Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

Interesting turn of events...I'm not sure I like Marta very much either. What tricks does she have up her sleeve?  Let them get back together on their own accord-find their own way back together without her manipulations.  Ugh.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

I knew Ellie would somehow come back. Nick is in a bad spot and I'm happy that she will be there to help him out.

The way she left was kinda abrupt so maybe once they talk and get their feelings out in the open they will be able to move on. Whether it's with each other or with other people.

Thanks for the update and I'll be waiting for the next one.

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

Hopefully seeing Ellie will help Nick. Can't believe he was doing drugs. That's horrible. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 06:26 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

Surprised that Nick is doing drugs. He's really taking Ellie's leaving badly. I agree with Ellie that she should've talked things through with Nick before leaving. I'm not sure going back on his home turf is a good idea. It would be best for Ellie for them to meet on neutral grounds AWAY from his family, especially his mother. Moms has now gotten it into her head that Nick needs Ellie and she'll do her best to deliver Ellie to him, Ellie be damned.

I hope that Ellie is strong enough to withstand the onslaught she's about to encounter when she goes back. Marta seems the type to do things BY ANY MEANS NECESSARY. Hopefully, Nick nor Elllie will fall for her machinations. I think whatever Marta comes up with will test who both Nick and Ellie are as people and as a couple.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 05:53 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

nick is a mess. I still think that ellie did the right thing by leaving nick and she shouldn't go back to him just because nick's family wants her too. I think that marta is going try to get ellie to stay and be with nick.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! What the hell? Marta has a lot of freaking nerve! First she treats Ellie like Sh*t, now she's calling in a favor. She so much as told Ellie to her face because of her race she was a thrid world citizen incapable of being worthy to carry her sons child and his name. What a B*tch! But I guess once that son started ruining his life, she started to reevaluate and realized the prejudice witch she was being was not necessary especially compared to her sons well being. I still do not like her at all. I wish Ellie was not going back. I mean I know Ellie still loves Nick and that is to be expected, but once she goes back I know she is not going to have the strength to keep her resolve. even if she wants to. Marta has now all of a sudden made her mind up that Ellie and Nick will get back together whether it should happen or not.

I know Nick loves Ellie but he is not ready to be with Ellie yet. Is this how he is going to handle all the problems him and Ellie may face - to start sleeping with other women, doing drugs, drinking just because things are not going according to plan? He's still to immature and his pride is beyond belief. Ellie will be the only one hurting the most in this. She is the innocent one and she does not deserve Nick's family trying to bridge her and Nick together when they still have issues to take care of before they even think about becoming a couple.

There is also what he does for a living. Ellie has some real decisions to make and I guess Marta thinks if she starts treating Ellie like a daughter, Ellie will forget everything and do as she says. Wow, that's a trip. I hope in all that is holy, that Ellie does not get back involved with this family too soon. As I said what happened to Nick was unfortunate, but he did all of this himself. This is not even close to being Ellie's fault. Who wants to be with someone who self destructs when sh*t gets hard, I am sure Ellie doesn't, loved be da*ned.

Ellie deserves better and until Nick can show some sign that he is man enough emotionally and mentally, Ellie should do her little visist that you are making her do and move on. It is going to be a war of wills in this next step in Ellie's life. Marta is certain that Ellie will crumble under her plan to get Nick and her back together, but I hope Ellie surprises them all and never faulters. As Ellie said, Marta and that family thinks it is all about them. Hello, Ellie has a job and responsibilities of her own, not that they care and that right there should cause some pause.

Anytime a person or people never think about what you may want or what is going on with you at a certain time and wants you to stop everything for them--most likely that is how your whole relationship will be with them. Ellie will always be left to pick up the pieces and that will turn her into an old woman fast. Her love for Nick will eventually fade to bitterness especially if he does not change and continues his irrational behavior when they face problems. Goodness I hope Ellie sets Marta straight, she doesn't have to be disrespectful at all in doing so, unlike what Marta did.

GREAT UPDATE......I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS MEETING!!!

