This story just keeps getting better and better.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing. I am almost caught up need more. ;)
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: August 16 2012 02:00 pm
Now how did I know that was going to happening.
All that time I kept chanting don't do it Sara...don't you do it girl...he a playa....something is off about him...then with Mr. Shinohara who hardly ever talks or says a word is out in front of his door and then whole a long drawn out convo with Kamir. Something just didn't seem right in the water.
Wouldn't it be something if Kauro got pregnant by Kamir that all it really was is that her body was allergic to Yuki's sperm are it just wasn't meant to be anyway I have heard that some women have been allergic to their partner's sperm or that her body can kill the sperm before it meets the egg because it's just not compatible. Hey! Don't judge me I'm just saying....LOL!
I'm glad that Sara and Yuki did not sleep together. and I hope Kaoru sings like a little mocking bird....since her and Yuki has gotten so "close".
Great update....I'm so excited
Happy writings
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 04:08 am
More please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2012 03:30 am
Yuki is so freaking sexy in this chapter...I am so ready for him and Sarah to begin their romance!!!
I want a Shouda..so mature and loving...he is a prefect child..he needs a sister wink wink!!
I think he is so accepting of his dad because his wonderfully classy mom never stopped loving Yuki and that love is extremely evident in how she has raised her son!!
Shouda has all their best qualities..he will be a great big brother!!
They are going to be a wonderful family..soon I hope!!
I love Karou..I am glad she and Sarah are remaining friends..I do not blame Karou for reaching out to someone else...she knew Yuki did not love her and could not love her because his heart has always belonged to Sarah!!
Excellent excellent excellent!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: June 29 2012 01:26 am
Thanks for the update. Really wish there's two would stop playing footsie.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2012 02:21 pm
I love this update and so missed this story. thank you.
Yuki is going to fight for his woman, mother of his child and future lover, and best friend. Great.
Shouda is a winner!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 28 2012 04:26 am
Hmm...even though I know Yuki and Sara are endgame. I'm still not feeling Yuki. He's going to have to do some serious begging or something to get back in my good graces. Their issues still haven't been addressed. I'm just really not feeling them together. Something seems to be lacking...I don't know they aren't really showing me any chemistry right now. Hopefully, that will change with the upcoming chapters. I will say that I loooooooooove Darren and Percy. Keep them coming.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2012 04:25 am
Another great chapter, so glad you are still writing this story.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2012 12:49 am
So glad to see an update for this story. I love Yuki and Sara but they are moving entirely too slow. Although I must say it seems kind of weird for Kaoru to want to be friends with and so concerned about Sara considering she has a child with Yuki when she wanted to give him a child. How can she be so cool and not jealous and then she just goes off to sleep with Kamir, which seems totally out of character for her. Why didn't she talk to Yuki about how she was feeling and actually end her marriage before she went and slept with Kamir, whom she thought was in a relationship with her new BFF Sara? Now she is concerned about how Sara feels about it but at the time she slept with him she didn't care. I think she has a devious, manipulative and vindictive side that is just starting to resurface after being supressed for so long. Can't wait to see what happens next! Don't wait so long to update again.
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2012 12:21 am
Thank you so much for this update, I truly love this story!!! I am patiently waiting for Yuki to tell Sara that he and Karou are divorcing. I hope that Sara gives Yuki a chance and doesn't shut him down because of the past. Sara please allow the man to earn your trust back because he did do you wrong in the past. Yuki a suffered because of his lack of backbone and so have you. I love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2012 09:11 pm
Fantastic story! Brava! I can't tell you how much I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you azzure. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for leaving your comment as well. I've updated...finally.
Thanks!
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2012 09:35 pm
I wrote a really long review and it disappeared...aww well!!
I loved this chapter ...I love the parents plotting and what seems like kids are going to find their way back to each other.....Shouda gonna get his family after all I hope...and the right way too!! Love this story sweetie!
Author's Response:
I asked Jacci if it could be retrieved and she said no. I was very sad. I wanted to read it. Well, thanks for leaving another one for me anyway.
Seems everyone is plotting at one time or another, except Sara. Hmmmmmm
Thanks for the comments as usual.
:}
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2012 02:55 am
I'm so glad things are turning out so well for everyone so far. Hopefully his birthday goes smoothly.
Author's Response:
So far so good! Yes. Thank you! :)
UPdated!!!
