Title: Chapter 14

Wow! This was intense!   If Lorriane was in love with Joesph, how did she end up having a baby with David? Was it rape?  Did David do it to show Joseph he was in control.

This is all very intriguing.  More please!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 10:12 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Ok this is confusing. So Loraine slept with both Joseph and Daniel?? I really don't know what to think about that woman anymore. I'm confused.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 14

Who was Carol?  Lorraine thinks that Joseph had something to do with der disapperance.  Niall is Joseph's son, but who is Niamh's father?  How did Lorraine and Joseph meet?  How does Daniel have so much power and why hasn't anyone eliminated him yet?  Daniel makes my teeth itch!!!  This is so good!!!



Author's Response:

Carol was Blaise's mother, the one who walked out in an earlier chapter

I don't know if you caught it, but when it was speaking of Daniel cutting off his support for Niamh's hospital treatment, and Lorraine reffered to Niamh as their child.

So Niall's dad=Joseph

And Niamh's= Daniel

And Joseph and Lorraine dated in high school.

 

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 04:09 am



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