Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I can't believe that Joseph and Seleah got into it.....in the kitchen.....at someone's house.....while he was cooking breakfast.....for others that were right upstairs.

Those two are bonafide FREAKS!!!



Author's Response:

He just lost it when he saw her with no underwear.   A man can only take so much....LOL

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:18 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

i don't know who to feel worse for, seleah or Dem. it is obvious that bernard is a little coward just like his father. hopefully dem won't act out too much. he has too much potential to let it waste, just bc he's upset with the world.



Author's Response:

Dem will come around.  It was just too much for him to process all at once.  Thanks for the review.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

You need to change the author's chapter notes. It reads "Amaris tempts Joseph".



Author's Response:

Thanks!  You can tell I've been working on this a while.  LOL

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 02:01 am

Title: The Cast

Great update Brenda! I sense the story is coming to an end? I look forward to reading what's next. 

Reviewer: QueenConsort Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

Great again! Love it all, secrets are no good. Jesus truly is the answer for the world. It is so hard when you trust a Pastor/Minister and they betray you, but one thing I know and understand, they after to take responisbility for their actions. God still loves them, but is not pleased with their actions.

What a great God and Father we have, his mercies never fail and everyday we they are renewed! 

Thanks for the quick updates! Now, what about Sterotipically (sp?) Yours? LOL!! Keep inspiring and keeping it real!



Author's Response:

I'm working on SY as we speak.  That will come up before the next chapter of this story.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

I AM SO GLAD THE TRUTH IS OUT. I hope Dem can reflect on the events but I can understand how he feels.

I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Dem will recover.  He just needs some time alone to think about everything.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 19 I Want To Be Made Whole

snot running with tears from reading this chapter so heartbreaking!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Here's a tissue...

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Great update.  It seems that the date went very well.  I wonder what Anton's wife is going to say when she realizes that Damaris is her husbands child and not her sons.  What a mess.  I can only imagine how Damris is going to react when he find out that he was conceived when his mother was raped. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:59 pm

Title: The Cast

Girl you have me on the edge of my seat now with that last comment about a couple more surprises....this story just gets better and better.

I will try to stay out of stalker mode but girl with tidbits like that it's going to be hard will try to go play Sims3 until the next update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 07:23 pm

Title: The Cast

Thank you! I forgot you had already posted Leah's pic. Durn I kmow the truth must be revealed so the healing can begin but...but....the pain it's going to cause.  Paula thinking she failed her daughter after all she did to try and prevent just that thing happening, Jaylyn and Marri fining out that she sacrificed herself to save them. Dem finding out that that the man that he has known as his father is not but a pedophile that was suppose to be a man of God.  I just can't believe though that Leah was his first and only victim though and that Ms. Walker did not know his dirty deeds.  Mmm Mmm Mmm well enough of my rambling.

Again thank you



Author's Response:

I enjoy your rambing Thundakat!  Yes, it's all about to be blown wide open with a couple more surprises...

 

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 06:04 pm

Title: The Cast

Great Chapter!!! I smell trouble!!

Reviewer: Melanie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 06:02 pm

Title: The Cast

More please!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 06:01 pm

Title: The Cast

It's sad that the she couldn't trust a man of GOD... He took advantage of her in the church, a place that as a child you think of as save..

Why does Seleah think she is the cause of the Rev death???



Author's Response:

In the midst of her abuse, Seleah prayed to God to punish the Reverend.  At first, she thought that he loved her, but when he told Seleah it was her or her sister Amaris, she knew that something was wrong with him and that he was bad news.  She wanted to keep Amaris safe, but didn't want to tell her Mom about what she and the Rev. had done.  So she prayed for his punishment and when he had his heart attack she thought it was because of her prayer.  When the church started complaining that the good Rev. death was the work of the devil, that confused her more and she thought that the devil had killed him because of her prayer.

 

 

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 05:53 pm

Title: The Cast

I love the fact that you had both Joe and Seleah seek out God to help them find the answers to help them heal.  I especially love the dreams scenes were they spoke to GOD it was very emotionally. Joe asked for Leah to be dropped in her lap and GOD made sure to drop his wife in his lap..

Loving this story..



Author's Response:

I try not to be heavy handed with the preaching and I try to keep things real, but God always has the answer, but we want to tell God the answer a lot of the time.

