NEXT CHAPTER PLEASEEE!!!!!
Reviewer: kedabooski Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 11:19 pm
owwww so hot please update ...i like the flow of you words, i can see it as if im watching tv
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 10:30 pm
Charly has lost her ever loving mind!! Who wants her Laz or Nic? They are both hot though!! Great start.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 09:05 pm
Loved the start. Please continue soon.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 08:53 pm
hmmm is right. is he a sucubus?
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 08:50 pm
I love horror stories, now I am hook . Excellent beginning and you need to update today.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 07:24 pm
Wicked!!! I like it so far. My favorite line is ....Being with you is like is like relationship Ambien. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 06:33 pm
I think you have another winner here, Happy...Nic is a predator and he's spotted his prey...unfortunately for her...it's Charly...her sadness and sense of betrayal put her on his radar and he intends to take full advantage of her for his nefarious plan...he feeds off of human frailities...and Charly was the most vulnerable...she has fallen quite nicely in his lap literally...he's an other-worldly being...a demon perhaps...I feel so badly for Charly...her goodness is also her draw for him...it always pure goodness that evil wants to corrupt...and thus begins the nightmare for Charly...
By the end of this chapter...I was screaming in my head "Run, don't walk, but run, Charly as fast as you can from him"....but no such luck...
Looking forward anxiously to an update of this new Spring baby-fic drama...I so scared for Charly...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 04:06 pm
You're off to an amazing start. Hate Kevin and Dee.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 03:32 pm
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 03:01 pm
Yes, that's all she had to say. It would have been nice to see the friends beat Dee's ass and the ex. No more missionary sex for Charly. I can't wait to see the new Charly after Nic finishes wih her. Awesome!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 03:00 pm
Great cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 03:00 pm
Yeah Happy, loving you right now. Nice cast!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 02:49 pm
Whoa___ Speecheless is the word I would use to describe how I felt after reading this chapter. It seems as if its going to be a sinfully good and I can't wait to see whats going to happen next!!!!
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 02:36 pm
Wow, I'm in love!!! LOL, but I remember Rosemary's baby and that damn movie had me scared and tripin about neighbors and doctors for a minute when my sis got pregnant, for real!!! LOLOLOL!! I hope Charly get a better deal than Rosemary did, cause Nic is super fine!
GREAT JOB, MORE PLEASE! :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 02:10 pm
Oooooh, well, this is interesting.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 01:57 pm
I read this twice, enjoyed everyword
Reviewer: kamille Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 12:10 pm
that was very good happy but im a little nervous about this guy. what is he anyway? more please!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 11:57 am
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 11:23 am
great start! this is going to be very very veeery interesting - cant wait for the next chapter! thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 11:11 am
Loved the way it started! Good character choice, I can totally see Rihanna as a backstabbing hussy(in this story) haha but nice character choice =) Cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2011 10:21 am