Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I fear that Seleah will be a drain on Demaris once he becomes successful. She's a user and will use any and everyone that will let her.

Jun has seen who Tam really is. Glad he's come around. I hope Daniel gets his mojo back... at least his oral skills are still pretty impressive.  *snerk*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2011 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I hope you have a nice comeuppance planned for Miss Seleah...her sense of entitlement makes me want to strangle her...how could such a good kid like Demaris come from someone so essentially flawed and rotten to the core...her self-centeredness knows no bounds...how you gonna roll up on someone without any notice...and expect them to take care of all your material needs...I felt so bad for Demaris...having someone like that as a mother...thank goodness for his Aunt Marri and Auntie Tam's influence in his life...no telling how he would have turned out without it...got me wondering...and I hope I'm not being to presumptuous...but Jules' brother Joseph is coming to town...and Seleah is in town...she's the ultimate mooch...and Joseph is full of pride...but at least he's trying to better his circumstance...could we have a clash in the making...though I'd say even Joseph with all his problems is too good for someone like Seleah...maybe he'll be the catalyst to set her sorry behind straight...anyway, she's trifling...hope she grows the heck up soon for her kids' sake...

Uh-oh, what's going on with Daniel...I hope it's just the medication he's been taking that causing the impotency problem...he's too young and virile to be having ED issues...but he should know by now that Tam's not going anywhere...but please seek professional help before the problem causes any more distance between them...glad Jun's coming around and learning even sinners have soul...Tamera loves his son like no other...and he'd be a fool to let her go...there through the good and the bad...in sickness and health...that's true love for you...

Looking forward to more...thanks for taking my mind off the mountainous amounts of work I can never seem to catch up on...

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the wonderful review.  LOL on Seleah!  There's more to her than meets the eye and more is going to revealed soon.  I know about mountains of work,LOL.  However I'm going to try to slip in a chapter or two.  I'm going to try to get one done today if my muse is cooperative!  Thanks again!

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2011 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9 Doing What Comes Naturally

Damn, I hate playing catch up but work's been kicking my arse...but hey...it pays the bills...

Brenda...you have another winner here...and good, goobly, goo...two love stories in one...what have I done to deserve so much goodness...

Anywho...loved these hilarious characters...Julian has created a monster and released the inner freak in Marri...she might just wear the poor man out...but, hey, Jules not complaining one bit...lol...glad he's beginning to make amends and peace with his family...Amaris coming into his life has has a big effect on him...no longer the cold-hearted bastard...and he's in love for the first time in his life...love these two...Marri's taking Jules to meet the family...that should be "fun"...can't wait...

Now, Tam and Daniel...yeah, Daniel was so wrong to jump to the wrong conclusions about her...but jealousy and possessiveness will do that to you when you find "the one"...and Tam's the one for him...glad she made his butt seek counselling because after awhile...possessiveness is not so "cute" and can be downright frightening if not checked...both of them have abandonment issues...but Tam...what was she thinking playing with fire like that...bring her cousin to her man's establishment like that...knowing he's a fool in love already...glad he turned the tables on her...she loves her "China Man"...that's for sure...but the games need to stop...forgive that man...put both of yourselves out of misery...and make the heck up...you know you want to...besides...there's a baby on the way...

Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately...but as I said...no time...but I "stealing" today to play catch up...now I'm addicted...girl, your stories are the bomb...loving this...now off to read more...



Author's Response:

LOL love your review!  Keep them coming when you can.  I know about work keeping you busy.  I've been working 12 hour days and updateing has been a challenge.  Plus my son's getting married in two weeks.  Hey, but I love the Chamber and I do the best I can.  Hopefully I can update today and fix the size of my cast pix.  More to come soon!  (hopefully)

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2011 02:09 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Great update!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 11:24 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Thank you so much for my fix it was and is greatly appreciated.

I am glad to see that Danny is improving ..Tam has done a wonderful job at taking care of her man no doubt and Jun has come around.

I think though he needs to start back going to his therapist though he has something new that he has to contend with.  I am sure he is also suffering mental side effects from the attempted robbery and shooting.  The feeling of inadaquicy may be apparent with him feeling like he could not protect his wonan and unborn child and got shot plus now with the impotency to deal with on top of everythung else.  I hope it is only the medication that is causihg the problem and things will go back to normal after he has discontinued the medication.

