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Title: Lay in My Bed

spanktastic update! so damn hot!

 Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 02:21 pm
Title: Lay in My Bed

Oh they so nasty! But Mo and Simon are so meant to be. Still lovin Aunt Mae but I hate she's not well. I'm guessing ol' boy slept with Simon's fiance ?????

 Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 02:00 pm
Title: Lay in My Bed

WHEW!!!!! i need a cigarette and i dont even smoke!!!!!! they done made sextuplets aint they lol??!?!?!? aunt mae and cooper are sooo awesome!!!! they share the same soul those two.....love them almost as much as mo and simon. is cooper in love with simon or something?? what is it? im kinda slow on the uptake sometimes. or did he screw amber........nah i dont think simon would care so much about that.......or would he..................

MORE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 01:21 pm
Title: Lay in My Bed

Wow! That was intense. They're making up for lost time. I'm exhausted just from reading it. hee

And yep, babies are being made in that house. And yet, Molli will prolly be surprised when it happens. It'll be interesting to see how they both handle "reality".

Wonder if Cooper's "secret" has something to do with the business? Aunt Mae really needs to let Molli know what's going on with her.

Really, really well written chapter, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 11:36 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Really enjoying this story... I wonder if Cooper is sleeping with his fiance?? And I'm guessing aunt mae has lung cancer. Please update soon

 Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 11:16 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Ahhhh! Not Aunt Mae I love that old song bird she got some gumption about her.  So apparently she has some lung aliments going on.

I wonder what Cooper's big bad secret is. Did he sleep with what's her face the one Simon suppose to be marrying in a few or so months.

loved the update can't wait for more please more

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 08:28 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Aw I wonder what secrets the both of them are hiding and how soon they're going to tell their respective friends and family.

 Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 07:26 am
Title: The Cast

Hey i love this story Update soon :)

Reviewer: kedabooski Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 07:16 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Hi there, IT...haven't left a review yet...but just so you'd know...been reading along all the while...and this has been one heck of a ride...Simon and Moliere are hawtness personified...there's only so long you can run from your true feelings and then...like a ticking bomb...it explodes...and they have been exploding all night all up and through that house...loving the physical...but now I need them to start being honest about their feelings for one another with each other...can't wait until floodgates open...and for everything to be out in the open...

I'm guessing that Aunt Mae is terminal...and she doesn't want Mo to know...I think she really needs to tell her...this is going to very painful for Mo...but at least she'll have a chance to be there for her in her final days...don't know the direction you're going with Cooper...but my guess it has something to do with Simon's fiancee and an 'indecretion' between the two...that's the only thing that I can think of that would 'break his heart'...his best friend's betrayal of trust...

Great story...loving it so much...looking forward to more...wow, this chapter packed a powerful punch!!!

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 07:11 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Aunt Mae is dying of I guess cancer, which is hella sad.  What  exactly is Cooper scared to tell Simon?  I am so glad that Mollie and Simon gave into their lusts, but wiil they admit their feelings for each other.  Why is marrying a woman that he doesn't love?  Please wake those two up!!  Great story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 06:46 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Mo and Simon are freaks and I love it.  What is Cooper's secret?  At first I thought he was gay but now I'm thinking he slept with Simon's fiancee.  Poor Aunt Mae.

 Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 06:40 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

This is one of the most fun stories I have read in a long while. These characters are so funny and endearing. I appreciate your effort into this.

Hahhaahhaah it's a shame Mae isnt 30 years young for Cooper X-D Oh man lmao imagine that!

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 06:27 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

LOVE THIS STORY. IT PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT KEEP want to be writters like me on the fence. I rather be reading your stuff ;0)!!! Loved it! NOW UPDATE!!!!

I was so sure that Aunt Mae and Cooper were going to hook up. But alas she is sick and DYING. How could you!!!!! She needs to live to light a fire under there behinds!!!!

 Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 06:18 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Was this chapters titled from Marios Lay in my bed? That is my song!!! That is definitely some baby making music right there. I was a bit shocked to see Simon talk about a future with Mo. You are totally messing with my predictions. And whats up with Cooper? I bet he slept with Simon's fiance. And poor Aunt Mae, ist it lung cancer? Oh man oh man that scene in the kitchen when he walks to her naked....nice.

 Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 05:41 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Oh, man, what have you done now? I'm going to assume that Aunt Mae is dying from lung cancer and hasn't shared that tidbit with Molli yet. As for Cooper...I'm leaning towards him sleeping with Simon's fiancee. 

 Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 05:09 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Shut the front door ! That was so good Intel I love simon and moli . And yes Simeon sounds like the man 45 minutes hot damn. I ll play Mo. LOL 

Oops I forgot Simon has a fiancee. P.S Cooper sounds hawt too.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:41 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

DAMN SIMON SAYS SIMON SAYS WHOO THAT MAN IS SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:37 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Hmm, wonder what their secrets are?? I sort of figure aunt mae may have cancer but not so sure about Cooper but I feel its something bad that may hurt Simon. Makes me wonder if he slept with Simon's fiancee??? More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:35 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

You got me guessing.....

let me guess...he's in love/slept with his BF's fiance

 

please update soon the suspense will kill me lol

 Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:33 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

I can't tell you how happy I am you've decided to post here where I can enjoy these stories you write.  This chapter was so well done!  I'm even looking forward to the impending heartache from the bad news, and I like not really know what that is going to be.  Suspense never really killed anyone!!

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:27 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

Another winner.....loved it.  Please come back soon.

 Reviewer: Romance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:26 am
Title: Lay in My Bed

This is getting better and better.

Will he pretend to not want Molli when his finacee gets back in town.

What did Cooper do? 

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 04:24 am
Title: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

moooooooore damnit more hot sex

 Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2011 04:07 am
Title: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

Wonderful and hot,hot hot.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2011 03:15 am
Title: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

HOT HOT HOT!

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Date: March 30 2011 11:37 pm


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