That was a a beautiful update especially between Amaris and her mom. Soooo glad Daniel has opened his eyes. Hope Tam pulls it together for him. Just hope that all is well mentally too.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: September 15 2011 04:29 am
Yea for Tamera not given up on her man. And for Daniel struggling to come back to her and their baby.
Reviewer: Serena Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 01:56 pm
I'm glad that Paula revealed to Amaris why she was promiscuous. And Amaris sees that similarities between Paula and Tamera. I think the heart to heart will bring more understanding.
Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 01:54 pm
Too bad it took soething tragic to open Jun's eyes. But I'll glad he accepted the baby.
Reviewer: Novak Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 14 2011 01:42 pm
great update...like the part about Daniel fighting against is coma, nice touch
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 07:54 am
Love and determination is a powerful thing. I was on pins and needles when Tam said she was not going to allow him to do this to her. You go girl go and wake your man up and tell him to get his ass back to her and you baby that you both needed him.
I am so happy that Jun has come around he was truly able to see that Tam really love his son.
That was so sweet of Paula to make a memory box for her girls. She may not have had much and have some ghetto tendencies but she did the best she could with what she had to work with and at lest two of her girls came out alright the verdict is still out on that other one.
Don't tell me that Jules is getting tired and can't hang with my girl Mar we are going to have to get him some vitamins....LOL!!! She draining him.
This was definitely a relief update I know if it was for me it definitely was for Tam or will be when she finds out her big baby has come out of his coma and it was all because he her her cry for him to keep his promise, So far it does not sound like he has any brain damage either. They say the mind is a complex organ they have surely never lied.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
More chica more!
Happy writing
Author's Response:
Thanks Thundakat: I saw a medical drama on TV where this actually happened. A man was shot and in a coma and his pregnant wife was so distraught and talked to him and he came out. The stress of it caused her to go into labor and he was lying in bed when they wheeled her into his room to see his new daughter. Talk about touching!
Yes, Paula has some issues, but she does love her girls. Seleah has a lot to learn and I have an idea cooking in the back of my mind as to who is going to teach it to her. LOL
Thanks, more to come soon.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 07:24 am
Oh why'd you leave me hanging right there? this chapter was so powerful for me. I was in the same position, S.O. in a coma, but my ending wasn't as nice as theirs. Girl, keep up with this story. Update soon please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 05:49 am
Thank God, you had me worried there for miniute. I am so glad that Jun finally came around, sometimes it takes almost losing someone to make you act right. I so love this story, and I even love many of the characters. Except for Selah she makes my teeth itch. It seems that at one time that Paula had some sense and that she wasn't always a ho unlike Selah.
Author's Response:
Paula has her abandonment issues just like Tam. Seleah, welll she's just too into herself. She needs to meet her match and I have just the man for the job. LOL I just have to figure out how I'm going to work that part in the story. More to come soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 02:39 am
Amaris' mum is a crack up! Julian prob found his real family in her lol... as for Dan/Tam/Jun I look forward to their reunion!
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 01:41 am
Wow I think that real sweet that her mother saved pictuers and those beads that ameris father gave to her mother. I'm glad that daniel is alive and that his father relize that is daniel child and hope father and son can move foward in life. thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2011 01:00 am
truly loved this emotional update whoo was in tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2011 11:47 pm
Yea! You did good! LOL! Great update!
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2011 11:39 pm
Mine is the possessive form of my. Example: This is my car. Who's car is in the drive way? Mine. When you add an "s" to mine, it does not make it any more possessive. The word becomes plural. Example: One gold mine, two gold mines, three gold mines etc.
I don't want to offend you. I think that this is such a great story with an unique twist and look forward to reading more of your work.....without the mines. Please don't hate me!
Author's Response:
I don't hate you. My mind is always open to learning. English grammar is not my strongest thing and I don't mind being corrected. I am not offended at all. I had a beta at one time, but I think I made her mad when I came over here to the Chamber and she abandoned me, so feel free to let me know any grammatical errors that are glaring. Thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 11:53 pm
Oh please let Daniel LIVE, he and Tamera were meant to be. so he has to pull through... and I can't stand Mr Wong, something must have happened between he and Daniel's mother to make his HEART so HARD.
As for Amarais family, they are just so GHETTO, but I kinda like Paula and Jaylyn, but that Seleah is a piece of work, but Julian was right, Seleah is jealous of Amaris b/c she has made something of her life, and is not just sitting around collecting welfare and child support, she may even be a bit jealous of her own son as well... she needs a WAKE UP CALL.
Reviewer: ladt liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 09:02 pm
Please stop the "mines"! It distracts from your wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Not quite sure what you mean by this. Please elaborate. Thanks!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 06:21 am
Poor Tamera, and what about my Daniel. I hope he and she will be okay. Nice cliff hanger
Reviewer: johnandvan Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 06:16 am
Yeah, Daniel is good at blackmail. I love his form of blackmail. I hope he survives the attack.
I can understand his father being wary of Tam. He's only seen a certain side of her and has formed his opinion accordingly. I hope during the time of Daniel's recuperation *hopefully* that he'll get to know the other side of her and realize how much she loves his son.
You are rocking this story.
Author's Response:
Jun will come around. And you are right about him forming his opinion based on her past. Jun is old school and a woman who sees a lot of men...well you know what he thinks about that! Thanks for the review. More is on the way soon!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 06:10 am
Loved the update. Amaris' family is too much. They had me cracking up!! Poor Tam!! Hope Daniel survives and things work out for them!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:36 am
omg please tell me that daniel is going to be alright. I hope so him and tamrera make a cute couple and they truly love each other with all their hearts. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 04:00 am
Really good start, totally understand both leads from the descripition of their lives in this part of the story. Look forward to seeing them meet.
Reviewer: jv Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 03:48 am
Oh no!!! Poor Daniel and Tamera!!! I hope everything will be all right.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 03:42 am
nice cast
Reviewer: johnandvan Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 03:42 am
WOW! Its all i can say
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 12:23 am
OH NO YOU DIDN'T - a cliffhanger? don't you know that I'm cryin over here.. more please more... I'm happy those two finally got their marbles goin in the same direction - love Amaris' family - too funny! that Julian's just the bestest lol
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2011 12:10 am
Amaris' family is a hot mess. I felt bad for her but family is family. Oh poor Tam, I hope Daniel survives. This chapter and the previous one are excellent!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2011 11:12 pm