Uggggh! Here we go with that trifling ass Seleah....I will be glad when Dem get's away from her ass good she did not rub off on him and he has to be embarrassed with how she acts and how she just going to show up unannounced and unprepare for that baby's first time on campus just selfish she could have gotten what he needed all she was concerned about was having a good time. Selfish just plain and simple and always expecting a handout,

Thank you again for my fix and sharing

More please happy writing

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 10:15 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 09:38 am

Title: The Cast

Brenda 1257 you are the best. You should really try doing this professionally, because you are truly gifted with telling a story. I wish you all the best! I love how you never fail to bring it all together one chapter at a time. Love the diversity in each of your stories, I truly feel as if I know them personally. Now that's how you know the story is well written when you can't get them out of your head, and you wonder how they are doing (lol). Once again wishing you the very best.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely update.  I've always loved to write.  I'd write in notebook after notebook and I even thought about trying it out professionally, but never followed through.  Now I write as a stress reliever and for fun.  The internet has opened up man opportunities. 

There are a lot of good writers on The Chamber.  I love reading as well as writing.  Thanks for all the support and encouragement.  It helps me to move on to the next chapter.

Hopefully I'll be able to give you another update before the weekend is over.

Reviewer: Nakia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 07:00 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I thought he would be perfect for Ms Mooch!!!!!!  Looking forward to your writing out her lessons.

 

Great read

Reviewer: Luv2Read Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Glad Daniel's recovery is going well. Wow, Seleah is way too much!! She needs a reality check!! Poor Demaris having to deal with her his whole life.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

OMG Seleah is so GHETTO, she seems to think everyone is suppose to give somthing to her, and we all know that she spent that money for Demaris on herself when its was suppose to9 be for him and school.. I just wanna SLAP some SENSE into her.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Seleah is sooo trifling it's sickening. She has no conscience whatsoever. I want her to be told off so badly. But I don't want Demaris to suffer for it. And I know that's why Tam and Amaris puts up with her. So I'll wait and see what else you have in store for us next.

Love the chapter!

Reviewer: Marion Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I can't believe that Joseph thought it was a good idea to move in with his newly married brother. What were comments made at the wedding about Amaris?



Author's Response:

LOl.  Julian didn't tell her everything that was said, but several friends wanted to know what it was like being with a black girl. LOL

Reviewer: Flavia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I hope that Daniel's problem does not end their relationship. Daniel may have too much pride to stay in their relationship if this problem is permanent.

Reviewer: Sloane Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

So Julian is helping Joseph return to school and will support him until he completes. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. I know he 's been through a lot but it almost feels to good to be true.

Is this the calm before the storm?



Author's Response:

Oh a storm is coming alright, but you'll just have to wait.  LOL.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Andreas Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Why was Tam getting teasty with Amaris on the phone? Was it pregnancy hormones?



Author's Response:

Yes it was the hormones.  Those two are so close that they can vent to each other without fear of rebuttal.  LOL.  Maybe Daniel calmed them down for her a bit.  LOl

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

I love how Tam is taking care of Daniel. There is nothing that he needs that she won't do for him. It shows the depth of her love.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 01:54 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Jun really sees Tam in a new light. Good to know he supports his son's decision.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Wow Ameris sister is a trip. why does she act the way she do? She treat her son like crap and trying to use her sister all the dam time crazy. Also glad tam talked to daniel and they are back on track and moving foward. thank for the update.



Author's Response:

seleah has some issues, thats for sure.  She is just so self centered that she doesn't even realize that she's mistreating Dem.  Change is gonna come!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2011 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Great update! The story is progressing wonderfully. I am so excited about the turn of events. Please give Daniel back his man hood. We don't want Tam doing something she will regret because of her high sex drive. Are you about to hook up siblings? Seleah needs a strong man!



Author's Response:

Daniel's pain meds are the culprits!  His setback is only temporary.  As for Ms. Seleah, I have someone that will help her change her evil ways.  LOL.  thanks for the review.  More to come soon!

 

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Seleah should be run over by a mack truck, Demaris would be better off without her. Seleah other crumb snatchers would be better off without her as well.  Tamera is really stepped up and I am impressed.  She is actually behaving like a woman in love should.  I love Daniel, I am glad to see him fighting his way back to Tam.  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 11:00 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Seleah truly disgust me just pure trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh she's gonna get hers....

More to come soon.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Enjoyed reading this chapter. Glad Tam and Daniel reached a understanding to get their sex life back on track. So happy for Julian that the wedding turned out so well. Also glad he reached out and is helping his brother Joseph. Seleah is too much with her greedy self.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 10:19 pm

Title: The Cast

Omg i loved this chapter. Btw are you going to pair seleah with joseph? Cause it definitely seems like it, lol can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

LOL!!! You totally peeped my cards!  I'm not saying anything else, except that they are gonna butt heads for sure!!

Reviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

OMG i can stand seleah. can she hurry up and catch that bus back to whatever rat trap she crawled out from?



Author's Response:

That shrew needs taming and I got just the man for the job.  LOL  MOre to come soon!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 13 My Actions Speak Louder Than My Reputation II

Seleah is something else for real. Its nice to know Dem is completely different from his mom. SMH Well its also glad to know its the pain meds messing with Daniel's libido. I love this story! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 08:01 pm



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