Captivating! This is by far your best story yet! And I'm especially drawn to the characters. Don't get me wrong....I love Ellie and Nicky too! However, your ability to effectively articulate every detail about the lead characters and their surroundings is impressive. "Suspension of disbelief" is not an issue with this story. Your superior writing abilities make it all too easy. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Lovely1974 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 17 2011 05:31 am
So is it safe to say that because of Oren's illtreatment of Aria, she allowed her dominant side to take over? Can't wait to read more. I'm truely obsessed with this story. Great job, btw.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 03:37 am
So is the pig blaming her for something her father did? I really dont like him right now!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 01:50 am
He is a big bully!! Oren is a spoiled use to taking whatever he wants beast and Aria having a mind of her own is not giving into it!!
It is silly for him to think that he could treat her her anyway and she would be ok with it but he is learning that not all women fall at his feet ..he will need to learn to treat her right before he can expect anything in return!!
Great job sweetie..I love this story ...
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 01:10 am
That was AMAZING!! This is my favorite story on this site! I get so excited every time I see a new chpter. You are a wounderful writer and I couldn't ask for anything more! Your the BEST! Keep doin' what your doin'!! :) :) :)
Reviewer: Karrotpulp Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 12:37 am
Excellent writing here, very robust in its tone...the period and characters come alive and envelopes the reader into the scene, particularly the moment where the 'creature' shows her strength by tossing 'the whore', and then bewitches her master to HER will (o.m.g. FABULOUS). Oren had no clue what hit him!
Well done Quills
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 11:49 pm
wow.....what a fucking brute.
Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:57 pm
Wow. That's all I can say. I vacillate between hating Oren and feeling sorry for him. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:57 pm
Poor Aria:) Oren is such a brute.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:50 pm
he's quite the bastard
Reviewer: Anya_Iris Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 10:18 pm
Plz update soon :)
Reviewer: XxSKYxLARKxX Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 07:37 pm
Please come back soon, I'm eagerly waiting for more and to see if hate would turn into passion.
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 15 2011 09:09 pm
Just want to say that I love this story wholeheartedly
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 11:27 pm
I love this story. And I love Oren & Ari, they are such opposites that it is freakin crazy. But when they finally come together, Whew....i bet they;mm melt the paint off the walls :). Next chapter please!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 04:29 pm
I'm digging this story. Please udpate soon
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 04:57 am
Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!
I hate Oren I think if I was with a guy like that I might get arrested for HOMICIDE.
Hope Aria make him living HELL and make him go CRAZY though. ^_^
Don't leave this story,please,lol.
I think I should put more depht in my reviews but I can't.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 04:33 am
I hate Oren
Feel bad for Alaric and Aria situation.
This story is awesome
Did I say I hate Oren?
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 02:51 am
Oh! Oh! Oren is MAD!!!!
I love the characters so far.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: October 14 2011 01:21 am
Poor thing :-(
What an (BEEP) her vader is.
Love it so far.
I'm on the next one.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 10:06 pm
I so don't want her to submit to him. He's so disgusting. BUT, I do love this story!
Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 08:56 pm
Gosh, I hate Oren. He's so overbearing.
Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 08:43 pm
It's gettting so good. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 08:01 pm
It's so true that girls love the bad boys and I knew from the jump that I'd love Oren, the king of bad boys. You write so well and I appreciate all the detail and hard work you put into your stories. Loving Dashenka: Half Breed, please keep it up!
Reviewer: MissDivaEva Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 07:24 pm
Aria don't play when she gets pissed. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 04:58 am
Interesting. wonder what'll happen now??
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2011 04:31 am