011 01:52 pm
I am hooked hooked hooked.
I wanna know more about this Vlad fella, I love him. And what is that Cirico fella upto?!!
Great update girl!!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2011 01:26 pm
First of all I wanna thank you for this beautiful gift of this new chapter
and inregards to the chapter notes, girly what are you talking about this chapter was superb!! I love the direction your going this is awesome please don't stop! I'm addicted and you have a fan for life and those two new characters are so sweet! Love it please don't stop
Author's Response:
that .gif is hilarious!!!! cheered me up for work.
and thank you. i had such a hard time writing it for some reason and i thought it dragged a bit, but thanks again for reading. i'll be updating some time tonight after work.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2011 10:51 am
Good update. I like Yoshiro looking out for Bowie. And who followed Joey after he left Bowie's apartment that night? And Cirico better be careful that Vladimir doesn't kill him. Vlad is bound and determined to have Bowie. This is getting really interesting.
Nyeesha
Author's Response: yes, Vlad isn't letting anything or anyone stand in his way. thanks for reading!! Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: January 31 2011 08:44 am
I thought this update was good eventhough you may have had a rough time with it. More please! Loved it!
Author's Response: thank you!!! i'll be updating tonight.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2011 08:00 am
Please have mercy on me and update!!!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: January 30 2011 04:26 pm
Oh wonderful chapter I can't wait for more plz, post every day or sooner lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 03:39 pm
ohwee this is so sweet two sexy gorgeous men!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 01:06 pm
ohwee this is so sweet two sexy gorgeous men!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 11:09 am
oooh this is good and girl where did you find the sexy hairy chested fione azz russian man. Whoo girl *faints*
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 08:03 am
Please update!! I'm having withdrawals!!!!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 06:55 am
GWORL, YOU BETTER STOP! Your writing is soo good. I'm away from The Chamber for 3 weeks and you already have a new story up :D **victorydance*
First you had me searching high and low for my own Deleon (I live in the south-east of England so finding a southern man is no mean feat LOL), then you had me wishing Elwyn and crazy-ass Esme would get it together, and now Vlad mmm **drools
I just hope they don't hurt Joey, can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: Alphabet_Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 03:42 am
Can't wait for more. So creepy . I love it . PERFECT !!!!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2011 03:04 am
Great story.
I like your characters especially Vlad and Bowie
Can't wait to get some more of Vlad and Bowie interaction.
update soon
thanks
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2011 10:28 pm
I am really loving this story and I hope it will be updated soon!!!!
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 27 2011 03:18 pm