Girl I love this story and you write the heck out of it!!
I remember how much I hated Oren here ..humiliating and trying to break Aria..but I also remember hwo strong and full of pride she was also..not letting him treat her any type of way w/confrontation no matter the cost to herself!
He should feel guilty and I hope it eats him up and makes him treat her better!!
Aria as Daahenka is bad as heck but I just think sista is bad period!
Great job sweetie..I lovee this story and you are writing the heck out of it!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: October 13 2011 04:24 am
YES!!! i believe this is where you left off so i can not wait for the update =)
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 02:32 am
It just gets better and better! Next chapter please!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 02:03 am
Oh no! Why'd you end it there!!! I loved it. I cannot wait for Aria and Oren to really 'connect'. He is too much of a level 5 a-hole/douche bag. The icing on the cake was Aria splashing Esa. :)
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 12:16 am
It is getting good now. He was wrong to bring her to his mistress house. I am glad she put that women on her place. Yes she fought for her man
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2011 10:46 pm
wow!!! i don't know how you do it. you created your own world and through your writing you brought us into it. i hate to tell you this because i love reading this for free but you should really pursue getting your stories published. This story is just so amazing and i definitely can't wait to read more, published or nonpublished. Keep doing what you're doing because it is a joy to read and be a part of.
Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2011 10:36 pm
I didn't want her to give in to the prick!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2011 10:10 pm
Good reading.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2011 05:15 am
I'm not normally a sci-fi fan but this is so promising. The romantic in me wants Aria with Aleric, her protector, but the tart in me wants her with the more primal Oren. What happens next? Please update!
Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 08:26 pm
Cant' wait to see where you take this story. Please udate soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2011 02:27 am
oren such a barbarian... i remember how much i hated his slap the first time around and i still do... he is so extreme i dont know why i still see him as redeemable it actually kinda annoys me that i do...lol i cant wait for mor as per usual your soooo gooooodiee
Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2011 10:00 am
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 07 2011 07:19 pm
I forgot how much Oren made me want to kick his butt at first and how much I loved Alaric!!
I love Aria!! She is beautiful, strong and proud!! She will show Oren what a gift she really is before it is over and he will love her or let her go!!
I love this story sweetie..more more more!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2011 03:38 am
I was waiting on pins and needles for you to update this story, and I'm so glad you did.
You are a very unique writer, one that paint such a vivid picture and enables a reader, such as myself to experience the feelings/mood of each character in such a way that allows me to get a glimse into their world, and that my friend, is brillant writning. Keep it up!
Reviewer: Lana Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 11:07 pm
Wow, Oren was over board in his actions.Poor Aria, hope she survives his attitude.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 07:41 am
Gah, he's an asshole!
Reviewer: Vi Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 07:40 am
Why is he being such an ass?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 07:09 am
OMG! Oren is such a douche bag. PLEASE POST MORE
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 05:55 am
wow I'm sooooo N. this just gets better but really, angry when he did wrong now she has 2 pay now I'm wondering if Aleric will resent so glad that will update soon
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 06 2011 05:30 am
great chapter
Reviewer: Anya_Iris Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 04:39 am
Really loved this story first time round, glad to see it back. Update soon please!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2011 11:37 am
I enjoy reading all things Sci-Fi, and I truely enjoy this one. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 13 2011 01:08 am
moooooooooooooooooooooooooore please.
Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2011 04:28 am
Yay! I can't wait to see hat happenes next and I just love Alaric!
Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2011 08:13 am
OOOoh wee its about to go down between Alaric and Oren.
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2011 07:29 am