If your lover claim he needs DNA test to prove that the baby is his, then he is not worthy to be the father. Poor Kayla, I wonder if she can survive the first trimester of pregnancy with so much heartbreak and turmoil! And serve Taylor right to suffer in agony if she were to lose their baby. Kayla needs to have a backbone and distance herself from Taylor while he sorts out his trust issue.
Love without trust will not strengthen nor deepen a relationship. This is by far the most intense chapter and hope to see more of such emotional chapters coming up in future.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 27 2012 10:39 am
OK what the hell just happened? I can't believe Mike! Steve need a beat down for staring stuff that was none of his business. And Tyler...... telling a woman that your mother was right about her is never a good thing!
Reviewer: aiwen01 Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2012 05:43 am
What the hell just happened? Mike is CRAZY!!! Tyler has went way too far. I bet Tyler's crazy as mother is behind this!!! Oh!!! Great update!!!
Reviewer: othello Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2012 01:25 am
What an update? Tyler should know better. Wow! I wouldn't of thought of this turn of events.
Great update
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2012 10:01 pm
Way to go Tyler...believe Mike's nonsense over the person you claim to love and say all those hurtful things. Even if she was lying, he could've calmed down and waited for an explanation. Tyler really screwed up big time. Steve is going to be up the creek like Tyler for opening his big mouth.
Mike with his punk a$$ should've just let it go. I hope his conscience eat away at him for what he did.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 09:38 pm
Wow. Mike is something else. He did all this because he wants to hurt Kayla. Steve needs to be smacked upside his head.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2012 09:08 pm
Kayla is so stupid, why would she let Mike in dressed the way she was? ,Why didn't she ask Mike why he said that her baby was his when they hadn't slept together? All that damn crying and not answering Tyler's question. Kayla does not want to be happy. Please castratr Steve he should have minded his own business! Mike is too fine to be psycho, but he is, sweetie Kayla don't want you boo!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2012 07:58 pm
Um great that ur updating regularly. I didnt like this chapter towards the end. It's like kayla turned the tables on Tyler. he shouldn't b runnin behind her begging for forgiveness. She was in the wrong and the she wouldn't speak up with the truth. I think she shud b the one begging Tyler for forgiveness. Um yeah wasn't feeling tha last part of the chapter at all. She needs to see her wrong own it and go get her man. Liked how mike caused some drama. R u gonna make indira or watever her name boyfriend pay for opening his big mouth?
Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2012 06:58 pm
Well that didn't go like Tyler expected. What the hell is wrong with Mike's stupid self?? UGH way to ruin a perfect moment. Sounded like kayla was going to mis carry for a second there. :(
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 26 2012 06:17 pm
Justice has now been served. Now everyone can go back to their normal lives. A long awaited chapter thatwas well worth the wait.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2012 10:42 pm
another chapter asap
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2012 03:21 am
Yeah, Tyler won the case! Great! You did the legal profession a solid 10....I think you can write another story with this type of backstory. You are great! Keep it up! I am giving you a 10 for the fact you made that Skank tell on herself!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2012 12:40 am
Catherine, I love it she told it all. Admitted to being the mastermind and it was great. I am so happy that that evil, vile ho is going to get what is coming to her. I am going to have to reread this story, she folded like a weak hand of poker!! Fabulous!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 10:15 pm
love it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 07:59 pm
Everthing is finally coming together. It seems that justice is going to be served after all. Catherine's outburst just sealed her fate. Another brilliant chapter that was well worth the wait.
Reviewer: reader101 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 15 2012 02:19 am
You did very well with court procedings, I thought that you had done some research!! I can't wait to read how Catherine imploded on the the witness stand. That scene will be funny as hell!!! Great update!!! More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 08:55 pm
Great update. I am glad this court case should be over soon. Catherine was not thinking when she thought she could get away with this crime.
I hope nothing else happens negatively.
love this story.
Whats' in the email?
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 01:37 pm
These two spent more of their courtship time over the phone than actually face to face. They need sometime away from home and work to deepen their relationship before facing the music from Tyler's mum.
BTW. could you switch your cover picture back to the original first where Tyler is gazing lovingly at Kayla up close and personal? It makes a lasting impression on me as it beautifully captures their sweet and tender moment as one loving couple.
Reviewer: Ria Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 10:23 am
I'm hoping you will soon reveal what is the extremely large secret that Tyler is learning how to control (saw from your summary) and will it have a negative impact on his relationship with Kayla.
Love this chapter as for once this pair of lovebirds did not fight with each other over the phone. And as usual thanks for making an effort in providing us with your regular updates.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 06:27 am
I have watched enough Attorney television shows to know you did the whole profession justice with your court room knowledge. I will give you 2 thumbs up for that. Your sexual banter between the love birds is cute and not tooo raunchy. Thank you for that! I want to say Please Stick it to that Heffa, who had her husband killed...she doesn't even deserve $125K she deserves a jail cell and no phone privledges. I love this story and will follow it to the end. Keep it up!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 06:24 am
good to see everything is going some what good for these two, they need to be drama free for a few chapters lol
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 06:17 am
The ending was so sweet!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 05:42 am
great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 05:16 am
I am glad that she is embracing the fact that she is pregnant and has a strong stomach. she already has formed a connection with her unborn child.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2012 04:14 am
If I didn't know Kayla was pregnant, I would after what she ate for breakfast only 2 kinds of people in the world would be able to keep that down.....A person with a cast-iron stomach and a pregnant woman! Yuck! And the way she was all up in Tyler's ass, whew! I knew being PG made you hormonal, but Hell! it's making her KKKKKRRRRRAAAAAZZZZZAAAAAYYYY! Good update thanks, looking forward to the next one!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 10 2012 02:19 am