just found this story! im sad you havnt updated, but hopefully you come back to it :) goood job!
Thank you Britt. I'll come back to it. Its been a while and i'm trying to finish Deal with it and still handle my college courses, but i'll try to update over the holidays. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2013 07:09 pm
I have a story...funny story..true story.. You see I am in love with this story titled BIG! and everyday I read the last update chapter to this story.... EVERYDAY!
Why do you ask because the author...not naming any names *cough* Readlover *cough* will not update ! And I'm sitting here like a crackhead going through withdrawal PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE update !
Make it loooong so I can be happy (mainly with Niqweh & Sean)
The End :)
I'm so sorry girl. Imma try jut for you can't make any promises but i have writers block for this..... But for you imma do something. :)Reviewer: Norma "desperate for an update" Bu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 05:10 pm
I absolutely love this story and I want to know how things will go on. Lovely chapter..I still can't believe that Sean cheated on his fiancée and that the devil is such a bitch. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Writers block. Haven't touched this in a while, but i'll work on it. Thanks!Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 02:00 pm
So Sean is a hot mess...he better check himself at the door. I hate when females are faithful and the guy is a loose goose.
I loved how your update included the picture of the couple in the section.
Thank you.Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 01:54 pm
I like this story so far, it flows very well.
OK now why do I get the feeling that Sean is going to do something STUPID and hurt Niqweh... and I already don't trust Adonia at all.
Thank you very much. Glad you like itReviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 14 2011 09:43 pm
Thank you for the update
Okay Sean has been sexing down Niqweh making her miss work and what not then gets to work and see this skinny heffa he use to fool around with and got his mind all on her...then had to convince himself that he has the best thing all ready really what's that all about.
Thank you for sharing.
Your most welcome.. Thanks for your review.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2011 06:37 am
"He stood about six’ thirteen" (there is no such thing) ... he would be 7'1''
Twana seems a little misguided. I can understand her issues because of her problems at home, but she really needs to separate herself from her "family."
I wonder what Marcus thinks about her.
Thanks much..Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 11:29 pm
Love the story so far...I gotta say you really have to watch your spelling and grammar. You misspelled Knita's name several times as well as other words.
I like that each character has their own story going on.
i fixed that.. but thanks for the kean eye it seems as if me or my beta did not catch any of the following but its a learning process.. Thanks again glad you liked itReviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 11:21 pm
Okay maybe my girl is not a bimbo she just have to deal with issues at home. She needs to get rid of father yes, it's true to be there for family but you don't enable them to continue to do bad they need to want to do for themselves.
Hmmm Marcus sounds interesting and it would seem our girl has a crush.
Thank you for the update. Can't wait to see what u have for us next.
Hahah.. yeah maybe she's not a bimbo Thundkat.. Thanks :)Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 11:20 pm
This story has a very nice modern vibe to it. I also just love the way you've written your characters, i loved reading this. Thank you for sharing..
Thanks for reading glad you enjoyedReviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 04:12 am
Great update. Some of us big girls can't take a compliment with a grain of salt and will degrade and put down ourself every time. It's just something we're not use to and think that when we do get that compliment and it is sincere we don't recognize it or we think that there is something behind it. That is my girl Nita she just can't help it. I hope she thinks about it long and hard but not to long and gets back to Marcio like she said she did not get in negative feeling from him and like she does with her job and listens to her gut she should do so with Marcio he genuiely likes you girl go for it and be happy.
It's said to hear about the baby Maryann and I feel sorry for Mrs. Phillips but she needs to understand that it was her daughter that put your all in the situation and child services had to step in for the welfare of Maryann and if she has custody of her the mother her daughter would still have access to her. Where were you at when your daughter was pregnant with her?
Sean is so nasty and so so hooked on his woman he was not lying when he said he was not letting her out of his site or his bed that day. LOL! You go boy love your woman.
Okay it would seem that we have love interest for the crew all except one our bimbo of the click Twana but got to love her she just needs the right man to put her in check :D.
Great update. I hope the next one comes soon.
Thank you Thank you Thank you Thundkat you just give me your hole over view i really aprreciate your feedback,.. Thanks again...Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2011 06:02 pm
Great story, love the couples and how everything is coming together, just finshed reading this in one sitting. Can't wait for more. and for everyone wanting to know who the pic of Setal is that in none other the greek model Theo Theodoridis.
Thanks so much.. glad you enjoyed.. and yes that fine greek man.. i had to use him,Reviewer: Sammy1on1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2011 05:57 pm