Title: Chapter 3

Oren is  HYPOCRITICAL bully~ Hw treats Aria the worse way based on rumors and is surprised she runs away...jerk,

This story is ecthed in my mind I loved it so much ...pls send us more..I love@@

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2011 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 3

Can't get enough of this story. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2011 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm really happy to see this story being updated again.  I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 07:10 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oren was too rough with her based on false ideas. Hope he apologises and make things right with her. He needs to realise she ran away to escape his brutality.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the next chapter. I cannot wait for Aria to show Oren who's boss.

Reviewer: blkamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 11:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update. Wow, Oren is a harsh fellow.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2011 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 2

I loved this story when you first posted it and have loned for more..I am so happy you are bringing it back!!!Excellent story sweetie...

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2011 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 2

To end things there. Please hurry and finish.

Reviewer: You are so wrong... Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2011 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

just as powerful as reading fantasy/sci-fi in hardcover - an exciting read and looking fwd to more...

Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting beginning, can't wait for more.

I have so many questions, like, why did they want Aria to become the mate of such a high ranking male? I would think because she's a half-breed they'd fear polluting the bloodline yah know.

And why does Oren hate her so much, is it because she's a half-breed or because he wasnt allowed to marry his paramore instead, or is it because he just didnt want to get married period?

Ugh I hate not knowing...ah well hoping for an update soon.

Reviewer: XxSKYxLARKxX Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 11:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yay.  I'm glad you decided to revive this story.

Reviewer: Luciana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad you brought this back.  I loved it when you had it here before and I'm sure it'll be even better this time around.

Reviewer: rogueangel84 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 10:27 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I LOVE this story so far!!!!!! Please update again soon!!!!

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2011 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back chica!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24 2011 12:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Can't Wait for this.

Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i remember this story and i am happy that you decided to bring it back i will enjoy reading it again =)

Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OMG!! I heart you for bringing back this story. I missed it tremendously, and if memory serves me right, you did not complete it, so I'll be checking in for updates.

Reviewer: Lana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 12:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 12:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 04:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

ZING!!!!!!!! so glad that this is back! *doing the happy dance*

Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 1

I need more.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 1

So glad you're bringing this story back to us. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: shasha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

I think I have read this to. I cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

I could have sworn I've read this already... I thought you had posted it on Literotica, or even here, but I'm not sure... Either way, it looks very interesting, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Akira Jade Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 02:55 am



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