I'm really not liking Lilla at the moment. It may not be her intention, but she is leading Chase on. And for Chase to have a key to her apartment and all that is VERY inappropriate.I think that she knows damn well that Chase likes her. But she still wants to be around him and that is not good at all. Its very inappropriate and it will only hurt him more. If she really care about him, she should have a talk with him tell him that it will never happen between them. She needs to be clear with him. She needs to tell him to get out and make new friends instead of being in her ass all the time.

Also Chase is going to collage now. He does not need a tutor anymore. He needs to grow up. He doesn't need Lila to baby him all the time. And Lila should know that. I know that Lila cares about Chase, but she needs to understand that Chase is not her responsibility. Its nice that she wants to be there for him as a friend. But that's it.  

And I also think that Lila is very judgmental towards Jack. Its not like he doesn't want to be there for his own brother. But someone has to work to pay the bills and eat. He is doing what he can to take care of his brother. Yes he doesn't have a lot of time for Chase. Jack is not superman and he is not perfect. But he is doing what he can to take care of his little brother. And just like he said to Lila. Chase is not the only one who lost his parents. Jack had to do everything on his own for him and his brother. So Lila needs to shut the fuck up and stop being so stubborn and judgmental towards Jack. She needs to stop complaining about him not being there for his little brother. She does not know what he went trough.

To me they both need to stop treating Chase as a child. He is almost 18. They need to sit and talk to him about this situation. And I think that Chase is confusing what he feels for Lila. I think he likes her as a sister and a very close friend. But he thinks he is in love with her.

OMG Chase isn't very happy with his brother right now...and rightfully so. I bet Chase is going to Lila's house. Something is going to happen between those two, I can feel it. Great job! Keep up the good work!

OMG  This is excellent writing.  You truly have a gift and I am in awe.  Please continue.  I look forward to th next installment.

I am soooooo confused. Are they secretly having an affair? And it so, why the angry words? I can't wait to see what happens next so I can get some answers. :)

Wow this seems to be off to a good start! Can't wait for the update!

Me likey!

EXPLOSIVE!!!!

Question: his visit to her seemed sudden, what happened that made him go over?

I'm seriously giving her the side-eye with that last line of her saying "but we can't do this" and why freaking not?  

Good! Jack is an asshole. I don't like the what he said to Lila earlier, and now he can come back like nothing ever happened. He may be hot, but not that hot. Show some restraint Lila and make Jack work for it. Tell his as"s off again and set him straight then, take things to the next level, but not now. He needs to think about what he did and why he always lashes out at Lila. We know why, he likes her. It's plan as day. Great start. I cannot wait for more.

Really good start. Can't wait to see where you're headed.

i lovveee... it please update soon =)

I am loving this story!!!!! 

i can't wait to see how they get together or handle their attraction. 

It seems like they have been in this same situation before. There is too much frustration and passion for this too be their first time in this situation.

Please update again soon!!!!

Oh my god, i love you !!! You better post the 2nd chapter soon or i'm going to busrt crying of frustration or whatever !!!