 

Healing will come.

 

Thanks, more conversations with God and with each other are on the way....

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 05:01 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Fantastic.!!

I don't think that Demaris will be able to handle the truth, if Seleah tells him everything.



Author's Response:

Demaris will most definately be hurt by her deception.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Seleah almost revealed all to Amaris. You would think that Amaris would have talked to her mom by now and to try to piece it all together. Regardless, Demaris is going to confront her the next day.



Author's Response:

Amaris did talk to Paula, but there is no way that they could even imagine that Rev. Walker is the culprit.  Paula has been talking to Seleah since they've been at Julian's house trying to get her to seek some professional help.   Paula thinks it was most likely some teenage boy in the neighborhood.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 12:03 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Did Seleah refuse to seek government assistance and decided to whore herself for rent money? I'm a little confused. Please explain.



Author's Response:

Seleah does get some government assistance and her rent is income based, however her part time job and the $150 child support is also considered when accepting Gov. assistance. In VA there is a limit on how long you can receive assistance (not more than 24 months in a row and 60 months in a lifetime).  Your income cannot be above the federal poverty level in order to receive any government assistance.  The Federal Poverty Level in 2009 was 22K for four people in a household.  That is not that much money. Seleah is not proud of what she had to do, but she felt that when she ran out of money, that's all she had of any value.  

Thanks for the review.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:53 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Wow! So the preacher had a kid Seleah's age. I wonder if he knew what his dad did to Seleah? Mrs. Walker surely didn't know. She's in for a big surprise!

 



Author's Response:

Bernard Walker's point of view is coming up, because he knows he nver slept with Seleah! 

 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:48 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Amaris is so sweet. The dress looks lovely. I can imagine how Seleah looked in it.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:43 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Good insight on Seleah's current life. I don't think that anyone would have guessed that she had it that bad. I was shocked by her wardrobe. 

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:39 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Great replacement on Joseph pics.  Adrian Grenier is so fine!



Author's Response:

I know.  When I saw him I couldn't resist!  Yum!

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 11:34 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Well you know how they say you should never judge a book by it's cover well I am sad to have to say that I failed that saying.  Ms. B you have definitely redeemed Seleah in my eyes.  I feel so sorry for her and hope she gets the help she deserves.

Oh my goodness!  It seems the truth about Dem's parentage is getting closer and closer.  I want the truth to come out but I don't want the pain that comes with that truth.

Joesph is such a cutie what does Seleah look like?

Thank you for a great update.

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Hey Thundakat:  See additional cast photos for a pix of Seleah.  I've been searching the internet for more, but I haven't found one that fits the Seleah in my mind.

Yeah, the truth is going to come out, and it's not going to be pretty.

 

More to come soon!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 07:33 am

Title: The Cast

so glad that Joe has finally excepted that Seleah is his god ordained wife & glad she has b n lettin her gaurd down w/him beautiful how their 1st date went / 4 her 2 b @ ease w/him that she told him she's never become wet R had a big O is a huge thing plus let him n on her friends w/benifits which he squashed after they put their wants from each other on the table then told her he wanted 2 b her man & take care of her & her boys w/ut any paybk cept 2 get 2 no her have a wonderful start now let's C how it blossom after they face their 1st hurdle after D confronts his mom hopefully she breaks allthe wy down & reveal the truth & terrible secret she's b n burdened w/ all this time as always U ROCK WAITIN 4 U 2 BRINGIN ON AGAIN

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Wow I thought thier date went very well and that she open up to him about her life little and that he want to be her man. I also glad that ameris seen her sister in a different light and understand deep down inside her sister is a really good mother and love her sons with all her heart.. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 04:15 am

Title: Chapter 18 Let Me Lead You To The Light

Never would have thought that you could make me like Seleah, but you have. I'm stunned. I'm actually becoming invested in her and Joseph. I really like the new pic of Joe.

Will Seleah be truthful with Dem? I hope so, because this is not going away. I like how you weave the next story into the current one. It makes for a seamless transition to get to know the characters for the next story. A really good technique that benefits the readers. I thank you kindly, chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Some people get irritated with me because my mind can be all over the place.  I never forget the original characters, but I do tend to wander...LOL.

Thanks for the review.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2011 03:57 am



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