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

I know that I want Ellie and Nick to get back together, I want Marta to apologize to Ellie for all of the pain that she caused her.  I also want Nick to explain his reaction to Ellie's telling him that she was pregnant.    I am glad that she realized that punked out when she left Nick that way and that he deserved an explaination.  She should have told him how bad the miscarriage had affected her and how is families business scared her. I hope that being around him again makes her change his mind.  Please don't let Nick die!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 01:33 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

well that was a suprise i cnt wait what u have in store for the next chapter dnt be to long.

Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 12:35 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 2

ooohhhhh i hope Nick is ashamed of what hes done but still trys with Elllie, i feel  like they need to talk it out an be friendsss firstt!

Reviewer: kedabooski Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 10:22 am

Title: Prologue

The suspense is killing me! I love this story. Well wriitten and just great. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: MissP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 06:33 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

no no no please update soon i dnt wanna wait.i hope nick finds her and they talk and i mean really talk about each other the miscariage and there family.she still love him but does he love her still?i would like to see them both at the same club 1st and see what happen just idea.please please update soon.

Reviewer: liz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Awwww

Reviewer: DRESSA Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 06:15 pm

Title: Prologue

I really like this story. Ellie took some bad advice from her friends by having casual sex with a stranger to rid herself of bad memories of a failed relationship. She needs to confront her issues, move beyond the past, and heal. She has only worked these six months but not really healed nor has she moved on emotionally from her ex. She walked out and ran away from the situation but did not heal. Thus, a momentary slip into a sexual mishap is not gonna solve her dilemma. She would not feel disgusted if she was truly over Nick.

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Nick is just gross!!!!!!!!!!!  And for him to go back to his ex is soo cliche.  I'm so disappointed. I really hope that Ellie will find someone else and never ever talk to Nick again. Sleeping around is disgusting. And it seems that Nick has no problem doing that. Ellie deserves someone better than that. But Ellie needs to move on already. She made her choice, she was the one who wanted out.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 03:07 pm

Title: Prologue

No don't call him girl I want ellie to have her shit together and moving on before she talks to Nick again

Reviewer: marie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 12:06 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Say it isn't so, she didn't leave Nick after he got released from jail?  I can't take it, I for them to be a happy couple!!  Oh , woe is me!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 07:44 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

They broke up, was it his families business or the miscarriage that broke them up.  If is obvious that they still love each other even Nico is sexing up other women.  I want Ellie to be happy and together with Nick!!! Waa!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Supreb

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Loved the update! Wow Nick seemed to have spiraled out of control and Elle is depressed ,poor thing! Hope they can make it work.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 06:19 am

Title: Prologue

well that was nice as we no f/m both handle things totaly different that's what these 2 R doin I think now they've B N apart 4 awhile they need 2 talk b/c both made mistakes N the relationship she did what he was afraid of but not 4 the reason he thinks he let her go not he needs 2 put things N perspective think of gettin her bk b/c both R miserable.

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Nick is a bastard, but I guess that is to be expected. Ellie really needs to get over Nick. I don't mean she go and whore herself out like Nick has no problem in doing, but really meet someone who she genuinely likes and vice versa. Someone who isn't an insensitive prick. I do want Ellie and Nick back together, but not now. Nick thought he was ready to get married, but he is not. He said he loved Ellie and I do not doubt that he had some sort of feelings for her, but for him to just react how he is right now, shows he is not mature enough for Ellie and he truthfully Ellie is way to good for him.

His d*ck has been everywhere. That's not cool at all. So yes, I hope Ellie finds happiness in her life without Nick. I like Nick, it's just that you find so many guys with his character and they have a way of not only attracting skanks, but good girls as well. So until Nick is ready to be a man, I hope Ellie stays out of his life and eventually thinks about him less and less which will lead to forgetting him all together. That will mean that she is truly living her life.

GREAT UPDATE!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 05:49 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

She loves him to much. I figured he would be the one to break and call her first.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

proud of her for walking away, but can she stay away? What worries me is if her life isn't already in danger, because she has  been associated with him.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 10 pt 1

Aw thats so sad. I know what Nick did was bad but I hope they can talk and work things out. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2011 04:26 am



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