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Title: Just a Little Closer

Please update!!!!!

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2011 05:01 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

can't wait for an update, great story and writing

 Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 07:08 pm
Title: Just a Little Closer

A man that can decorate, cook gumbo, AND serve up a mean Key Lime pie? Count me firmly on Team Joey. Food>Fangs, every time. 

Am enjoying the juxtaposition betweeen good guy Joey and Bad Undead Vlad. Keep it comin'!  

 Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 05:32 pm
Title: Just a Little Closer

Great update, so enjoying the story...still on team Vlad..or that Cirico is kind of hot! lol!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 04:42 pm
Title: The Players

Nooooooo! Don't kill Joey!

 Reviewer: EthiopianAngel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 02:11 pm
Title: Just a Little Closer

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! For updating this story!! I love it!! And its so good, I have to repeat, I love it!!!! I'm scared for my boo Joey though. Such fineness shouldn't be destroyed but I get the feeling Vlad won't like someone touching who he considers his woman. Wow, what's the deal with Cirico. Hmmm, Reed is mysterious, would like to hear more about him. That Svetlana looks like she's going to be trouble. Was that Vlad following him or Cirico. I can't wait to find out. I am anxiously anticipating the next chapter. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 12:56 pm
Title: Just a Little Closer

ahhhhh tell me more plz

 Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 08:44 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

this is so delicious!

 Reviewer: brightnova01 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 07:30 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

Nice promotion.  But was it only because of her job performance or also because Vlad wanted to get her away from Joey.  Cirico is sorta creepy; and did he get the scar on his face from Vlad being "annoyed?" If so, imagine what Vlad would do if he was really enraged.  I like her meditation/martial arts teacher Yoshiro Kurosawa; he appears sensitive to the new pressures Bowie is facing.  And finally, was that Vlad following behind Joey?  Will Joey be able to defend himself?

Can't wait for the next update.  This is developing into a really interesting story.  Tell us more about this Russian Clan of the Pure Originals.  Is Vlad the leader with absolute control OR is his power subject to the Elders?   And is is possible to get another photo of Bowie and Vlad...please?

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

you will definitely get to know more about Vlad's roots and his role in the Clan, as well as how the Clan works. more than like in the next chapter, actually, but of course not all at once. i like to change the "definition" of a Vampire/Vampyre, as i'm sure almost every author does when writing supernatural stories.

as far as more pics of Vlad and Bowie, Vlad is actually the face of Mads Mikkelsen ::swoon:: something about that man has got me. woo! and the woman i chose, i have no idea who she is. i tried researching for her, based on the watermark on the photo but couldn't locate her at all. sorry!

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 07:03 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

I am loving this story. I hope nothing happens to Joey. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one. 

 Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 06:03 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

oh hell no!!!! please dont let anything happen to joey!! im not too sure i want her with vlad the mad ok!?!?!? more please!!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 04:37 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

love it of course. What's a girl to do when she has two fine looking men and one's a vampire that wants her. 

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 04:37 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

Oh oh, Joey is in trouble. Hope he doesn't get hurt! Vladamir is so into Bowie , its obsessive!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2011 04:36 am
Title: Distraction

please update...is joey black a wolf or something

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 09:05 pm
Title: Distraction

This story is so intriguing I can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 08:21 pm
Title: The Players

Really enjoying this so far! 

 Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 07:15 pm
Title: Distraction

Great update! Hmm..wondering what our russian is planning..?..anyway, I'm on Team Mads...I mean Vlad! LOL!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 04:21 pm
Title: Distraction

I loved this chapter!!! I'm torn between who I want to see her with. I like the dark and mysterious Vlad, but Joey is just too mmm mmm good. I'm on pins and needs waiting for the next update. Great job!!

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 02:38 pm
Title: Distraction

Great story.

I think that Vlad will get rid of his competition. I hope that he doesn't hurt Joey though.

 

 Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 01:19 pm
Title: Distraction

I'm wondering if Joey and Vlad are somehow connected, based on the comment he made about her being the death of him. Enjoyed he update

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 07:19 am
Title: And Life Moves on

Vladimir is invading her dreams. How will Joey fit into this equation.  I like the two of them together, but for some reason I like Vladimir too. Awesome update. Love her best friend and brother too.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 03:11 am
Title: The Players

I'm really enjoying this and I'm intrigued to see how Vlad and Joey play in Bowie's life. Great job.

 Reviewer: Valhalla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 02:29 am
Title: And Life Moves on

Nice update.  Bowie and her brother are fun together.  And what a friend in Rion...brought by a little somethin' somethin' for Bowie. LOL.  I need a friend like that! And Vladimir is a vampire who is invading her dreams. Hmmmm...Is Joey Black anything other than human?  Looking forward to next update.

Nyeesha  

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 12:40 am
Title: And Life Moves on

I really like this story a lot.  I like the chemistry Joey and Bowie have as well as the love/hate relationship between Bailey and Rion.  Can't wait for the next update :-)

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 12:27 am
Title: And Life Moves on

Oh wow. I love this story!! More! More! More! I think Vladimir is visiting her dreams and definitely don't think he'll be please with her budding relationship with the very delicious Joey Black. Joey is dishy. I hope Vlad doesn't kill him. Please update soon!!!

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2011 12:06 am


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