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2012 03:49 am
So excited to see what will happen next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! If you are still excited, check it out! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: BossLady Signed
[Report This]Date: April 28 2012 03:26 am
Thanks for a good update. The shopping spree was fun. I was LOL at the parents and their reactions to the gift for Shouda. No matter how much the husbands try to outfox their wives they will ultimately fauil. I am really surprised that Yuki's dad is so invested in his son being with Saraua. Looking forward to reading what happen nexts. Thanks
Author's Response:
You are very welcome. I liked the shopping scene too. You kind of get a glimps of the past and what could have been all along...at least that was what I was going for. As to Kenji, I think he knows whats right and what Yuki wants and that is Sara. He knows that part he played in the past and doesn't want to make the same mistake. Though he isn't very vocal about it.
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 01:44 am
I havent' read this update as of yet, but, I know it wil be great.
I liked the fact that the two mothers are going to make a plan...whether for the good or gooder (of course not a word) I am not sure.
I love Yuki father, he has a great deal of insight into things. He is funny as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks! and Kenji is a trip. :)
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2012 12:11 am
This was a great chapter. I loved all the family interractions. I like Kamir too, just not for Sara. I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring Yuki and Sara together.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Writing family is fun I think. :)
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 07:19 pm
It is really bothering me that Yuki has yet to tell Sara about his impending divorce. Yuki can't stake his claim on her heart until he does. Not to mention he needs to apologize for dumping like she meant nothing. Yuki has alot to make up for snd his parents should apoligize to him as well. They ruined so many lives! Love the Darren/Percy and Kenji. Yuki's momma is starting to grow on my like moss on a tree. Yuki open your heart to Sara and let her where she stands. Wonderful, just winderful!
Author's Response:
Alright then! I think Yuki is still getting it together. Men are simple creatures are then not? They are also rather slow. So Yuki fits that opinion, however, I think he has heard your pleas. Great comment about Izumi by the way. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 06:14 pm
Something about Karou is bothering me. I don't like hos she is pursuing Kamir. She is not even considering that Sara might have had feelings for Kamir. Sara has been very kind, understanding, and supportive of Karou. It's not something I would ever even contemplate with my friends. Excellent Jobs!!
Author's Response:
I hear you! However, I don't know what to say...... Thanks :)
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 07:09 am
Oh Sara is so my hero. My articulate and poised hero. I'm so proud of the way she handled Kamir who is in fact a dog.At least he is aware of his shameless deeds.
Waiting for Yuki to speak his mind. Though I love his pleasant nature,I would like to see him pour out his emotions. Not necessarily in a dramatic fashion but something to make me exhale and say, "Finally Yuki."
Though Kaoru and I would have many disagreements in terms of morality,I like her self awareness. It's definitely stronger than Kamir's and so much more...mature.
Great chapter as always. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for this feedback. You express yourself very well! I'm keeping your wishes in mind, be assured. Um...and I think you owe me a couple chapters from your stories as well. I'm waiting!
Thanks :)
Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 03:45 am
Kamir is an idiot but a loveable one for Karou. She seems determined have him for the fun of it all.
Sara and Yuki are circling each other. What does Yuki expect Sara to do when he is a married man.
I love the grandparents. Yuke's father is a mess. But Darren/Percy was onto his scheme.
Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, Sara and Yuki are circling each other. Lack of communication is the root of all evil. Ha! A bit dramatic yes, but true.
:)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 01:05 pm
Love the update, please update soon. If you are asking if Sara was easy on Kamir the answer is yes.
She needs to be little hard on Yuki to bring out the man in him and fight for Sara
Confused at how to approach sara with is love and if he is man enough to be Sara's man
The mothers wiill plan to bring Sara and Yuki together with a little bit confusing
Reviewer: bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:54 am
I think Sara behaved OK with the Kamir situation.
Kamir seems to be a bit of a manwhore. He made some bad decisions and tried to blame them on Yuki.
Yuki jumped to conclusions concerning Kamir and Sara. He should've asked her to clear it up.
The mothers are going to try and play matchmaker.
Reviewer: ttee72 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 06:26 am
First, great chapter. I am so happy you decided to continue this story. I do a happy dance everytime I see an update.
Now to your questions.
No Sara acted like a lady & thought like a man :-)
Kamir is a dog, he thinks he is all that and in the beginning he was.
Yuki thinks that he doesn't have a chance with Sara
Looks like the moms have a plan to get Yuki & Sara together
Author's Response:
I absolutely LOVE your response. Thank you for this. Its funny the way things come across to readers and what I learn about my own writing throught them. So many good comments. Thank you!
:)
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:26 am
I love it! No, I don't think Sara was too easy on Kamir. She's in a place in her life where she can't waste time on useless emotions; being upset with Kamir would be just that--a waste of time.
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:18 am