Excellent beyond words, You must complete this story. I am so proud of Sara and Shouda. As for the father I have nothing for him, He need to put his foot down with his parents and wife. If he wants a continuing relationship with his son; he better make should he does not disrespect Sara because Shouda will not stand for it. Please update soon. You have great talent.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I often think kids from single parent homes rather extraordinary. Poor Yuki, he doesn't get much love. He's got some things to work out.
:)
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 10 2011 09:10 pm
:-( Just one, well you could write for experience and me ;-) LOL!!
It really is a wonderful story and the father and son connection already, well it's just boundless with possibilities.
Please, think about it...
Thanks!
Author's Response:
I think I missed this review somehow, I'm sorry. :)
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 08:56 pm
I feel sorry for Yuki's wife,but she needs to flee and go find her own happiness. I would love for Sara and Yuki to get back together, but I want Yuki to work really hard for her love and Shoudas. I love this story and I am so glad you decided to continue.
Author's Response:
The first time I read this I laughed when you said 'she needs to flee.' I don't know why...I'm sorry. *writing* Yuki should work hard for Sara. Got it!
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: LilBluestar Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 08:48 pm
I hope Yuki's mother doesn't use her power to force Shouda to live with them. >_>
And I also hope Sara finds a new man, and that Yuki and Kaoru strengthen their relationship. Though I wouldn't be surprised if Kaoru just got up and disappeared one day, or even killed herself. -____-
Author's Response:
There is really no telling what Yuki's mom will do. She is extreme in all directions. Well, we will see how things turn out in the love department.
:)
Reviewer: c. o. Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 08:34 pm
Please update more frequently. This story is goooood.
Author's Response:
Slave driver! Thanks :)
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 08:27 pm
Hey hey awesome story keep going with it and more cast pics please this seems like a great story good job.
Author's Response:
Yes, I've been working on cast photos and hope to have some for you guys. Thanks!
Reviewer: rebellion Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 07:49 pm
So glad you are still updating. Loved it. I'm glad sara isnt going to let yuki mother s push her around.
Author's Response:
Sara is a nice person, but by far a stupid one. Especially when it comes to her son. :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 07:47 pm
Yayyy!!! Thanks for continuing with the story. Definitely want more lol.
Author's Response:
Your welcome! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 10 2011 07:20 pm
Should you do more? OF course. I hooked looking for another update. Yuki
Author's Response:
I don't know how I missed this... Thanks! :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 10 2011 07:18 pm
Do more woman, please! There is so few Asian/Black stories out here.
Author's Response:
So true. I am a whole hearted supporter of Basian love.
Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2011 06:42 am
i would very much like to read more but if this is where the story stops then thanks for the one-shot! truely enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Love your very diplomatic review. Too kind. Thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2011 04:43 pm
I need more!!
Author's Response:
Got you covered. ;)
Reviewer: LilBluestar Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 08:48 pm
Please, for all the things that is holy, please make this into a full story. I was hook like a fish from the very beginng. Eventhough you have some miner mistakes, it didn't bother at all. update soon!!
Thank You! ;-)
Author's Response:
For all things holy. Very dramatic. Drama is good. Thank you!
Reviewer: Elli Mac08 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 05:29 pm
Yes please.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 05:22 pm
Yes, you should do more!!! It is an awesome story, and I hope that I will be able to read more of it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the encouragement. :)
Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 04:30 pm
Nia Z that gif lmao!!! But i couldn't agree more. Yes you should write more. This is gewd.
Author's Response:
We should start a Nia Z avi fan club. Thank you!
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 07:30 am
Yes, you should definitely do more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 07:22 am
AWESOME! Hell yes you should do more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your enthusiasm!
Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 06:57 am
More PLease!!!
Author's Response:
Then for you and the Rock. He looks kind of thin doesn't he?
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 05:22 am
Great start to the story. Please continue. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 05:05 am
Yeah, I'm thinking I could do with MORE. :)
Author's Response:
Okay then...
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 05:04 am
One word: MORE!!!!
Author's Response:
Three words: coming right up!
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 03:54 am
A little fast, but a great start. I was able to catch most of it, LOL!! I can't wait to uncover more, please update son :-)
Author's Response:
You are right. I will try and improve that. Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 03:36 am
More, please.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: c.o. Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:54 am
Should you do more??? YES, I want to read where this goes and how it gets there.
Author's Response:
'one yes.' *scribbling*
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2011 02:40 am